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By : Amarukoira
  • From ItaAngel on August 26, 2010
    Why?!?!?! Why'd you have to make me cry?!?! I live with 3 Gangsta Bois and you feel the need to make me cry in front of them so they can tease me?!?! BTW awesome so far, I need to read more of your work now ^^ Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2010
    Chapter 9: Part I: Nice ending line to this part.


    Part II: I’m guessing it won’t be long before Itachi gives in. ____ Jeez, what timing. Itachi finally starts to give in, and now Sasuke’s uncomfortable due to the rape from Orochimaru. ____ I do like how desirable Sasuke is. ____ “He didn’t want Itachi to know just how much he really wanted this to happen between them.” I find that really hard to believe, considering how hard he’s pushed for it during the whole story. I mean, why pretend now? And he just said “Make me forget.” ____ Jeez, Sasuke, open your eyes. ____ Oh. Oh jeez. I didn’t realize that the memory that they’re brothers hadn’t come back yet. That could be a problem. ____ “I never imagined it would get this far.” Liar. He hoped it would, and that would take some imagination. Maybe he didn’t think it would come true, but I doubt that stopped him from imagining. ____ Y’know … I like the eroticness of the honest conversation between them and at the same time how they’re still touching each other. ____ I also like how Itachi’s not angry, just a little confused. ____ “They were safe now.” I don’t think so….

    I’m guessing the rest of his memories came back and with it the need to leave.

    “You’ll have to leave this world, but we’ll be together again.” Oh, BULLSHIT! That’s like telling Sasuke to commit suicide! What was all that about trying to keep him safe by leaving, and then saying that?! ____ That note was kind of meaningless. He’s not there.


    And, uh, is that the end? God, I hope not. I hate to say it, but that ending’s terrible. I feel … screwed.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2010
    Chapter 8: Part II: Sasuke seems to be doing a little better. ____ Hehehe. “Why do we have the same last name?” Ohoh. ____ Ooh, he’s going to have Sasuke take out the chip. That’ll be tough. ____ “The hate rattled in Sasuke’s voice.” Good line.

    “When I don’t have to ask for this, it’ll be enough.” Good line. ____ Oh, holograms, is it? ____ Wait a minute. The hallucination gases … one of Orochimaru’s victims … why’d Itachi set them off? And what victim? Did Orochimaru kill another tenant? And if so, wouldn’t the disappearance be noted by now? I don’t get this part. ____ Good luck, Sasuke. (*fingers crossed*) ____ Shit, Sasuke, don’t go dropping scalpels everywhere! Õ.Õ ____ Somehow I knew it’d be Sai. ____ I wonder if Sai’s here to spy on Itachi. ____ I guess Itachi gave up. ____ “If it’s gone, I won’t have a reason to leave.” Yeah, you say that now…. ____ Actually, that’d be something if Itachi was faking it to give Sasuke some motivation. ____ Dude, no antiseptic? ____ Well … that was fast. ____ I guess Itachi doesn’t remember right away.

    Yeah, he lied. He’s leaving after all.


    To be honest, I’d rather that neither Itachi or Sasuke ended up pregnant.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2010
    Chapter 7: Part I: So who had been abusing the kids? The guardians?


    Part II: “How would you like to be one of the many that I’ve taken under my wing?” (*SHUDDER*) Really creepy line; I like it. =D ____ Hmm … did Orochimaru really kidnap Itachi, or is he just playing off the info? And if so, then he’s been involved way from the past. ____ (*snort*) Marilyn Manson … har har. ____ Actually, the bit with the lyrics would be kinda … well, not my thing, in my opinion. Like, I would think they were unnecessary. And they kind of are, but … the description along with it does add a creepy feeling to the scene. ____ Heh—he calls it his snake. Nice. ____ I think Sasuke could bite him and it might incapacitate him for a moment, but I kinda think the risk is way too high. ____ Yup, they were both thinking along similar lines. ____ “You’re the best yet, Sasuke.” I wonder if he tells that to all his victims. ____ Erm … I thought you’d said this’d be a “limish-lemon”. There’s nothing limish about it. (*sweat*) ____ As messed up as Orochimaru is … he’s an intriguing character. ____ I gotta say, Sasuke didn’t come off as the cliché victim of a rape scene. He doesn’t seem … broken. Hurt, most definitely. But he still seems strong. ____ I’m amazed that Orochimaru’s just leaving him there. He must be extremely confident, because there’s no way in hell Sasuke’s going to keep this quiet. ____ As hurt as Sasuke is, and as much as he wants Itachi … I get the feeling he’s angry too. One thing I’m sure of: Sasuke’s not helpless.

