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Reviews for Fade In

By : hasu86
  • From oohshiny on November 12, 2007
    WRITE MORE!!!! DON'T YOU DARE TURN INTO ONE OF THOSE AUTHORS THAT THINK THEY SUCK AT WRITING AND ABANDONA GOOD, LEGITIMATE STORY!!!also, when you update it, i'd appreciate it if you'd email me. my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
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  • From nekomiko17 on November 11, 2007
    Love it so far. I love when Sakura is portrayed as the strong shinobi she should be. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Zetnnik on October 24, 2007
    Oh, brilliant! Love your story. I have to admit though that I found the "mission" part kinda slow moving, but the last 2 chapters rock! I can't wait for Sakura's ANBU team members' reactions to the return of the 2. I hope that you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kittenkitsune on October 07, 2007
    All the chapters so far were very wonderful. The understanding of the characters seemed to be very good, though the cursing I believe was out of place. (But that was my opinion) I believe the plot is rather well constructed, though fewer twists than I'm used to. I couldn't stop reading until I finished this chapter, so you do well in drawing your reader in. Keep the great work, I hold out with breathless anticipation for the next installment to this lovely series. All in all, I give this fiction so far a personal 8.7/10. So keep up the wonderful work.
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  • From ANON - FanFicHolic on October 07, 2007
    I'm glad that I've come across this fic yesterday night and I've just read it all at once, so I'm not reviewing every chapter. Just want to express my feelings towards your fic - IT'S AWESOME!
    I love your plot! I like your style of writing. Someparts of your fic is so thought-provoking.

    “At the end of the day, when everything is said and done, you’d be surprised about who you can trust. About who you thought would forever be there by your side.”


    “You’re the one constant in my life.”

    “And you’re the one change in mine.”

    These are words I love most.

    About the plot part, I like this chapter to heart! It's just that, things should be like that. The way that Sakura treats Sasuke and Naruto is more realistic and they deserve that!

    Moreover, I like the development of Sakura. Some may say this is OC but I regard this as development. Characters develop. With the plot going on, if there are any natural changes in the characters' personality, that's just fine with me. That's not Out of Character in my opinion. And I love the development. Sakura is the kind of characters that have so much potential to change, and you got them right.

    Last but not least, I love the pairing too, though there aren't much going on between Kakashi and Sakura at the moment, I like the slow but yet steady development. It's more realistic this way. 'Realistic' is one of the key elements I look for in a fanfic and I must say yours is one the most realistic fanfic I've read.

    Thanks for writing such a great fanfic, and please do update soon!



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  • From ANON - Anon on October 06, 2007
    Very good! Her reaction to their return was superb and fit very well into the plot. 10/10! 5 stars! PLZ DONT END THIS!!!!!!! IT HAS SO MUCH MORE LEFT!!!!!!!
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  • From lgardne6 on October 05, 2007
    Fabulous installment as always. I'm excited for the next batch.
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  • From ANON - Kiti on October 05, 2007
    lol, personally i love this story and cant wait for the next chapter ^_^ In my opinion you are an awesome writer ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rose on October 04, 2007
    amazing stuff you've got going on here. I've been following you work since chapter eight-ish or so, and I'd just like to comment that it is SO nice to find a strong female character in Sakura without having her be some sort of GodMod. Love it. Specifically to this chapter, I enjoyed the restrain you showed in going off on Naruto and Saskue. Very artfully crafted, I enjoyed it immensely. Brava, dahling, Brava!
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  • From morgansgirl23 on October 04, 2007
    This last chapter was DEAD ON!! I love that Sakura didn't go all mushy and girly now that the boys are back and that she let them know she isn't full of forgiveness like before. I can not wait for the next chapter to see how the boys handle the changes in her in the daylight. Please update again soon!
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  • From CharlotteHibiki on October 04, 2007
    I really like this story! This chapter was good, no need to tear at your hair. I can't wait for the next one!
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  • From ANON - Fino on October 04, 2007
    Well all that pulling out of hair paid off becuase this is by far my favorite chapter. I love it so much, guess its because it has so much raw emotion in it. Snaps to you for that aspect and keep it up!
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  • From Kaysan on October 04, 2007
    Gah! I need to know what happens! I was waiting for the reunion and you didn't disappoint, but I'm waiting for her to tell Kakashi what happened at the castle and tell Naruto and Sasuke about her first team. Seriously can't wait for the next chapter. This story is addictive! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From ANON - Setryochi on October 04, 2007
    I liked this chapter. Though Sakura being so skilled that she could stop Sasuke so easily is a weird thought. Though I guess he didn't have his guard up? Anyways, the chapter was good, I really can't wait for more, I want Sakura to get her revenge. Please keep up the wonderful work.

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  • From twilightgarden on October 04, 2007
    Awesome chapter! I really liked how you had them realize that leaving Sakura like they did hurt her and now they have to do alot to get her to forgive them. I can't wait to see how the members of Sakura's squad will react to having two people come back that hurt their captain so much with their leaving. I hope that you update soon.
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