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Reviews for Nameless Desires

By : Jelp
  • From blueh on July 12, 2007
    Cool story. I like where your story is going to. Very detailed too. Keep updating and I'll keep reading.

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  • From ANON - lilshippo on July 01, 2007
    omg love it need more how many chaps do u think there will be?????????
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  • From ANON - word_Slave on June 29, 2007
    Hello---
    Cliff hangers are supposed to have follow ups! Please!!!
    JENK
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  • From Greenstages on June 20, 2007
    updateupdateupdateupdateupdateILOVEYOURSTORYupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateudapetoopspelledthatonewrong:Pupdate!!!!
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  • From ANON - RightTurn on June 13, 2007
    Ack! This is so good! I love the way you flow between the past and the present. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 11, 2007
    aww this story is sweet, in a strange kind of way.... I like the way it written though, and i think it has potential o be a great story
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  • From on June 10, 2007
    I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon or I'll die!
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  • From ANON - Damp on June 10, 2007
    Aww, that is so cute! I can't quiet believe that Sasuke hadn't mastrabuted before! That was so funny, someone four years younger than him had already mastrabuted and he hadn't even done it once! Or at least, that's what he claims to. I'm still having a hard time thinking that this all turned out as a rape though.

    -Damp *Most porn has bad acting in it -_-*
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 10, 2007
    This was a great hapter ^_^ it's good to be finding out how things reached the point that they did, my favourite part was when Naruto just stuck Sasuke's finger in his mouth ^_6 and then the porno session was *clears throat* hot I found heh, when Naruto took his shirt off I was like oh-oh how's Sasuke going to react to that so yeah anyway, cool update ^_6 thanks!

    Hina xXxx
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on June 10, 2007
    this story is really really good. i like the fact that naruto is starting to understand and little hints were dropped that maybe he wouldn't completely object to being with sasuke again. and gai and lee always make me smile, so i definitely think using characters even for the small parts was a good idea. more please!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 10, 2007
    This story has me addicted. Damn. I love how you end each chapter event though they're sorta cliffies (the 1st definately) And your style. The flashback thing really works. I hope you continue soon!

    SD&FA
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  • From Allys on June 09, 2007
    Damn, who knew baby Naru was such a tease? LOL, not even Naruto knew, so that makes a grand total of Sasuke being in the know. It's ridiculous how much I enjoy this story. I love that it going on both in the past and in the present (I've probably said that before hmmn, at least this way you know it's true XD).

    Highlights for me:

    Naruto sucking on Sasuke's finger. I've always found that adorable and I can almost picture the look on Sasuke's face XD.

    Naruto and Sasuke's reaction to Gai O.o, LOL. I have no idea what I would do if I ever met anyone like Gai in real life. It's a toss up between running for the hills or finding him horridly fascinating and amusing.

    Sasuke peeping in the shower. For shame! XD.

    Neji giving Sasuke and Naruto porn O.O Holy shit! I can fully picture the smirk. And LOL, I wish my Karate instructor had given me porn XD. I may have paid attention more and stayed longer, of course I was like 12 at the time so probably not, where were those hills again?

    And of course the masturbation. Naruto just whipping his stuff out and starting to pump like that, ZOMG! and then he said Sasuke name O.o, poor Sasuke. How the hell is he supposed to have any kind of self-control when the damn chibi does shit like that?? That scene was amazingly hott. Especially since no one touched anyone else. 10 points for creative ways of working in smut XD

    Huggles - Thanks so much for the update. The more you write the more I fall in love ♥ Please update soon(-ish, take as much time as you need) @--'-,---
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  • From bluegenjutsu on June 09, 2007
    Poor Sasuke!!! Lusting after a young Naruto and not knowing how to control it! Looks like Naruto is starting to understand better. Great chapter! :)
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  • From PieldeLava on June 09, 2007
    Just a great take on Sasuke and Naruto realtionship. It new and fresh, love it. Look forward to the next chapter. Hope you update soon. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - chishio_rikka on June 09, 2007
    very original. Nicely worded with an intriuging plot. You keep Naruto and Sasuke well in character. Their very believable. Please update soon.

    Chishio
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