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From PieldeLava on October 01, 2007
Poor Naruto. Great fic. I really enjoy reading it. Look forward to the next chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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From ANON - Jadetiger on September 30, 2007
Oh I�m so glad you updated!

Let me see.. what I think is gonna happen next�.

Despite what�s happening in most peoples mind about Saukes seed getting Naruto knocked up because of Sakura�s knife to the gut most likely destroyed the container thing the fox stored it in. I see it most likely either being lot in the blood stream or leaking out into the intestines. I also don�t think being that injured Naruto would even be able to conceive a baby.

I�m not 100% sure about the fox but for some reason I see the fox not completely disappearing but rather dissolving her sprit form and spreading herself (and healing abilities) threw out Naruto�s body to heal and save him.. I don�t think she�s gone forever but it may be a while before she can completely reform herself and be able to talk to Naruto face to face again.. I also see things throwing a glitch in the Akatsukis plan, because this act might render the fox as �dead� or make them think that it died to save its host.

Now as for naruto�s �reasons to live.� Hehehehe �. Well look there! Itachi Uchihas kinda cute! And single! And LOOK! Kisames so kind! Hmm thresome?

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From lexjamandme on September 30, 2007
Hmmm... excellent update. I think we all can agree that Sakura is a psycho and Naruto needs to stay the hell away from Konoha. I love Sasuke as much as the next girl and normally, I'm not a big fan of Itachi/Naruto, but in this case, it seems less troublesome to stick with the elder Uchiha. What can Sasuke possibly do, EVER, to make anything better for our poor, poor, poor abused in SO MANY WAYS Naruto??
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From DeviousLilDevil on September 30, 2007
damn! that's some hell of a day,. this fic is so awesome! looking foward to the next update.
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From ANON - Damp on September 29, 2007
*Dabbing at her eyes.*

I'd already read this story the moment you updated it, but I didn't have a chance to reveiw. SO HERE IT IS!!!

God knows I was BALLING when I read the scene with Naruto asking Itachi if he could sleep through 'it'. At first I didn't understand what Naruto meant by 'it'. But after rereading it, I got the picture, and it was a pretty sad one ;-;. I don't know why, but I was just swelling with pride and joy that Itachi kept shaking Naruto and calling his name, trying to wake him up from whatever dream he was in.

I'm falling very hard and fast for Kyuubi. I'm really happy about the whole "you-decide-what-gender-Kyuubi-is" thing. It is that way right?? Personally, I really don't care what gender Kyuubi is, but because she just reminds me so much of a mother, I think Kyuubi's going to be a girl. In my opinion. I mean, she's BEING there for Naruto when no one else will. Not that anyone else will, or have been there when most needed.

*cough*Iruka, you BITCH!!*cough*Tsunade get your head out of your ass!*cough*

I didn't think Sakura could be that barbaric, I honestly thought she'd go with slow, calculated torture. Which she did, to an extent, but she basically BUTCHERED poor little Naruto. I also didn't think ANYONE could make hate sound so ALIVE in the fic. It was almost as if I was THERE, inside Sakura (which tecnically I was). I was THIS close to just going behind my big swirly chair, and reading the fic that way. But I didn't XDDD.

I just feel so bad for Naruto, I mean, he's really the victim in all of this. He's only the container for crying out loud! Yet he's going through SO much, it pains me so. I don't know how you're able to think and write all of this, it's so sad and scary (when you think about it.). I almost can't bear it, and it's not even real nor am I the one going through it, but because you have such talent, I feel as though I am!!! I don't know how much more Naruto can take before he just collapses! He's got so much in him, to even be able to get up in the morning!! I'm just in awe.

When I read the part where Naruto was raped by Jairya, I just about jumped my computer moniter ._. So deep was my hate and so deep was my imagination, I felt as though it was actually happening right in front of me!! And thank God I didn't break my moniter!!! *laughs*

-Damp *Can I just jump into the story and kill all of the bad characters???*
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From anapana83 on September 28, 2007
OMG an update! I was waiting for this! Wow, poor Naruto. I gotta say i feel terrible for him. Like seriously. At the same time, the fact that Itachi and Kisame are taking care of him is so touching. Mixed feelings. That Sakura. You really made me hate her here LOL. Nice going. Great chap. Update soon!
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From LadyLaran on September 28, 2007
I'm hoping you're planning on an Itachi/Naru pairing on this. I could STRANGLE Sasuke for letting himself get into that fix. This was the first time I've seen this fic and was bawling by the end of chapter one. Poor Naruto!!! Please update when you can and if you have a mailing list, add me to it please!
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From serenagold on September 28, 2007
Wow, what a great chapter. So much going on and that battle between Sakura and Kyuubi-she-Naruto was freaking awesome. One of the best fight scenes I've read on this site.

I wonder if Naruto is going to come out and reveal the sex with Sasuke part (if he even remembers or convinces himself it wasn't a dream) to counter the rape suspicisions... or heck, I just can't wait until he has the full startling realization that he's swapped genders. >:)

Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter. ^^
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From leanne on September 28, 2007
I am seriously hoping that all Naruto's pain is caused by a fuck up jutsu that Jaraiya did by accident or purposely in order to strengthen Naruto from emotional pain or something of the like. and I really hope his skewered senses and what he had over heard from Iruka really wasn't Iruka saying those awful things to him.

This story has Naruto pretty much without any friends and I know he has friends, that Iruka loves him you know and other people love and care for Naruto. As for Sakura, that bitch just needs to die, she's insanely crazy and rude and heartless in this story and all I want is for Sasuke to kill her infront of Naruto or something to that point or maybe beat the shit out of Sakura in front of Naruto in order to show Sakura he doesn't love her and never will, that he now lives solely for Naruto (yeah I know a bit to romantic for this story I guess...:(.) but something to get her crazy ass to understand she doesn't stand a chance with Sasuke and that he likes Naruto.

Your story is intense and mind blowing and I really hope to see a new chapter soon. peace out.

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From tenshiofdoom on September 28, 2007
Wow, just wow. It's so powerfully sad. You made me cry at some parts. I feel so much for Naruto, he can never catch a break can he? And I love how Itachi and Kisame are beginning to care for him. It's so sweet.
Anyway I cannot wait for another chapter, I look foward to it! Amazing job.
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From MichiyoInue on September 28, 2007
that was so amazing, oh my god, I have been reading this for like four hours straight now, its 2 am and im baffled... I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! update soon plz!

dace
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From btTara on September 27, 2007
How about Sasuke finding out that Naruto and Itachi got married! XD
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From Rosebud on September 27, 2007
Wow, after the last chapter, I was really wondering where you were going to take this... but wow, with this chapter you just pulled me right back in and omg, I loved it. I can't wait to read the part and I hope that you'll update soon. I'm glad that you got your muse back! ^^ Keep up the awesome work, this story is one of my favorites! ^^
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From Zrina on September 27, 2007
wonderful chapter! The emotions are so raw!! I can't help but hope Sakura doesn't see a medic-nin in time to save her hand! Will be waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
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From MasterofPie on August 29, 2007
I still love Kisame! And the whole bar scene was great (okay not really a bar scene - pub thingy)
They really do care about Naruto ... kind of ... too bad they still want to take Kyuubi out of him ... i hope they change their minds
And shabam! To the council and messing around in Naruto's life - they desire not to know
And poor stupid Sasuke *tisk tisk*
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