    Heehee, “Haku didn’t sound irritated, but he was trying to. Probably just doing it in front of his manager.” ^^ ____ I can’t remember—where does Haku work? ____ I like Itachi’s uneasy concern. ____ Yeah, Haku just said my thoughts as I was thinking them: “How do you know it’s not like him to be late?” ____ Hey, Sai’s around! =D ____ AHAHAHAHA Nice, Sai! XDD ♥ Man, I love that guy so much.

    Good description of Haku as he talks and drives at the same time. ____ Aha, interesting. “That’s just it, I don’t want to remember.” ____ Heh—I like Haku’s reaction to Itachi’s blurt. ____ I’m surprised Haku doesn’t think Itachi’s nuts. Cuz that is kind of a wild story. ____ I do like his point about how erasing one part of a memory disrupts the rest. ____ Hang on … Haku saw the body … and yet Orochimaru is still alive…. Did they plant one of those chips in Haku with a “memory” of a dead Orochimaru?

    Sasuke’s acting very different than he was at the end of the rape scene. Now he seesms broken. ____ Good ending line. Though I think Sasuke still could’ve come across as a victim without the whimpering at the end. Itachi still could’ve felt the way he did.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 19, 2010
    Chapter 6: Part I: Jeez. Sounds like Itachi’s in quite a jam. How’d he end up in that group? ____ Sounds like his ex-partner has a grudge.


    Part II: “Surely Sasuke didn’t mean that much to him, did he?” He came to the conclusion that they were lovers, and thinks that? True, some lovers aren’t genuine to each other, but I would’ve thought that he’d take into account the possibility that they had been close.

    Heehee—that surprised me, Itachi jumping back into the car like that. ^^ ____ Oh jeez, Itachi sounds like Sai there. XD I thought he saw something that was a threat and got back in the car to hide.

    I wonder what Kabuto’s going to be like.

    “Whoever had her didn’t beat her or harm her …” Well, rape is a kind of harm.

    Yeah, I don’t trust Kabuto. Still, I’d think he’d hide it more. ____ His boss sounds a lot like Orochimaru. But Orochimaru’s dead … isn’t he?

    AHA! He is alive!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 15, 2010
    Chapter 5: Part II: Oh, come on, Sasuke, Haku cares, you’ve seen that. ____ I hate to say this, but Sasuke’s thoughts are becoming a bit clichéd.

    Uh-oh. Itachi’s in trouble.

    Whoa, what? They found him? ____ This must be some time after the scene where Itachi was captured. ____ Where’d they find him? ____ So did whoever-had-captured-Itachi try to kill him after all? ____ Cute exchange between Neji and Gaara.

    I’m surprised that Sasuke could be turned on in this situation. ____ What the—? (“I don’t know why your name sounds so familiar.”) That doesn’t sound good. ____ Uh-oh. Teeheehee, Sasuke’s going to do something naughty, isn’t he? ____ Yeah, I don’t blame Sasuke for feeling guilty. I mean, what if Itachi’s memory comes back?... How the hell did Itachi lose his memory anyway? (If I may be blunt, the suddenness of that situation seems a little cheesy. Sorry. I hate to criticize. Maybe if it were in a hospital setting, or he’d been in a coma for a while or something….) ____ Unless … maybe Itachi’s faking it…? ____ “Don’t be ashamed, I enjoyed it.” Weird. Why isn’t he indulging? ____ (*snicker*) Haku and Naruto were listening in. ^^ ____ I’m guessing there’s some crazy, nanomachine technology stuff involved.

    This chapter was … weird.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2010
    Trust me, I don’t hate Haku. He makes things interesting.

