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Reviews for Nameless Desires

By : Jelp
  • From bluegenjutsu on September 22, 2007
    I loved this story!! I'm glad it had a happy ending and that Naruto and Sasuke even have a daughter together. Thanks for this story! :)
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  • From ringpop on September 22, 2007
    This story was very entertaining! thank you!
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  • From hisoka on September 22, 2007
    that was great,never thought naruto would be a mother in this story and never woulda thought he wouldnt tell his child about it but breaking people isnt always fun especially when its some one you care about.glad you finished and cant wait for your next story(if their is one any time soon)good luck
    ~kurosaki hisoka
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  • From Chria on September 21, 2007
    I love the surprise ending! This is the first Mpreg that surprised me. Usually I know about it before hand but I love it that it came as a shock. Cool. The foreboding of their child having blue eyes made me suspicious immediately. Very nice. The decisions they made afterwards made a lot of sense too. It's great that this turned out to be a modern day Mpreg. A first for me. What a roller coaster ride it was. I had no idea how this was going to end either. It felt open-ended for a good or bad ending. The best part of reading a story is thinking up many different ways events could unfold. You could continue this from Mumei’s point of view. A series of stories of her snooping around to find out what else happened. It’s written all over her face that she’s not done finding out what’s going on by a long shot. Hahaha What a cute kid. You have a lot of talent. Thanks so much not just for writing but for finishing it too! Not many writers have your dedication to finish what they started. I salute you.
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  • From ANON - littleolmee on September 21, 2007
    Story turned out great, wonderful and unexpected ending. Fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Damp on September 21, 2007
    o.O

    Naruto had a C-Section!!! Sasuke and Naruto are the biological parents of Mumei?!!! It was a miracle that Naruto was even able to carry the baby for 7 months!!!????

    WTF HAPPENED HERE!!

    o.O

    -Damp *No, I do get the general of what happened over the years. . .but an even clearer explanation would be nice.*
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  • From Allys on September 21, 2007
    LOL, are you fucking kidding?? I ADORE this ending!!! We got more smut, we got a BABY!! LOL, a fifteen year old baby, but a baby nevertheless XD. I'm sorry to ehar about Sakura that part was a little sad, but everything else was perfect and fantastic! I was a little weirded out by the ghost thing and then they started fighting about it and it was hilarious XD. I love that they had a baby! LOL, XD. And the fight on the stairs, heh *Loves* Thank you so much for writing this XD, and Congratulations on it being Finished!! I'm always thrilled to bits when authors finish things *Huggles u* You Rock! Thank you so much ;).
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  • From blueh on September 21, 2007
    Wow! Happy ending! Very nice indeed. I really enjoyed your story. I hope you'll keep writing.
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  • From anndragera007 on September 21, 2007
    nice job on the story!

    very well written and very few errors (that I could see).

    nice ending as well
    loved the fight in the stairwell though
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  • From llyoung on September 21, 2007
    Loved your story and loved the ending. I really do like when stories give us a look of the relationship years down the road.
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  • From ANON - hina88 on September 21, 2007
    Aww you finished!!! lool, I loved how Naruto just blamed Sasuke for not having told him about Sakura sooner when he was the one that didn't give him the chance to finish up. I liked the ending although it wasn't what I was expecting but I liked it just as much. I felt really bad for Sakura though, I mean, she went through so much in the end *sigh* the MPreg was the twist I wasn't expecting. Hehe Sasuke's a screamer, that made me smirk lol, smut was great but I have to say that the drunk Sasuke smut scene in this stole the showe it was just BRILLIANT!!! Now that having been said I'm gonna go off to read Restless.

    Thanks for the great story, and hope to read more from you soon cause your fics are bloody great ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From MissMayumi on September 21, 2007
    Oh my. I loved it! Yosh! I loved the smut. It was very well written! and I might have a nosebleed! ^^

    Haha, it's cute that they both had a happy ending! Tehe.

    ♥
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  • From KoibitoFemme on September 21, 2007
    KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! That was so kawaii for an ending I was scared you weren't plaing on finishing it. THANK YOU I loved the story!!!
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  • From YamiKaeko on September 21, 2007
    Wonderful!!! I loved it! Keep writing great stories. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Huck on September 21, 2007
    Very nice ending. I thoroughly enjoyed this story to the last sentence.
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