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Reviews for Sanctuary

By : AkashaEmily
  • From btTara on August 04, 2007
    Chapter 1 was so sad! I would be crying right now! My eyes were watering, but I didn't want to look stupid if my family walked in on me so I took my eyes off the fanfic for some short breaks and went back to reading it. It's so lovely. *eyes are starting to water again* Poor Naruto! Everyone's being mean to him but his enemies (now that's ironic!)
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  • From pantherrose on July 17, 2007
    I was so happy to see that you updated! This fic is really interesting. Goodness, I'm actually starting to love those two kidnappers. XD
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on July 14, 2007
    It's me again. I take back my previous words, since your story needs more appreciation.

    I used to cry whenever I read very sad fics, such as deathfics or the like. Although I don't do it anymore, it took a while for me to fully understand this story and imagine myself being in Naruto's place. Since English isn't my native language, I have to print it out and re-read it many times. (Not all fics deserves this special "treatment" though :)

    After considerable time used for reading and searching out on some of the facts, I find this story really interesting; sad it nearly bring me to tears, hilarious it made me laugh, and I couldn't help but to adore Naruto, Itachi and Kisame. Itachi and Kisame aren't my favourite character - mine is Naruto anyway - but you have shown their softer side despite the fact that they are Akatsuki, despite the fact that they merely wanted Kyuubi.

    I'm also fascinated by these points you mentioned in the story:

    1. "...the ability to bear children only among the many Naruto had planned to use to help Sasuke restart his clan."
    2. "If Naruto could carry a baby to term and still have a penis then he could surely pull off the act of pretending to be a girl."

    I had never, ever noticed that Kyuubi / Kitsune has the ability to change gender regardless of whatever gender they may have. Also, become a woman and actually give birth. Only when you mentioned them, and I searched in the Net for possible reasons, it was true. Yeah, Naruto could be a woman, it amazed me a lot.

    And now I have a distant imagery of Naruto being one of the candidates to be Sasuke's future wife (laughs).

    Hating Konoha now (I was surprised on how you described the people there, hating him, saying sarcastic words and such it hurts me too), it's refreshing to see Naruto actually being welcomed by people who didn't know him - although as a girl - and I was glad for him.

    But I can't help wondering if Naruto really, actually wanted to leave Konoha and follow Kisame and Itachi back to Akatsuki.

    To tell you the truth, I didn't cry reading this story, but I did cry when I recalled it on the bed before I sleep. It was a great story, keep it up, and I hope to read the new chapter whenever I have the time. :)
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  • From ANON - Luna_Meow on July 14, 2007
    This is a really cute story :D An angst-ridden Naruto found comfort in Itachi and Kisame's hands (although they're enemies... or so it's said), lovely! I have been liking Naruto for his personality and this is just love~ Although I can't help but wonder how does Sasuke actually feel towards Naruto, does he really despise Naruto? Since Naruto can't help but think Sasuke hates him for apparently no reason (just because of Sakura's thoughts).

    I'm not good in writing reviews, but I love this story, so please keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - kedra on July 11, 2007
    Wow! I really love your works. I can't stop crying from reading just the first chapter. You really have a way of wringing out emotions out of your characters. And when I checked your profile and saw that you're also writing Banks of the River Styx I realized why your writing's so familiar. I can't wait for the next update on both of your stories. And even though I'm tired of reading fics where one character becomes an animal, I'll give your other one a go too. Good luck with your endeavors and hope you update soon. :j
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  • From ANON - zannie on July 11, 2007
    awwww cute. Naruto really needs to realize that the world is a bigger place. I kinda hope that he ends up with Itachi though. I think Itachi was probably sick of the way people treated him back home so they have somehing in common. If Naruto can change his features, can he change his gender as well? That would be cool if he could change genders at will. I think foxes in japanese legends can do that as well, so maybe kyubbi can? Anyways, keep updating, I love this story.
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on July 11, 2007
    wow, this story is showing a lot of forethought in it's format. i really appreciate the depth and range of emotions that the characters express, and your description of them. it adds a lot of texture to a story. i really enjoyed the first four chapters. i look forward to seeing what you do with the rest of the story.
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  • From ANON - Ilene on July 10, 2007
    I'm sooooooooooo glad u continued this story, UR STORY'S MY ABSOLYTE FAV! Pleze don't pair him with sasuke, I'd rather he ended up with Kisame or Itachi, or mebbe Kyuubi (once he's realeased), in my opinion Sasuke doesn't deserve naruto, but that's just my feeble opinion ^_^
    UPDATE SOON ONEGAI! *gives u chocolate*
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 10, 2007
    EEEEEEEEEEEP!!!! You updated!!! Sorry I couldnLt have left a reveiw when the fic did come out. I was out *-* SHOPPING!! And what a coincidence, Naruto goes out shopping too! I felt so relieved when I found out that Naruto could get pregnant...I guess itLs just because I love MPreg so much XD

    Praise for such a wonderful experience with death. Naruto was on the verge of death, no? Either way, praise for that wonderful experience at the begining of the chapter! I loved it every word of it!! You made it seem as though youLve actually been there and as if you already know what happens when death knocks on you door...that, though, kind of scares me o,o .

    Shijun! Contester! Pregunta! „r„€„„‚„€„ƒ! QUESTION!!! You made Sameheden (forgot how itLs spelled) into a living thinking object? ThatLs really ineresting...I donLt think ILve ever read a fic where Sameheden is a living thinking object...thatLs so cool!! Next question... is that KisameLs really last name or did you make it up??

    -Damp *Keep up the awesome work!!*
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  • From ANON - Jutsu Dream on July 10, 2007
    Yay!! There's more. I just love Naruto!! He's so cute, looking after Kisame and Itachi like that. Naruto's finally realizing that there is more to life than hate and pain, but he's so very scared because that's all he know and all he expects. I hope before he reaches aki(red cloud people) he realises he wants to live.
    Bye bye!!
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  • From anapana83 on July 09, 2007
    Very interesting development. And Samheda did not hurt Naruto. If he's taking care of the owner then i would hope he wouldn't. I hope Naruto gains back some confidence. It's very unusual how his captors are turning out to be his caretakers as well. Very intriguing. Great chap. Update soon!
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  • From emp78 on July 09, 2007
    Talk about culture shock! Poor Naruto!
    What're Itachi and Kisame going to say when they see the supplies?
    Good job, and can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on July 09, 2007
    Wait--Jiraiya poured poison into Naruto's ears...THAT SICK BASTARD!

    *packs up several painful torture devises* JIRAIYA! Your heartless corpse is mine!

    PS Great chapter! UPDATE SOON!

    *runs off to find and slowly torment Jiraiya*
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  • From ANON - Aice on July 09, 2007
    Really getting away from Konoha is good for Naruto.
    The world is not Konoha...there are sooo many thingy out there.
    I wished he'd left Konoha earlier.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on July 09, 2007
    wow. he's sure having a hell of a day, isn't he. i would sure like to know whats happening in the village now. and i really want to smack jiraiya for his treatment of the blond. anyway, i look foward to your next update.
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