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By : Jelp
  • From hisoka on August 20, 2007
    haha he punched an officer something we would all like to do,t would get them off their lazy asses and get them to do something other than giving j-walkers tickets.who doesnt wanna take down their enemy thai way,but not always with them getting eaten by a fox.everythg like!!
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  • From Greenstages on August 17, 2007
    woot! Glad to see you have udpated, I'm just surprised I didn't find this chapter sooner! But wow, what an insightful chapter :3 I was surprised by Naruto saying that he wanted sasuke to be interested in him and then for Sasuke to help him... with his problem later on. omg... I mean... shesh, I was reading, yes it was good, good, oh no, I'm like half way, oh no... even more than half way, omfg!!! awesome! shit! O.o? WHoA! more, no, damn it!!! done...
    yes...my emotional spectrum I read your chapter. This was fantastic indeed. I just love it!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 17, 2007
    Ooh! I like I like! Realistic medical descriptions and jujutsu as well! And I also really enjoy the back and forth format you have going on. Revealing little bits at a time. A very enjoyable story! Keep it up dude!
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  • From ANON - pearl on August 14, 2007
    another super chapter
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  • From ANON - missmurder111 on August 14, 2007
    Another Story Of Yours I Love! I Thought It Was Funny About The Drawing Part And How U Mentioned Titanic. Call Me A Pervert But I'm Kind Of Looking Forward To The *coughcough* Rape. Update Soon!
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  • From kneazlegurl125 on August 13, 2007
    oh my goodness. this is such an awesome story!!! i'll have you know you have me up 3:30 in the morning reading your this story. i really like the angle you're going with this with reverting back from present and past. i find the type of relationship you've woven between naruto and sasuke so endearing and true to the spirit of the anime's personas as well that i wish that there WAS more endearment between naruto and sasuke in the anime..but i guess that sweetness is due a little in part of sasuke being older than naruto and by being 18 from the start of the story that gave him more maturity rather than emoness that the anime seems to force upon him. i'm still restless to know how bad the rape was that led to four years seperation between naruto and sasuke. granted if somebody close to me hurt me in that way i would never want to see that person again, but the boundaries between naruto and sasuke's relationship clearly shows that they both deeply loved each other mutually and with the understanding and bond between them you would think that naruto would have stuck it out and got to the bottom of understanding sasuke's thoughts rather than seperate for four years. and another thing: why did naruto suddenly show up at sasuke's if they haven't seen each other for four years and demand quite abruptly of sasuke's explanation. there must have been something going on slightly before naruto's and sasuke's reunion that forced naruto to go back. it'd be awesome if you replied. but i'm sure my questions would be answered when you update your next chapter. i simply adore long chapters. ^^ great job! i must read Restless when i get the chance cuz i hear you have actual smut in there. very intrigued. hehe
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on August 11, 2007
    I don't think you know how much i like this story. or how much i am looking forward towards the lemon. i mean after reading the lemons from restless. how could someone not feel anticipation. Sasuke must feel like a complete idiot. I mean common, Naruto liked him and he ruined it. I mean what kind of thought was that. Let me not even see if this person wants me i'll just assume and be driven by lust to rape them. Makes me wish guy who watch porn regularly help each other...i can always hope, ne? Either was i am so glad you updated. That much closer to the goal...which you teased me in the summary with. AH so gooood hope you can update sooner.
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  • From venia on August 11, 2007
    sorry me again, i forgot to log in and the mail wouldn't show up ^^;
    oh and..that wasn't naruto's cousin, but he so reminded me of H.Potter's Dudley that in the end I used the term, i can't believe my silliness XDDD
    great work again^^
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  • From ANON - yaoifansakura on August 11, 2007
    awww *___* i'm glad to have spotted this fic among all those. I liked the roles you assigned to the characters(Tsunade as a doctor is already common, but the policemen ,and, and Gai as a juudo instructor...I laughed my head off when naruto told sasuke 'can you get your money back?'oh god XDDD). I liked the explanation of naruto's healing abilities(weeeh! plot!), and i liked the gradual development of sasuke's feelings and the fact that the word 'yaoi' actually existed there --when sakura mentioned it XDD-- since we're talking about japanese society.

    (side note:i hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, i'm doing it only because I care for this fic and want to see it improve^^. Actually, when naruto's cousin hit him that way, it made me think of american society instead of the japanese one. Don't get me wrong, I don't intend to show any racistic attitude much less offend anyone --heck, i dont even know where you come from, to begin with-- just to pinpoint the impression it left me as a reader, if that means commenting too -and I think it does. 'Something' in the way you wrote it gave me a different impression than it should have. Bulling and being aggressive like that, made me think of american movies, where this constantly happens that way~__~ Guess I just wanted you to reflect that writing and language can reveal identity, so that next time you can be more conscious about it, if you want to make it sound like an authentic japanese society --I noticed you've already put some effort in this, like in the real taijutsu name etc^^)

    As for the rest, Neji's suggestion was hilarious, funny and convenient!XD And Sasuke having an art studio OMG!! and drawing a naked!naruto yay(i wonder how much self-control it must took out of him not to jump him right there =çççççç= *droooll*)
    I'm waiting the rest with impatience, I hope you update soon^__^
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  • From on August 11, 2007
    A lot of suspense! Please update! Sasuke angsting over Naruto and Naruto slowly liking him is so cute!
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  • From blueh on August 10, 2007
    O.O NoooOOOoo... don't stop there! It wsa getting so good! I really love it! Keep updating!

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  • From Allys on August 10, 2007
    O.O *Blink blink* Holy Shit. Wow... This could have all been easily avoided. Damn. And the moral of today's story = Communication is key. Heh... I don't even know what to say. I'm sitting here in no small amount of shock. I'm a little confused about the replacement comment, but that just makes the whole thing more intricate and interesting. The bits of description of the rape makes it seem rather brutal and more real as it comes barreling at us in the time frame. This is truly well written. Loved the little smutty bits too, crushing Sasuke is really cute until I remember the outcome of the situation. And I want into Naruto's brain so badly it's ridiculous. Again I commend you. I'm still loving this. The artsy tidbits were really cool as well. But LOL, naked people on the walls and ceiling of the vatican was the least of Michelangelo's rudeness XD. He drew the pope in hell XD. In "The Last Judgement" in that same chapel, O.o, needless to say they didn't get along so well, LOL. Thank you so much for the update. It seems as though the next chapter will get us into the crux of the matter and now I'm really excited XD. Ja na, hope you update soon ♥
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  • From ANON - Crimson2006 on August 10, 2007
    God dear, I LOVE this story! This was yet another awesome chapter and the way you write is beautiful! Keep up the good work and I hope that you update soon! ^^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 10, 2007
    Well, they both have misunderstood each other! I can't wait for the next chapter!! :)
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  • From marquesgue1 on August 10, 2007
    Ooh you updated this!!! It made me really happy seeing you'd updated it ^_^ their conversation seems to be getting more and more intense, Naruto seems so hurt, it's really sad - especially now with Sasuke realising that Naruto had had those types of feelings for him back then. *sigh* anyway, great chp. ^_6 can't wait for the next update.

    Ja ne!
    Hina xXxx
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