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Reviews for Sanctuary

By : AkashaEmily
  • From NinjaToadsAteMyBaby on August 06, 2007
    I love this fic and it inspired a fanart that I just posted on deviantart.com
    I hope you'll take a looksie and if you don't want to have any fanart done of your fic just say so and I'll take it down. The URL for my deviantart profile is http://ninjatoadsatemybaby.deviantart.com I've titled the picture Sanctuary.
    Now on to the review. This chapter gave me chills and I cried for Naruto. I can't wait for the next chapter, I know it'll be wonderful.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 06, 2007
    goddamn! that sakura is one psycho bitch and i want to see her suffer. gotta love this story. i'm so looking foward to your next update. i have to see if kyuubi gets to handle that bitch. sorry for all the cussin' but you have no idea how heated i am right now.
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  • From ANON - jadetiger on August 05, 2007
    I simply love this fic but I have some questions. What exactly happened to Naruto when Kana grabbed his shoulder? Was he actually attacked? Or was his panic just taking over him? And if he was attacked in the street you said not 4 paragraph before that there was “night life traffic “ so there were others around that would have saw/heard them.

    Then there is this bit with Naruto’s odd chakra throwing off Kana’s hand and then Naruto runs off into the wood when he’s he supposedly not 10 feet from then inn.(ya I know he’s scared and heading to some place he feels safe) but I’m wondering it doesn’t detail why his outfit was torn, unless that happened because of the odd chakra? If so it wasn’t explained there enough for my sleep mind to understand.. or maybe I just need to re-read it when I’m awake? Lol reading at 1am isn’t always a good idea for me!

    Anyhow I know your working and I know how hard it is to have a former wild cat for a pet! Our cat Ruby wouldn’t talk when we first got her and after she got use to us she wouldn’t shut up for hours!! But she is really still a wild cat. She won’t come in the house in the summer at all. Not unless its pissing down rain. And in winter we can’t get her outside with threats of bodily harm.

    Lol good luck and update again soon, I really like this fic!

    Though I would have preferred Naruto to stay with Itachi and Kisame a while longer before running to Sasuke. They hardly spent any time together because Naruto was out of it for 90% of the time!

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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 05, 2007
    I didn't know that you wrote 'Banks of the River Sticks' too. Well, now I have 2 stories to look forward to from you.

    ja ne
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  • From ANON - lonelylulaby on August 05, 2007
    Man I really love this story. I want to know what Kanna's chakra was doing in Naruto's body. Also what is the other thing that demons are good at besides vengeance. Sakura is BITCH that needs to be ran over. Hope that Naruto will be all right. Kyuubi in control of Naruto's body is kinda disturbing also her despising the Uchiha is understandable, Naruto's feelings for him almost got her killed. I liked the ability of Naruto's to mold his facial features.

    ja ne till next time and keep up the good work.
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  • From spoon10488 on August 05, 2007
    that was a interesting turn. I didn't see that coming. So is this a sasu/naru?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on August 05, 2007
    You know I had forgotten about this fic but now I found it and I love it! My favorite part is still the chapter where kisame was playing the protector to a Lady Naruto I found that so sweet :D This is getting really good but then Sakura had to come in and ugh! Wish Sasuke had slit her throat but the blood would be a bitch to clean up. I jsut hope she suffers soon. When he found the blood I was curious but I knew it was our dear little kit! I hope that pink lut suffers soon and I hope Naruto finds someone to Love him JSUT HIM jsut for being him. Right now I'm hoping its Kisame or Itachi (or both). Sasuke doesn't deserve anything except to die aone. Okay I better stop I love this story and I am excited to read the next chapter. Bye and I'm so glad I found it again!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2007
    goodie good good, I love sakura bashing.
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on August 05, 2007
    ...I cant believe how incredibly well written this story is. It is incredibly heart wrenching. I think i read among there somewhere that you only update this when your bored? That kinda sucks for me lol, cos i have to wait for boredom to kick in to get another update on this fic. However, considering the content and how juicily long your chapters are, I patiently await your next update...
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  • From ANON - Damp on August 05, 2007
    Believe it or not, I´m in the hospital right now *nothing major no need to fret* and as I was looking for stories in AFF.net (my bro brought his laptop), my heart moniter really did stop beating for a few seconds when I saw that you had updated. I know! That´s how much I love this story! ^^ And I can´t wait for the next installment!

    Now, let´s see, what should I talk about, concerning this story that is...I know!
    Eep! The ´Naruto Visits Sasuke´ scene.

    Was Naruto not aware that he was still a girl? Which was why Sasuke kept telling him to leave, and was the reason why Sasuke had no patience for him?? Because he was a she when he ´visited´ him? POOR NARUTO! You must be having an extremely sucky day when you wrote this!

    Next topic: The ´Kyuubi´s Chakra Now Is a Seperate Being!´

    O.O Holy shit, that is a very scary thought. A very much liked that thought, although at the same time it scared the hell out of me. So, what is it with that chakra now, is it going to also become a type main character when the times (Like the Kana touching Naruto scene) hapen? Or is it going to become a type of main character, or a little side character?

    Next Topic: -_- Sakura -_- You make her sound like such a bitch.

    I don´t think I´m even going to comment on her...except ask you if you hate her ´cause the way your making her sound and act...Urge to kill...rising.

    Next Topic: ´Kuubi Having Sex With Sasuke´

    What. The. Fuck. ...I can´t believe Kyuubi got to touch Sasuke before Naruto... decho(although) You did that you were only going to give subtle signs of Yaoi....Kyuubi you bitch. I love you and all, but even I have limits!!

    Next Topic: The whole Chapter in General

    I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN´T FOR THE NEXT INSTALLMENT!!!! >.<

    -Damp *Nombre, si que me eche una misa Damn, I wrote a lot o.o *
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  • From blacksuede on August 04, 2007
    darn it .. u had me crying while reading the 1st chapter! And a Kisame's perspective was refreshing as well as him dressing up naruto as a girl was amusing .. then there's itachi - does he have a chance with Naruto?? I'm incline to think that maybe Kyuubi is more accepting of him.*ItaNaru fangirl squeal!*

    ah sakura, what a vindictive conniving bitch - i actually like her in the cannon after the 3 yrs time skip
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  • From btTara on August 04, 2007
    Mah, I've always dislike Sakura, but really that doesn't mean I like how she is in this fanfic. I'll be honest I don't like this chapter. chapter 5 that is.
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  • From btTara on August 04, 2007
    Man you just know how to make shopping so sad. . . . .
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  • From btTara on August 04, 2007
    Ha, ha, ha, if I didn't know Kisame was doing this because he wouldn't lose his job then I'd say he was being possessive. In a parenthood like sense.
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  • From btTara on August 04, 2007
    errrrr. Chapter 2 review. I like Parent Kisame! It's funny and amusing how he knowingly dresses Naruto up. Going to read the next chapter now.
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