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Reviews for Sanctuary

By : AkashaEmily

From ANON - nlb on February 18, 2008
It was very interesting to get Sasuke's sight on the situation. Though I wonder why he isn't fighting the councils delusions of grandeur, since I can't imagine the Uchiha clan(or any other clan)to allow strangers to choose their wives/husbands for them or pressure them into procreation. Konoha would be deserted faster than it takes to count to three(...or the council members assasinated).
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From ANON - nlb on February 18, 2008
Kisame is great. This is one of the very few stories where he actually has a personality and his helplessness regarding Naruto is very endearing.
His thankfulness about always practicing safer sex was hilarious.
Great chapter.
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From ANON - nlb on February 18, 2008
Why do I always stumble upon beautifully written depressive stories when I am least likely to be able to cope with reading them? *head-desk*
This was so well written I am still crying...the atmosphere, the characters' actions and thoughts...it all fit together.
My favourite scene was when Itachi said to Kisame at the end: "Don't."
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From ultistarmon on February 16, 2008
Yay, you updated!!!! Yippy, skippy, joy, joy!!! I love this story! It comes from an angle that few other stories seem to take. I love it when Itachi and Kisame end up liking Naruto! Hope to see more of this great story soon!
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From Gwyllion on February 16, 2008
Oh my lord...I almost jumped off of my seat when I saw your update! *flails wildly* I LOVE this fic!!! This fic had been reread over and over and I cried on all the angsty parts, especially on the part where Sasuke found Naruto outside his property. Their exchange of words gripped and tore my heart open and I cried....really cried. Oh Sasuke....what did you do to our Kitsune? He's so broken up inside. I was so glad to read again on what had happened to Sakura. That bitch never gives up and deserves the beating she received. Grrrr......I seriously cannot wait to read more from you! You have an amazing writing style which leaves me wanting for more. Hope Naruto will see Sasuke again and that he knows he is loved and needed. Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful piece. :D
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From ANON - Robyn on February 16, 2008
Love your story can't wait to read more.
If you're not a professional writer then you should be. Please quit your day job and write.
I would love to read a happy ending but this is your story so do as you please and I'll still love the story.
Good luck to you. I just want to let you know that your writing is appreciated.
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From spoon10488 on February 15, 2008
I love this story. I glad to see an update. I can't wait for more.
=)
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From ANON - Damp on February 15, 2008
Oh my gosh. Poor Naruto, just when you think he's going to get out of the cooking pan, he falls right into the fire! I feel so bad for you Naruto! Once again! PRAISE for the details you put into the story! I looove the little story about the freaky guy that was obssessed with his 'chosen' girlfriends. That story really sounds very modern. Sounds like something that would happen in this era and time. That's kinda creepy o.O *has scared herself dumb*

The little 'clinic', is what I like to call it, just reminded me soooo much of my clinic here where I live. It also reminded me of the hospital I was at that one time. ANYWAYS, I love the little nurse that was the only on left there after all the other DOCTORS left. She was just soooo funny, I would have laughed had the scene you painted with your words not been so dismal and dark. I loved the nurse because she reminded me so much of the nurse that was attending me at the hospital that one time I reviewed. And I agee with Kisame, if I ever find those doctors they Will. Face. My. Wrath.

The scene with Kisame sticking his arm into the chakra, scared me a lot because the scene from Saw III ( At least I think it's Saw III.) where in order for the lady detective to free herself, she has to stick her hand into the jar of acid *shivers* in order to get the key to free herself from this device that going to tear her into two. . .Yeah, SCARY. But I loooove the fact that he wanted Naruto to get better and when he saw that the kunai wasn't melting along with the other things, that he was willing to stick his hand into the chaos that was the chakra *hearts pop out of eyes*

I couldn't stop laughing (Okay first I held my breath to see what would happen, but then my mind flashed an image of what that scene would look like, and I couldn't help myself.) when at the end of the Naruto's-Life-Is-Hanging-In-The-Balance-AGAIN scene Kisame trips, bringing down the Nurse and Itachi with him.

