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Reviews for Colors

By : Arcueido
  • From ANON - Blackash on July 22, 2007
    I normally one of those people that hate AU stories, but I adore this one! In fact there are a bunch of well written interesting stories around these days. This one is my favorite though. I try to check once a day to see if it's been updated. Keep on writing!
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  • From Selenia on July 19, 2007
    I came to check and yes... I failed to review your story.. So here I am making up for it!
    Since I already gushed at lenght today with you, let me show the point of view of my older sister, who faces the risks of R rated adds on aff and reads Colors at work. And her point of view is divided in three: 1 - she wants more. 2 - she agrees with me. 3 - she is obsseded with your deidara.

    ^_^

    Finally, just want to add that the bathroom stall scene went up to the top three of my favorites on this fic. Not many people can make Sasuke break down in a believable way, and you aced it!
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  • From ANON - milktea on July 19, 2007
    Finally, an author has been chastened. Thank you, MiuMiuRAz. I'm glad that reader had the balls to point out how obnoxious and rude to the AFF community bumping stories is. Most readers ignore when writers 're-edit,' but yeah--it's annoying.

    That said, don't dwell and depress on it too much... you're not the first and you won't be the last whose done this.

    Take as much time as you need off as there is no point of writing when you feel crappy and you're under no obligation to update. You can also use your away time to revise what you're not satisfied with and do a single re-edit/chapter update when you're ready to post again. AFF will be around when you get back. Good luck, and thanks for your understanding and honesty. Much respect for your admission and decision.

    About your story, it started off great although the ItaSasu stuff is a bit silly. To be honest, it's becoming rather incongruous and your earlier character/story development is being replaced by stock and cliche. You had a particularly well developed/developing moment when Sasuke accuses Naruto of sleeping his way to success, when that is in fact Sasuke's situation. That could have been one of the key threads to weave a complex and mature story around, but you just left it to fray and opted for the Naruto and Sasuke face all odds (or just eeeeeevil Itachi) to be together because for the sake of *cues music* true love... yadda yadda. It's too bad really, but it's still a fun read.

    I didn't want to review because I didn't want to criticize your efforts. While--unlike Ras22's beyond exceptional 'Talk to Me' or the under appreciated Tsuki no Kitsune's 'Bounce Me Back'--I'm not holding my breath waiting for updates, when you do update I *do* read your story--meaning that I still find it enjoyable and worth the read. The last thing I wanted to do is discourage you and have you stop updating because of negative feedback.

    I don't know which is more unfair, silently following a work all the while knowing authors thrive on feedback, or criticizing and discouraging them for the sake of... what?!

    Thanks for sharing your story, and I hope you can forgive my prior silence and my present frankness... I sincerely wish you the best for your story, and I hope that after the bumping fiasco you're still able to have fun with it... because in the grand scheme of things that's all that matters.

    cheers.
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  • From ANON - Korin on July 19, 2007
    NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
    I've been reading the story since 12:00am to 2:00am and just when I think finally they got their chace is the last update (crying :( ) please update soon!!
    I love the story you are now one of my favorite writers...
    I don’t look this site two often because some stories are full of naughty stuff you know is to graphic and even do the site obviously imply heavy content I don't like to read senseless smut, I like to read story’s like this one where the relation ship of the characters develop slowly making the naughty stuff been portrayed with cuteness for example GaaraSai lovely.
    Except the parts with Itashi bastard! I wanted to kick his behind poor Sasuke You make me hate him in this sotory :) but even then it make and important part of the plot (I really think you did a great job)so I didnt mind reeding them.

    I forgot to tell you I laugh so hard when Neji told Naruto not to you know in the shower all the part since he woke up to Shika picking up Neji I loved. (actually I like the whole story but that part funny)
    An a question:
    Is Deidara Jane Doe???
    Well hope to read more soon!!

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  • From Arcueido on July 18, 2007
    Dear all,

    As a result of the situation as highlighted in the earlier post, there will be no updates for this weekend. At the moment my depression meter has dipped and I feel fucking guilty. I know some have pointed out that I had been merely editing, but I knew edits would make the top of the list and although I had unintentionally submerged myself in it, the bottom line is I knew.

    Apologies for it and I will update further when my mind is more sober about the issue.
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  • From Arcueido on July 18, 2007
    Hi,

    Beg to differ on the above statement. I wasn't pimping it but rather making several word edits. Also, do correct me if I'm wrong but edits get reflected as "Edited" and additional chapters go under "Updated". However, sorry if it seemed that way but I tend to reread my stories and like to make sure everything is as good as it can get. Also, it was a good thing I was doing a chapter by chapter edit. I found a missing chunk in Chap 13's bottom half which I had failed to copy over from my own document.

    If I've offended anyone by my actions I apologize. In future I will try my best to make as few mistakes as possible on my word document before posting it in.

    I suppose I could've chosen to not occupy the last four hours reading each chapter word-for-word and editing but I have very limited time to write in a day and today I had ample to spare (a very rare occurence).

    Once again, I'm sorry.


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  • From ANON - MiuMiuRAz on July 18, 2007
    STOP PIMPING YOUR OWN STORY IT GETS ANNOYING! If it's worth reading people will read it even if it isn't on the top of the list all the time.
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  • From ANON - amberblood on July 17, 2007
    choked up engines? they are not! *sobs and waits not-so-quietly for the next chapter*
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  • From Kerrisa on July 16, 2007
    Yay for the easily manipulated male pride!! *dances* Now maybe we can get more Naruto-Sasuke lovin!! Yay!!!! *spins* Oh.. i hope things dont go downhill for the blond too bad now that Hinata's asked the question >_< Great update! Can't wait for more =D
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2007
    ooooooooo! nice
    update!
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  • From Dream2010 on July 15, 2007
    So glad you can update fast! No serious action here but the flow is nice, setting up something for next chapter which is more Sasu Naru. Maybe Itachi will just show up. =D
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  • From ANON - amberblood on July 15, 2007
    I am obsessivly in love with this story...I think I might go into withdrawals if it isn't updated...and it might kill me if it dies here, only partially finished!
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  • From ANON - riddlestar on July 15, 2007
    jst found this story. loved it. am looking forward to more. keep updating, you have an eager fan here, lol.
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  • From ANON - Rebellion2Fate on July 13, 2007
    Well, I'm thouroughly depressed now! I just read this all in one sitting and was so mad when I finally caught up with you!! There's no more?? Anyways, great story. I absolutely love it. Sasuke and Naruto's interaction is just too perfect, and the last chapter made me all warm inside. I can't wait for the next update!!

    R2F
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  • From Kerrisa on July 12, 2007
    Kisses are awesome so keep them coming! Darn you!! You choked me up a bit with the bathroom scene =( But it was masterfully written. I really really love ur fic, keep up the fantabulous work =) Your readers Love YOU!!!! *glomp*
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