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Reviews for Losing Battles

By : tasukigirl
  • From llyoung on June 08, 2007
    Everthing you had Sai say, think and do was just so funny. I laughed thru almost the whole chapter.
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 07, 2007
    GOD i hope naruto ends up with Gaara again. Anyhoo Im loving this. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Plaidshp on June 07, 2007
    I absolutely love this story! Most of the time when I read stories that jump povs like this it gets kind of irritating, but I have to say that you have done a very good job in making separate but cohesive sections…I hope that makes sense :P. I am also really interested in reading Sasukes pov.
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  • From Kimra on June 06, 2007
    I hope despite Sasuke useing Naruto now that it ends being an amicable realtionship. I hate angst. But I'm reading and enjoying this piece. :D
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 03, 2007
    At first I was thinking I'm reading some new story over again... and when I was reading the author note at the top my heart actually skipped a beat. I was like why is my name up there... then I was like oh man I pissed the author up because of my comment and now she's going to chew me up...

    But I guess my suggestion helped... I mean I really didn't mean any offense by saying what I did. It's just that although as inticing as the story is, each chapter needs to have a proper beginning, middle and end. I mean like there is nothing worse to go to a movie, love the beginning and middle and then suddenly grump over how bad the ending is. But you definetly piqued my curiosity to see how Sasuke will betray the dobe.

    *sigh* he's a definite user and abuser. That's why I'm not quite content to write Sasu/Naru stories... I keep remembering the Valley of the End.

    Oh and word of advice. Don't have like a major cliffie. I did that to one of my stories recently and most of my reviewers... all they can do is bitch about how I suddenly cut off what Sasuke is going to say. Tch... it got their attention sure enough but not quite in the way I wanted to.

    Well happy typing anyway XP
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  • From emp78 on June 02, 2007
    Awww! Poor Naruto. Update soon.
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  • From DarkRainFiend on June 02, 2007
    I wonder...will Gaara be there to pick Naruto back up when Sasuke breaks him? I hope so. I really do. Naruto deserves so much better than Sasuke...he needs Gaara.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2007
    Wow. This is sooo emotional.

    Thanks.


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  • From UzumakiLover on June 01, 2007
    How sad...it's crazy really when you think about it. Man that so much on a drunken Sakura's shoulders...but does Naruto know he's being used...or he knows and is just pretending to not know...man...this is like deep stuff...keep going okay! i really like it!
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  • From PieldeLava on June 01, 2007
    Wow, very intesting. Very well-written. Look forward to the next chapter. I love how you protrayed Gaara. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 31, 2007
    Poor Gaara!!! I feel so bad for him!! Great first chapter! :)
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  • From DevilnBlue on May 31, 2007
    Ne, ne it's too short... it's missing that something that willingly hooks a reader into wanting to see what happens next. I mean a lovely start... but I'm not quite anticipating the second chapter as I should be =/
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  • From Rosebud on May 31, 2007
    This was good!

    More PLEASE! XD
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