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By : AkashaEmily
  • From ANON - sancta on July 06, 2008
    YOU ARE CONFUSING THE FUCK OUT OF ME... HAVEN'T YOU EVER HEARD OF KEEPING SHIT SIMPLE. JESUS. MY HEAD FUCKING HURTS AND I STILL DON'T KNOW WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON. try shorter chapters and less information, hell try keeping to one point and working through it before you plow on with others PLEASE!!!
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  • From spoon10488 on July 06, 2008
    Awesome chapter. I really like that Kisame is becoming closer to Naruto as well as Itachi. The whole Itachi is female thing is just confusing me though. There seems to be a lot of gender switching going on. I am liking the more human looking Kisame though. So I'm guessing that Naruto is prego with Sasuke's baby? Anyway very cool chapter. I can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Damp on July 06, 2008
    Dude! Naruto's pregnant?! How could I not see this coming! Argh! Kyuubi! You didn't do a very good job of protecting Naruto! ARGH! I can't wait for the next installment! I don't want to! Nor do I think I can! *cries* Life's not fair! Not only that, but I'm seriously questioning who the father is! *gasp* Could it be Sasuke? Or, dare I say it, Kana????? (...) Holy crap! The suspense will be the death of me!!!!!!!

    Although it angered it me, I'm really happy that you put in a small snippet of what Jirayia did to Naruto. And I'm so happy that Itachi is planning his demise, 'cause if he isn't, then I am! And I just want to hit Tsunade, she's just... ARGH!!! She's just so useless sometimes! But hopefully, not anymore, with whatever it is she's planning to use Sasuke for... hmmmmm...

    Did you mean to make the sentence structure of this chapter so... Chaotic? I mean, one minute I'm reading about Itachi wondering what's going on, then all of a sudden, you're putting Naruto being strapped down by some doctors. Itachi going on a rampage, the ANBU suddenly making an appearance, not only that, but was the creature that ran alongside Itachi and Kisame Kyuubi? It was just so chaotic, not at all like all the other chapters were structured! Maybe that was why it took you so long to update, because of just how chaotic this chapter is. Not saying anything bad about this chapter, merely asking if you purposely made the beginning of this chapter structured in such a chaotic form to show just how much shit was blowing up? Wow, five other forms of this same chapter? That's a looot of thinking, and a huge sign of the depth this fic really is.

    I don't know if I should've laughed at Sasuke, or cried for Naruto. I was like "Haha! Sasuke! Eat this! Should'a thought that before you left for the pedophile and left Naruto all alone!" and then at the same time, "No! Don't die Naruto! Everything's going to be alright! (not really but...)" Although, I hope Sasuke finds out that Naturo's okay... *sweatdrop* Okay, maybe not okay, okay but well enough. Although, you did bring some sort of comedy relief, when Sasuke fell on his ass. That made me smile.

    I want Kisame! He's just so... He's such a parental figure! I never would've pictured Kisame to be this way, but you made it so that, it just seems natural for Kisame to be such a parental figure! Eeeek! So cute!!! I wanted to hug him (but then thought better of it) so badly! And *gasp* Itachi a girl?????????! And Kisame having a 'normal' skin tone and 'normal' face figure?????????????! What the F happened!!!?????????????

    -Damp *bows down to your awesomeness*
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  • From OrochiGreel on July 06, 2008
    Awww! Kisame cares!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2008
    PLease update this story. It is absolutely the saddest thing I have ver read and I dont want it to end like this, so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 23, 2008
    Okay, quick question [Yes I l rererererererererererereread this story.] so right now now Naruto is 15?

    -Damp

    PS
    lovelysky@sbcglobal.net
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  • From ANON - Mae-kun on April 17, 2008
    Wow, first chapter and i'm already spouting fat tears. This just oozes of angstiness. And I'm loving it.

    Btw. I love your profile picture, it's just so....so...PERFECT!!!! Me luvles
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  • From robyntalks on April 16, 2008
    when I saw an update I was so exited but then I realized there was nothing new.
    so what's up?
    does this update mean you will soon continue?
    I sure hope so.
    I've had your profile on my fav for a long time and I love all your stories and am looking forward to reading more.
    thanks for your hard work.

    Love Robyn
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  • From ANON - jadetiger on April 15, 2008
    hmm it said chapter 7 was new but thats been up a while, unless you jsut ment an update for it. ohwel i can't wait for chapter 8! i went on a vacation for a week and half ay threw found myself wondering if your fic updated. lol keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Lady Kaze on April 13, 2008
    Hi, Just wanted to say I'm enjoying the story though at some parts, I do get a bit confused. It happens mostly when you switch scenes. Like one minute you'll be with Naruto then here's Sasuke and whats going on with him. Maybe a short little page break would help with that. Just wanna make sure that you don't make the page break too long because when you post it, it makes the reader have to read left to right and that's irritating to say the least.

    Another thing, You might wanna go through and correct you 'ANBU',

    In some chapters, I believe chapter one or two and in chapter six, you have it as AMBU. ANBU is correct and stands for Ansatsu Senjutsu Tokushu Butai: ANBU (translation: Elite Assassination & Tactical Force),

    Please post again soon, I'd like to see where you're going with this.
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  • From snnj11220 on April 05, 2008
    I absolutely loved this past chapter, I really loved how detailed the scene at Naruto's hospital bed was. It was very visionary. I also loved how Itachi or mainly Kisame went out of his way to save Naruto even at the cost of his life. It was nice to just see more of his perspective and get an insight into him. Even throughout the circumstance and even though none of the two Akatsuki members would probably admit it, they have grown closer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 22, 2008
    Wonderful series with so much angst it makes my gut churn.
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  • From blacksuede on March 17, 2008
    i thot i lost the bookmark to this fic but luckily i managed to find it and i'm glad that u had posted a new chapter .. though it shld be ANBU not AMBU.

    I think i pity tsunade that she only just realised something is terribly wrong with naruto after so long had passed

    oh i'm wondering about the pairings .. will it be itanaru♥, sasunaru or others?

    lokking fwd to future chapters

    ♥


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  • From ANON - Anon on March 15, 2008
    Please update soon. I love reading your story and its been a long time since you've updated so please add more I really want to know how this ends.
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  • From ANON - nlb on February 18, 2008
    That was one rollercoaster chapter, so much happened, so many heavy emotions were expressed, I feel exhausted after reading it.
    Sakura is one obsessed b**** and it's really too bad some ANBU came to save her(...by the way where did they come from and why).
    The Itachi/Naruto moment at the end was heartbreaking.
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