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By : poppyseed
  • From emochickenbutt on February 02, 2009
    i really like your story. i thought the plot would be cliche, but it is very well done. i also like how the characters are- they may not be exactly how they are in the anime/manga, but they are still believable. and then even while they're talking about incestual rape, you slip in these cute little things like naruto's lips being soft. i usually stop reading stories when there are rape scenes, but you kept it bearable so good job with that. i hope this story is your top priority! :)
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  • From MiraMira on August 20, 2008
    What happened to this story? TT-TT It died~~ *sobs while begging for an update*
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  • From morbiDreamscape on October 22, 2007
    The plot is awesome! ^__^ Switching bodies seems to be quite an eye-opener in both of their cases... It'd be hard for them to hate each other after this. :P I can't wait to read more!
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  • From Qiana on July 04, 2007
    This is good update soon
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  • From LifeonHiatus on June 07, 2007
    awesome story. i enjoy the blend of plot with humor. in this particular type of story it is very important the characters stay in character as much as they can, and you're doing just that, perfectly! ^^ interesting turn of events in the recent chapter. its nice that the plot could be so much deeper. again, great job. i can hardly wait for more. :-)
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  • From on June 07, 2007
    Oh my...I've seen the body switch fics before, but I haven't personally read one that I was happy with. This I am happy with. I'm still rolling it around in my head why. Perhaps it's partially because you take in the learned responses of the boys' bodies. I appreciated how Naruto noticed how tense Sasuke's body is, that Sasuke noticed how relaxed Naruto's is and that Sasuke can't control the vocal cues and facial expressions of Naruto's body like he can of his own. I also liked how detached the rape scene was. The way Naruto reacted--well, at first I wasn't sure I was okay with it, but I've been thinking about it, and, well, Naruto kind of reacted like he didn't believe it was happening and kind of like *it wasn't happening to his body* (which technically, it wasn't). The detachedness kind of works anyway. I do feel like some sort of after effect emotional rush is missing. I think Naruto should be reacting with a little more gusto and nervous energy than he has so far.

    The intro of Gaara--Oh goodness that's complicated. I don't think I would try it just cuz' it adds so many factors. Does Gaara understand what they mean by switching bodies? Because Sasuke's voice would be saying what Naruto said and Sasuke's voice would be saying what Naruto said, would Gaara think that "Sasuke" (actually Naruto) was getting raped by "Naruto's" brother? (actually Sasuke, thus actually Itachi, but maybe Gaara would be thinking "I didn't know Naruto had a brother..."). Would Gaara be mad at "Sasuke" for taking off "Naruto's" shirt? And all of it ultimately brings up the question, how did the body swap happen in the first place?

    Though...complicated or not, it does advance the plot and adds another element. I do really like this story. I encourage you to keep going with it. I'd love to see a body switch fic that actually works.
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on June 07, 2007
    aww, I'm sad that Itachi rapes Sasuke, but that's okay. I like this story, and so I'm excited about what will happen next!!
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  • From CianisDeRolionus on June 06, 2007
    Pretty good so far... I'd like to see how it plays out...
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  • From VRon8899 on June 05, 2007
    oooooooooooooh! Please update, this sounds very interesting!! ^_^;
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  • From ursweetheartless on June 04, 2007
    AAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!! i have to say i always enjoy body-switch stories, when they're well written which this one is. this is an AU correct? i havent seen any indications of ninjas and the cannon is a little skewed, but thats prefectly normal if it is an au. anyways, nicely written, well developed, good characterization.

    and is that itachi i see there? i hope my favorite little sociopath does something horribly inappropriate to naruto-who-is-sasuke! teehee, btw, does sasuke have a special little naruto shrine in his closet or something? oooo, or maybe a shrine to itachi??!!??!?! teehee this is highly amusing, i hope we see more soon!

    may your muses be kind and your updates be quick!!! ^.^
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  • From Selenia on June 04, 2007
    No suggestions from here XD. I like to let a story flow as the author sees fit, and yours is flowing nicely for a first chapter! Good writing, nice plot (XPP), all in all something I'll be checking for updates. Now I have a question... at the rate things are going, Kiba's gonna find out stuff soon, right? Cause there were a lot of hints ^_^. either that, or he'll start thinking Naruto and Sasuke are an item. *snort*
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  • From emp78 on June 04, 2007
    Good start. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on June 04, 2007
    So funny! I really like this. and I really love your pairings. There's Uchihacest and Ita/Naru and Sasu/Naru? Oh, I can't wait!!!
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  • From ladygizarme on June 04, 2007
    omfg i'm freakin crackin' up! this is a great start, soooo many great parts in it already. naruto's discovery of cute, pink nipples instead of his "manly brown" ones.. and the "foreign penis" lmao! also, the lunch part with naruto forgetting he's "sasuke" and then he and sasuke both badmouthing "themselves" lmfao, greatness!!

    i love in fics when they both start to learn what the other's life is REALLY like, and this is taking it to a whole other level, and i love it even more!! and judging from the sense of foreboding concerning sasuke not wanting naruto to go to his house, naruto not thinking about itachi, and the pairings listed, i can't WAIT to see what will happen next chapter as well!!

    ~ lg
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  • From serenagold on June 04, 2007
    Oh yeah. I just had ta review again just to say that this line: “Oh no, where have my manly brown nipples gone!” is just the funniest most random thing ever!

    Its the kind of line you know you'd quote every second of the day, where this some body switching movie on the big screen. As an aspiring filmmaker, if I ever do some cheesy body switching comedy... can I steal that?? Its just so wrong on so many levels that its just so right.
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