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Reviews for The Best Birthday Party Sasuke Never Wanted

By : ursweetheartless
  • From ANON - Anon on July 08, 2008
    (I review as I read.)

    Nice description of how his teenage hormones are kicking in and how he’s at that age. ^_^ . . . . Also, nice description of the weather (I’m reading the story on a day like that, too). ^^ . . . . Already this seems very real to me. Itachi’s home from college for the summer. Awesome. =D . . . . Oooh, “un~seem~ly”. Fancy word. ^^ And I like this description: “quiet disconnection.” Beautiful. =) . . . . Hmmm (*pondering*), I wonder why Itachi’s watching him from Sasuke’s bedroom. 9_9 . . . . (*snicker*) Good one, Naruto! XD . . . . Sasuke’s kind of a whiner in this, isn’t he? . . . . I kinda like it when I go into an air-conditioned house after swimming in the summer heat. It feels gooooood. ^_^ . . . . I like this scene of Itachi saying “Something like that”. . . . (*giggle*) “To save him from the idiots in the pool.” ^^ . . . . Man, they ARE rich, aren’t they! O_O; . . . . Hmm, they started in on the hot stuff pretty fast, I think. A little too fast to have an initial effect, in my opinion. (Sorry about that. Maybe I’m just not used to AU for this pairing yet; reviewing ItaSasu is still new to me.) . . . . (*snort*) “The older boy would either be disgusted or find the situation hilariously funny.” ^^ Though I’m a little confused if Itachi why Itachi would be disgusted at the thought of incest since he’s the one instigating it. Or would he be disgusted that Sasuke was somewhat reluctant to continue? I’m a little confused. . . . “Just like when we were little, ne?” O.O They’ve done this before?! . . . . Itachi’s kinda talky in this. . . . Oh no, not the “Sasu-chan” nicknames. (*groan*) . . . . Aren’t the other kids wondering where the birthday boy went (and if that cake was coming or not)? . . . . “Itachi had been Sasuke’s best friend then, before he went away to school.” Yay, family members as best friends. ^_^ :heart: (My hearts aren’t working well. T_T) And I love the snuggles. :heart: . . . . It’s getting better from that change in position, by the way. It’s cuter. . . . Can’t Sasuke feel Itachi’s hard-on? There’s no mention of that. Maybe he’s too distracted. . . . I wonder if Itachi’s doing this out of simple lust or romantic love as well. It keeps saying stuff like, “reduce his chances of being able to do this again,” and, “He needed Sasuke to enjoy it,” and “It was working so far at least.” That kind of hints at simple lust. . . . I like the line that says, “Itachi started counting, slowly.” That’s kind of cool. Nice touch. . . . Whoa, that was sudden. Naruto caught sight of them. . . . And he just went to sleep? Okay, understandable, but everybody downstairs is going to be disappointed.

    Honestly, I didn’t think it was bad, but it wasn’t one of my favorites. Or maybe I’m just not in the right mood when I reviewed it. It was alright, though. =)
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  • From Rosebud on June 02, 2007
    I loved it! XD
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  • From Sekre on May 31, 2007
    Wonderful! I loved it :D Haha, that was quite a gift.
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  • From sunlight159 on May 31, 2007
    I think it's awesome, I also think it'd be great if you continued! You could have it start a few years down the road and have Sasuke start having feelings for Naruto... causing Itachi to get jealous. Or have Naruto the jealous one of itachi's relationship with Sasuke. Such possible possessivness of the young Uchia haha. So many things you can do with this!!

    Awesome oneshot but it could be one hell of a story! Please consider continuing!! i look forward to a possible update! :)
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  • From Sapphirexkat2 on May 31, 2007
    very nice! nothing like a good Uchihacest PWP smut. heehee. please continue to write more!
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  • From Dream2010 on May 31, 2007
    Agreed. The best birthday present!
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