    Chapter 4: Part II: Nice portrayal of Gaara’s creepiness. ____ I wonder if Naruto knows just how close Sasuke and Itachi are. ____ “Tsunade really needs to kick that guy out.” I don’t know why she hasn’t already. ____ Boy. They know an exact number of people that Orochimaru raped and/or killed. Why hasn’t he been locked up? ____ I’ll say something isn’t right. The guy’s still running around loose. If Tsunade “rescued” most of the people here … well, I would hardly call it “rescue” if they’re all falling prey to one of her tenants. That sounds more like she’s picking up people for Orochimaru.

    Heh—knew Itachi’d be started the first time Gaara spoke. =) ____ Interesting. Neji doesn’t know that his apartment has been targeted. ____ “This was somewhat of a peaceful place.” Yeah, right. Nine, no ten people have been raped in one apartment complex by a tenant.

    Oh-HO! Interesting information. And I don’t blame Sasuke for being angry. This raises the question about how Itachi might’ve found this place. And it kind of hints at why Orochimaru hasn’t been locked up. My question now is, why is this place hidden? ____ Itachi, you liar…. ____ “The longer they stayed together, the more they were going to have to move.” Well, Itachi had a chance to move out, but he wouldn’t leave Sasuke behind. It sounds like he’s going to have to, though. ____ Now I wonder if Itachi really did kill his friend. ____ Well, I can understand why their dad wants to separate Sasuke from Itachi, but now comes the question about why he’s in hiding. The mystery thickens! ____ Uh-oh…. Sounds like Itachi has really messed things up for them. ____ “Do you see why we can’t be together?!” He means as lovers, right? Cuz the next sentence, “They will take you from me!” kind of contradicts it. ____ Yeah, Itachi’s gone nuts. Shoulda known that before. ^^;

    What the— ____ How much of that was true? Itachi probably just did the same thing he did earlier when he was sneaking Sasuke’s cellphone out of his pocket. ____ Yup. ____ (*snort*) Now we’ve got at least two psycho tenants in the apartment. ____ Jeez, what the hell did Itachi do to him?? ____ Okay … what happened to Itachi? Love the suspense in this scene, by the way. ____ WHOA! Okay, one psycho tenant. ____ “The men in white are here to make it look like this never happened.” … That doesn’t sound good. Sounds like a cover-up. ____ I think Sasuke’s afraid that Itachi might’ve killed Orochimaru, but is trying to deny it. ____ It wouldn’t surprise me if Itachi had done it. Surely some of these tenants might suspect or think that the possibility has some merit. ____ “If anyone questions you about us or your brother, then we left to Denny’s or something, okay?” Yeah right. Like they’re going to believe something like that in this kind of scenario. ____ Nice ending line to the chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2010
    Chapter 3: Part I: I wonder how his friend (who I’m guessing was Shisui) died. ____ Perhaps Shisui told someone about Itachi’s obsession before he died.


    Part II: This man in the trench coat doesn’t bode well. ____ I doubt they’ll leave this soon. ____ The line “You’re not my brother” doesn’t make much sense to me, but it works if Sasuke’s in a state of depression. ____ “His eyes were closed tight and his lips burned.” Nice description. ____ Good exchange: “If we do this, you’ll never speak of it again.” / “That’s what you said the last time. Yet here we are.” ____ I like the way Sasuke told Itachi that he’s not going to stay with him if this is a one-time thing. ____ I also love how cruel Sasuke’s words can be, even to someone he loves. ____ I do like how Itachi’s trying to put some distance between them and how Sasuke’s fighting it. Makes things interesting.

    So is Sasuke staying with him then? ____ “He’s mine.” Is he really. Y’know, I’m surprised they don’t report this to Tsunade, that one of her tenants is getting molested by another against his will. ____ Aha—interesting. This development between Haku and Itachi could make things difficult.


    (*snort*) Who’re you calling a “guppy”? =_)
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2010
    I don’t blame you for making Haku uber-gay. XD

    Chapter 2: Part I: One would think that Itachi would pick up the cues people are getting from his behavior and modify it a bit. ____ “He just watched from the safety of his side of the bed.” No wonder Itachi’s going nuts; they’re sharing the same bed. ____ O.O That last line of Part I here was surprising. Thrilling. =)

    Part II: Whoever’s knocking sure is persistent. ____ Ah, it’s Naruto, so that figures. ____ I’m guessing that Haku’s aware that there’s something going on between Itachi and Sasuke. ____ I really like the paragraph where Haku tells Itachi that he and Sasuke are “a rare kind of different.” ____ Haku is really cool. I can’t put my finger on what exactly it is that makes him cool in this story, but he’s cool. ____ (*snicker*) Haku. Is. Awesome. He’s kinda odd—I like him! =D ____ If Haku considers Zabuza his husband-to-be, why is there distance between them? ____ I really can’t picture Jiraiya as having an interest in men. ____ “Then there were times he felt like Haku was flirting with him. God knows he didn’t need someone else falling for him.” One would think he’d pick up that Haku flirts with just about everybody.

