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Reviews for Sanctuary

By : AkashaEmily
  • From MasterofPie on August 29, 2007
    I love your Kisame!!
    "Kisame had so not just thought the word ‘yummy.’ He had not and anyone who said different would be fed to Samheda. In. Pieces"
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  • From MasterofPie on August 29, 2007
    oh my god you almost made me cry !!
    But that is besides that point - it was lovely and beautiful and poor naruto
    I am happy to see it wasn't a one shot ... onto the next chapter
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  • From yeagerbomb on August 14, 2007
    ahhhh! nuuuuuu!! *sigh* right up until the end-ish part, when kyuubi was seducing sasuke, i was following just fine. the only thing i don't get is how this will get naruto over sasuke. but whatever. i hope to see more of this.~
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  • From Kaishiou on August 12, 2007
    oh no...i wish there was a next button now for me to click on now. this has gotten very interesting from the last i read. please continue!
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  • From ANON - SomePyro on August 10, 2007
    Oooo, this story is so well written! The way you made it, it just sort of flows when you read it, it's very nice. Though it may or may not be meant in such a way the sort of KisaNaru hints interested me a lot. I love reading odd pairing, though it's really hard to find them well written, but I really enjoyed reading that part of your story.
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  • From ANON - seijin on August 10, 2007
    Ok, never mind about that pregnant part, I just read your response. Still, the timeline is still confusing. Or it could just be me being impatient to read the rest of the story... =p

    ... Have a nice day!
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  • From Dramastarelf on August 10, 2007
    well I'm enjoying the story, it made me cry a lot. poor naruto. I wanted him to have a happy life.
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  • From ANON - seijin on August 10, 2007
    I cannot figure out your timeline. Mainly because 'Naruto'/'Kyuubi' suddenly appeared infront of Sasuke. Is this a flashback or is it happening in real time? It was mentioned that Naruto was pregnant before, so did it reach full conception? If so what happened to the kids? I'm confuuused! Just the timeline. Please clear up the timeline for me? Pretty please?
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  • From spoon10488 on August 09, 2007
    I hope it an ita/naru fic
    =)
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  • From anapana83 on August 09, 2007
    Wow!! You weren't kidding when you said this story would take some twists! I wasn't excpecting that last part of the chap. It was hot. Sakura shoulda fallen from her perch lol. I hope she gets what she deserves. If she only knew who her new rival was. Girl doesn't know what she's messing with. I wonder what Sasuke's reaction is gonna be in the next chap. He can't be stupid enough to let our Naruto go again. Pls pls update soon!
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  • From anapana83 on August 09, 2007
    Wow!! You weren't kidding when you said this story would take some twists! I wasn't excpecting that last part of the chap. It was hot. Sakura shoulda fallen from her perch lol. I hope she gets what she deserves. If she only knew who her new rival was. Girl doesn't know what she's messing with. I wonder what Sasuke's reaction is gonna be in the next chap. He can't be stupid enough to let our Naruto go again. Pls pls update soon!
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  • From Kingcobra on August 09, 2007
    Yeah, you're doing fine. I'm still liking it. :)

    And Sasuke with Naruto was pretty hot.

    Sakura, though... what a bitch.

    Write the next chapter soon.
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  • From ANON - Kaze on August 09, 2007
    This is a really good story., update soon!! =) Btw i offically HATE Sakura.. XD
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  • From ANON - Anaheyla on August 09, 2007
    OMG! Cliffhanger!?!? GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!

    Can't wait for you to continue. And if you don't *shakes fist in an angry manner*
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  • From ANON - Hitomi_No_Ryu on August 09, 2007
    Oh...that was a metaphor. *looks at my captured and tortured Jiraiya...then kicks him* Well--HE MADE NARUTO CRY!

    Anyway this chapter is really confusing me. How did Naruto get all the way back to Konoha in one night (Twenty miles is a long run for one night)? The restaurant scene was unnecessary...AND QUITE FRANKLY I DON'T GIVE A DAMN ABOUT AKIRA!! Kyuubi's revenge for Naruto makes no sense either. How does having sex with Sasuke and bearing a child got to do with revenge? AND WHERE THE HELL ARE ITACHI AND KISAME?

    I DON'T UNDERSTAND! I think you should re-do the entire chapter. Make Sasuke come to Naruto, not Naruto come to Sasuke!! Screw the restaurant/alley scene and send Naruto straight to the hotel for a "we were worried don't ever do that again" moment with Itachi and Kisame. That would be much better.

    UPDATE SOON!
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