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Reviews for Nameless Desires

By : Jelp
  • From Allys on June 01, 2007
    This is an amazing story. You've planned it out masterfully. I love the back and forth between the present and the past. It's so distracting, I mean there's angst and heaviness and then the memories are light and wonderful. Even with Naruto getting beat up, which was scary. Sasuke and Naruto got along so well, and they all acted like boys their ages actually do. That was such a perfect 'little boy who only thinks he's grown' reaction, on Kenji's part, I can see it happening. And Naruto healing like that and how you tied that into why Sasuke went into the memory. Not to mention Sasuke's reasons for calling Sakura. All masterful, and so very sweet. Even the way Naruto is angling his questioning. I love this. It won't be long though will it? I can see you coming to a head soon-ish, and while that makes me sad it's okay, cause it just fits so perfectly. Whenever I find a story like this I wish AFF had a way to store favourites. It's okay though, it's not like I'm going to be forgetting it anytime soon. Thanks so much for the update XD.
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  • From ANON - RSlover on June 01, 2007
    Motto motto motto motto motto motto MOTTO!!!!!!!
    must know what happens next
    keep up the good work
    ur doin a great job ^_^^_^^_^^_^
    Update soon onegai
    JA"NE =D
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  • From spoon10488 on June 01, 2007
    that rocked! I love your ideas. can't wait for the next chapter please update soon.
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  • From emp78 on June 01, 2007
    Why does Naruto heal so quickly? Does he have the kyuubi sealed in him in this story?
    Anyway, good chapter. Can't wait for the update.
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  • From Revine on June 01, 2007
    Hello. I love this story. I love the fact that it's actually showing what happened in the past prior to the forcing upon Naruto. I'm not good with super long reviews usually, so I'm going to keep it short and simple; It's good. I love it. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Yuue on June 01, 2007
    I like how the story is going as of now i think the only flaw is when Kenji screamed mommy. Oh also i wish kenji would have been pulverized. Harming Naruto is a sin punishable by slow, horrendous, terrible, unspeakable, painful forms of torture to death.
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 01, 2007
    And the suspense thikens! I REALLY thought that what Kenji did was unfair and uncalled for. He is the biggest fictional fictional character I have ever had the displeasure to read... although he also sounds like some sort of crutial part of this whole thing, I don't know why though. Can't wait for the next bit!!

    -Damp *I wonder if Naruto really is a medical miracle.*
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  • From on June 01, 2007
    Thank you so much for the update.
    This story is awesome.
    Update soon please.
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  • From Kimra on June 01, 2007
    Would like to read more. :D
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  • From akume on June 01, 2007
    Yay! Fabulous chapter. Keep them coming. Ja.
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  • From Rosebud on June 01, 2007
    OMG, this chapter was so good.
    (btw: I love your style!!!!)
    I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update soon! XD
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 01, 2007
    An update yeay. Do it again soon
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  • From ANON - chocochoco on May 30, 2007
    This is such a cliff-hanger! The writing is fabulous, I love the way you portrayed the characters! How could Sasuke do something like that to someone he cared about so much? I can't wait for the story to develope. This is definately one of the best fics I've read! Please update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - RSlover on May 28, 2007
    whoooooooo wow now that's a cliffie
    can't wait for the next chpt
    hope you update soon
    and keep up the good work
    ur doin a great job
    I can't wait to read more ^_^
    Ja'ne =D
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  • From OceanBlue on May 28, 2007
    This isn't a one-shot is it? It's so good!


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