    Weird. Why doesn’t Itachi want to leave Sasuke home alone? ____ “However, bad timing always had its way of sneaking up on him.” Not surprising—Itachi picked a bad time to try to kiss Sasuke.

    “When he woke up, his hair was all over the place and his phone was ringing.” Man, I’d love to see Itachi with a bed-head. =) ♥ ____ Who? Who?! ____ Ooh, “the real reason.” The plot thickens. =D ____ Love the seductive suspense as Itachi gets Sasuke’s phone. ____ Itachi’s playing a really dangerous game. Every time he has a chance to get away, he pushes it. ____ Whoa, what’s with the choking bit? Is that just to confuse Sasuke into thinking it’s a dream? Good luck getting away from that one, Itachi. ____ Okay … Good luck on Sasuke believing it, Itachi. If you’ve left bruises….

    “You’re acting like the FBI is following us!” Maybe they are. ____ Teehee—that was funny. Gaara waiting for Neji to ask about his keys. ^^ ____ Gaara’s creepy. Mysterious.

    “He was going to have to be more careful.” Yup. No kidding. But it sounds like he hasn’t been too careful anywhere, except when trying to run away from whoever-it-is-he’s-running-from. ____ Haha, Itachi got caught. ^^ ____ “It was obvious that Sasuke was a bit jealous, so Itachi tried to reassure him.” So much for trying to put distance between himself and Sasuke. Itachi’s actions constantly contradict him. He tells himself and Sasuke that they need distance, but instead keeps shortening it. Then he lengthens it just a little, and shortens it again. One would think that Itachi would go ahead with the “yeah, I’m dating Haku” idea; the faster Sasuke gets used to that (even if it’s not true), the faster he can move on (theoretically). Except I don’t think Itachi doesn’t want Sasuke to move on, so he’s not really trying to make him. ____ I like Sasuke’s response, though: “*sigh* Fine, Itachi, do what you want with him.” ____ Love the seduction.

    Nuh-UH! I liked this chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2010
    (I review as I read.)

    Chapter 1: Part I: I like the line, “He cared none for their talk, but he knew it bothered Sasuke.” Not sure why, just like it. ____ I wonder why things are so rough on them.


    Part II: I do like the mystery behind these two. ____ Nice portrayal of Haku. A little OOC, but I like it. ____ Sasuke and Itachi are going to be startled when they finally hear Gaara speak, aren’t they? ____ I like that image of Itachi being exhausted. ____ “Go back to bed, Sasuke.” He’s in bed, Itachi. I think you mean “go back to sleep.” ____ Sounds like sometimes Sasuke takes care of Itachi. ____ I wonder if what Sasuke thinks is true. ____ I do like how Sasuke’s the one coming on to Itachi and Itachi’s trying to ignore it. A good switch. ____ Really good ending line there.
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  • From ANON - fan_of_urs on March 19, 2008
    You stole my breath and heart and soul with this fic. And the ending... I wept. The way Itachi and Sasuke's little quotes finally agree with each other. The way history repeats and yet not. The way everything flows. Incredible. And it's believeable in that totally fantastic unbelievable way. I know, way to be cryptic. But this was amazing in the way I was completely satisfied with the ending.
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 20, 2008
    ahmahgahd! Nuuuu! So depressing, I hope it will get better!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    P.S. it's 5 a.m. lol
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  • From ANON - zaza on December 01, 2007
    Ohkay... I'm crying. ITs soo sad.. but I love it! luv luv luv it~~
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  • From QueenRandom on August 05, 2007
    Wow, that chapter left me in tears, it's so sad.
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  • From sweetciel on August 04, 2007
    So sad *cries*
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