*get's evil smirk on her face when she rereads the sentence that says that Sakura's ninja life is RUINED FOR GOOD*

I wanted to hug someone SO. BADLY. When I read that little sentence. DIE SAKURA (I love Sakura, but in this case, I'm willing to make an exception.) DAH!!! ACK!!! GAHHHHHHHH!!! Tsunade! If only you would have payed more attention to our little kitsune Naruto sooner, NONE of this drama would have unfolded. But hey, who knows, it proubably would have stilled happend. (There's a reason fan-girls/boys are fearsome people.) And anyways Tsunade, nobody can predict the future. NOT EVEN SHE WHO WRITES IT! :P

Aww Sweetie. I'll wait for the next chapter. But I REFUSE to wait a YEAR for the next update. *Hint Hint Wink Wink* PRAISE TO YOU AND YOUR BRILLIANT MIND! Can't wait for the next installment! Loves and Kisses!

-Damp *I am not implying that it takes you a year to update a story. I'm just mearly saying that a year is my limit.* XD

P.S.
Because of the fact that I am soooo excited that you updated (and greatly saddened by the fact that I just finished the chapter) if there are mistakes in this GODAWFULLY long review, please fogive!

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From ANON - Damp on February 15, 2008
Okay, before I review for reals I have to send you this review of my reaction when I saw that you updated today. . .

EARLIER
Damp sitting in her seat and looking through AFF's latest updates. When she suddenly sees that Sanctuary was updated earlier today. After double-checking, she screams,

"OHMIGOSH!!! SHE UPDATED!! HOLY CRAP!!! CALL THE NEWS CHANNEL!! CALL AN AMBULENCE!! CALL THE POLICE! CALL THE PRESIDENT! CALL THE GODDAMN POPE! CALL SOMEBODY!!"

END OF DRAMATIZATION

-Damp *dies*
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From ANON - jazzy on February 15, 2008
I would love it if you hadn't left it with a cliff hanger but other than that YEAHHH! so good to know you are still writing this story. hope life will work out for you better so that you can spend more time writting ^_^:

I'm selfish I know.
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From lilliandragon on February 15, 2008
wohoo! Another great chapter!
*does happy dance*
Thank you.
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From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on February 15, 2008
that. was. an. isanely. intense. fucking. chapter. and I love you for it!! my god, I couldn't stop reading once I started. damn. I'm still being haunted by the images of kisame's hand in naru's gut. *shudders* looking forward to your next update. happy v-day!
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From ANON - Sancta on February 14, 2008
:passes out: you can be so cruel, and this chapter was a little confusing, but I got to love a bossy nurse bullying Itachi around. And Ki-kun... I officially think he's my favorite in this through - out... and as much as it hurts. I will wait patiently. Oh and can you please, please, let Jirayia slip about raping Naruto so that SOMEONE can FUCK HIM UP :shakes fist: Thank You!
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From ANON - Sancta on February 14, 2008
GOD I love this fanfic. I thought you had disappeared on me for good. But this chapter :melts: You are perfection and Itachi worthy :glomps: I'll beta, I'll be your slave. Just don't deny me anymore. PLEASE
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 14, 2008
Whoa first off, let me say not only am I glad you updated but the drama is seriously building!! I was reading wiht wide-eyes over what was going on in the ER and what you wrote kinda explained a bit what happened before Naru took off running. I just hope he's okay... I still think Sakura should be dead but wiht her now being beyond hideious disfigured I hope she kills herself. And now, well now I have a greater hatred for Konoha. I admit, I am a bit confused about what is going on but this fic, wow! I will continue to read it to the end and jsut take your time. You put a lot of effort in your writing and it shows. I wonder what will happen in the next chapter, especially when Tsunade finds out jsut what happened to that emo prick. Gah only reason Itachi didn't kill that brat was because he wasn't worth it (that's my rage talking right now).
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