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Reviews for Fade In

By : hasu86
  • From roxnroll on October 03, 2007
    Woah!! Loved it. I'm glad they are finally hashing things out. I can't wait to read on.
    Rox
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  • From nationofone on October 03, 2007
    I thought it was great and very emotional.
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  • From KumichoYankumi on October 03, 2007
    Waaaagh! That was awesome! I loved it! They got told! Just the way I hoped it would go. This is such a great story! I've been waiting for this chapter for what seems like forever, but it was worth it! The confrontation was great. But actually, I hope Sasuke and Naruto get more angsty about what they've done. They were the main factors in her changing. They need to see that and not just expect forgiveness. Smarmy bastards, just strolling back in and expecting apologies to make everything better. Anywhoo, great chapter and as always, I'll be waiting with an extreme case of impatience for the next chapter! Update soon, please! I can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From EnchantedFaery on October 03, 2007
    actually the chapter turned out pretty well, I just wished it was a happy meeting and not a sad one...but with all the crap that she went through and what those 2 did I understand! Good chapter can't wait to read more...hopefully the wait won't be as long! LOL!

    EF
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  • From zeroharm on October 03, 2007
    You are way to hard on yourself... It really was an excellent chapter; I just hope that we don't have to wait as long on the next :-) I got so into the confrontation between the old team that I can't wait to read the next one.
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  • From ANON - Danita on October 03, 2007
    Hi, I love this story so much, you are a great writer!!! I have a question, though. I made a quick scan to chapter 4 in order to grasp a general knowledge of it 'cause it was too much for me to read so I am not sure but was Sakura raped in that mission? THANK YOU
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  • From kissthesky237 on October 03, 2007
    I absolutely loved this chapter. I can sympathise with how difficult some chapters are to write, but you managed beautifuly. I love reading this story, there is so much to it. The depth and the pain, it's amazing and I really love it all. Thank you for another wonderful chapter, but damn it all, I am more than impatient to read the next one.

    I don't know what I'll do till then, other than hope that reveiws encourage you to continue your brilliant writing. I know a good review always does that for me. Well, thanks again, keep up the good work and all that business.

    (By the way I haven't decided if I want Sakura to beat the hell out of the boys or let them back into her life... maybe both.. ahh.. till next time)
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  • From fangirlqueen on October 03, 2007
    damn...wow...but...damn! so emotional and awsome and wow. i'm speechless and this is so well written its just....did i mention wow?
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  • From ANON - puppydog on September 26, 2007
    Keep on going! I`m liking it so far! Naruto and Saskue do deserve to get th s@#% beat out of them for leaving Sakura behind! Men are jerks!
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  • From ANON - LadyApollonia on September 18, 2007
    GGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dammit! I thought there'd be more!!!!!!!!!!! I was so caught up in reading that I didn't realize 10 chapters had already gone by! Please update soon! I can't WAIT to 'see' the looks on Sasuke-teme & Naruto-dobe's faces when they find out that she's Anbu!!! BOO-YAH!!! Haha! Love this fic.
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  • From KumichoYankumi on September 17, 2007
    AAAAAARRGH! Damn it! It was a great chapter and I'm extremely happy that Ino blew up at them, but damnit! I hope Sakura and the rest of the team get back to Konoha soon! I can't freaking wait! I've been thinking about this fic ever since my last reveiw and I'm going CRAZY! Please post the next chapter! I can't wait for those two idiots to see what they've helped do to Sakura. Update soon please! I'M BEGGING YOU!
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  • From Clothclouds on September 17, 2007
    im reviewing quite more than my allotted amount...and its just my feelings on this chapter (5). sorry. but it was a laugh. the fight scene was great, if just a smidgen unclear (somewhere near the middle i got lost.) stubborn little shits...lol i love that.
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  • From Clothclouds on September 17, 2007
    @ mia rage badone (near the befinning ---about OCs), i completely agree with you. i read a bleach fic with this awesome oc that could beat the crap outa anyone. got boring after he went shikai. i like this story's ocs. although they are supporting characters, they are superbly written, with a character for each one. each one sort of tells their own story. michi really was a commander at heart, but hideki gives the feeeling of, just as you described him, wise beyond his years. the way he smiles at her, i get the feeling that it is more comradely and reassuring than say, a kakashi smile, and yet, its almost pitying... i just really love how you write. now im gushing. sorry.
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  • From Clothclouds on September 17, 2007
    i really love your writing style. its descriptive and packed with emotion. perfect for a dark fic like this. i havent gotten past chapter ..3? the dark chapter with rape and death and safframate... but i really liked it. the angst, the suffering, you really put it into words that brought my understanding of English to a new level. i like how when they died, you used "fade out", perhaps more as a reference to the title, " fade in", than as a euphemism for "died". everything was really well written. continue your awesome writing *thumbs up and 100000 kudos to you ^^*
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  • From twilightgarden on September 16, 2007
    I just finished reading all of the chapters you have posted and I have to say that this story is just wonderful. I like it alot. I really like the way you have with words and the way that emotion just oozes out is wonderful. I hope that you update soon.
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