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Reviews for Nameless Desires

By : Jelp
  • From lara5170 on September 13, 2015
    Talk about a bizarre twist ending.
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  • From ANON - Mocca_chan on December 06, 2014
    Wow . That's awesome !!
    The story is very deep yet short . Not long term . Very good of you.
    Thanks !!
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  • From 4FreakJoySpastic on May 01, 2011
    An astonishing and absolutly fabulous piece of art. I applaud your success. I wish you much love and luck in the future.
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  • From Ikippiki on October 17, 2008
    Damn but I'd like to write as well as you do! You mix good plot with hotness and interesting dialogue like a pro (so to speak, to me you definatly are one) not to forget the cliff hangers that I hate so much but gives the story a unique suspence. Well done.
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  • From fuuton on October 14, 2008
    Such a wonderful story! I couldn't stop reading from beginning to end. All the emotions and the tension... The ending was a great resolution. I love this story! And your writing style.
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  • From zanax on August 17, 2008
    Wow, this has certainly been a journey!

    Great story! Great twists! Love it!
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  • From ANON - Lils on June 19, 2008
    Wow, completely did not expect Mumei. Although, I shoulda seen it, what with the experiments and whatnot. Excellent story! I thoroughly enjoyed it! ^_^
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  • From on March 02, 2008
    I really suck at reviews, so I am just gonna give you that warning. I read this all in one day, and it was AWESOME. GAGAGAGHH!mdglkjfgshljsdrl;kyj!!!1 They were written so well, and the plot was, *gushes*. One negative, what the fuck was that ending? Just decided to poop out a mpreg there? I, personally hate mpregs, and with this WONDERFULLY AMAZING story to just end like THAT?!? I am just going to pretend I never read that part.
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  • From spoon10488 on March 02, 2008
    I love this story so I had to reread it.
    =)
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  • From ANON - T on February 22, 2008
    Hi... I was wondering if you're AlmightyPockyWhore on a different website? On fos-ff.net more specifically, because if not, someone copied and pasted your story there. Instead of it being named Nameless Desires, it's called Nameless. My apologizes if you really did post it elsewhere, but I thought I'd just let you know. Thanks.
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  • From MichiTheThird on January 25, 2008
    What the hell!(exclamation, not question) That was some crazy shit all up on the end there! With Naruto and the C-section and the still birth and the Sakura trauma! Thank goodness you didn't write all that out, I would have keeled over from the angst! Still, the whole story was great...the end really was a huge shock for me though. I'm glad I read it through, but cosmos...I don't think my heart could have taken much more of that suspensive angst.
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  • From ANON - Lola on January 07, 2008
    Great story! Any hope for a sequel?
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  • From LadyWolf on October 10, 2007
    Whew!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really loved reading this...>!!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on September 23, 2007
    OMG where have i been?! just read the last couple of chapters, i didnt realise you had completed it. So exellent, i'm almost at a loss for all the praise i want to give you. I meant i felt like MY heart had bottomed out when naruto said he had done the posing thing so sas would be interested in him. I was like *scream* oh my god naruto liked him?! Then how the whole thing was a misunderstanding and it was totally realistic, sometimes you read stories where the characters misinterpret each other's actions but it just comes off as retarded and u just want to hit them for being so dunce. But yours wasnt like that, i soo saw where each of them was coming from. Then that night when naruto shut the door because he didnt want sasuke to leave and he whispered in sas' ear that he wouldnt tell him no. It was just so AWESOME! bah. i must sound like a complete moron lol

    lastly i worry for the daughter, seems all uchihas (other than sasuke) are CURSED. so aahh good luck to her!

    ADORED this story. kudos to you.
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  • From solitare1 on September 23, 2007
    Thank you soo much for this story, you are a credit to the storytellers!! I love the preg. hook. If you are still writing, I look forward to reading more of your completed works.
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