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Reviews for Perception

By : cynchick
  • From Setryochi on September 18, 2007
    FINALLY! No really, it took me forever to read this story. I pride myself in finishing chapters quickly and these chapters went on and on and on and it took me sooooo looooong. >.< But, I wouldn't have finished the first chapter if I thought this story was terrible. I think you did a very good job in portraying the characters and your transition chapters were appreciated. I was highly impressed with your style of writing and also with the fact that you could keep it flowing so smoothly. I also have to appologize for not reviewing every single chapter but I figure one long one should do it. I loved that fact that you generalized being a shinobi, making it seem like the world really is. Like in wars, BOTH sides believe they're right. ^^ Sakura becoming wise to that fact was a wonderful way to help the story a long and was a good lesson. The one and only thing I have a problem with is Sasuke/Hyuga relations. I feel like there would be a bloodline gene battle and they'd cancel each other out or their kids would be one or the other. It would kind not be good for the Uchiha clan if all of their kids took on the Hyuga bloodline limit. Anyways, I loved your story and I hope to read a lot more from you!

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  • From undercoverfreak on September 18, 2007
    ooh, a sequel would be awesome. Plus I so loved this. I don't know what I am going to read now, well, actually I do becuase I have tons of homework I should be doing. But anyways, that was so kawaii, and I you could see me you would know that I am doing a standing ovation for you. Best fic I ever read (and ythis is talking about6/7 years of reading fics. I will miss this but I loved the fluffy ending!! Arigatoo!! Thanks, Jo.
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  • From ANON - Laura on September 18, 2007
    I read many fanfictions, believe me (english and french -I'm french^^-). And I rarely leave review. But when I do, it means that the story really moved me. You made a story completely true to the real characters' dimension. You passed real deep feelings through your story, far beyond the simplest ones we usual encontrer in other fics. I'll stop here but know you have another fan^^
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  • From ANON - Kakashisgf on September 18, 2007
    Ah, I love it! That's my favorite basic storyline: ItaSaku, then KakaSaku because ItaSaku can't work out in the end. But beyond the basic storyline appeal, your story progressed well, was well-written to the point of making me cry more than once (and I don't cry too often), and had some interesting insights. Just one criticism ... I'm not sure "caressed over" is the correct usage of the word "caress;" I think it stands alone. Alternatives might be "ghosted over," which I think you did use, "brushed over," "stroked," "swept over," "skimmed over," "explored," etc. That aside, congratulations on writing an excellent story. I'm looking forward to the potential continuation/sequel (and maybe some more KakaSaku-ness *wink*).
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  • From ANON - lanier on September 18, 2007
    I am happy and sad to see this story end. I am happy becuase it was written and ended so beautifully. I am sad because there isnt more. but I feel that same way with all great stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed your writting style and how you let the story unfold. Great work.
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  • From MrsCake on September 18, 2007
    What a beautiful story! Congradulations on finishing it and whether you write a sequal or not, I'm sure whatever else you write will be just as great!
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  • From undercoverfreak on September 17, 2007
    I really hope you write a sequel to perception. Loved this story so much.
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  • From ANON - ANdrew on September 17, 2007
    dude that was an awsome story. great ending, kind of saw it coming after chapter 17 ish. well good idea keeping the bride and groom hidden till about half way. kept me suspense. i don't think you should write a sequal to this it ended perfectly

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  • From hasu86 on September 17, 2007
    i've been steadily catching up with this story, as i fell behind in many of my readings since school started again, and damn did i love every second of it. you just have this way with words and portraying emotion that i'm quite envious of really =P i'm especially happy that you decided to put in an epilogue (and a bit of kaka/saku, yesss!!! not that the ita/saku, and the barely there dei/saku wasn't appreciated of course!). it just gave everything a sense of finality and hope, that good things do come out of all the tragedies and the darkness that's always there. a very fitting end to a wonderfully crafted story. i feel grateful to have read it and a world of thanks for sharing your work! i look forward to more!
    -hasu86
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  • From Kaysan on September 17, 2007
    Well, I said I was a KakaSaku fangirl and it has just been reinforced! While I enjoyed the ItaSaku (obiviously since I read the whole thing), I can't help but be thrilled that it ended with Kakashi and Sakura. And I would love to read a sequel, as long as it's still KakaSaku since the ending was just completely beautiful. I truly loved it. Can't wait to see more from you! Hugs & Kisses!
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  • From Tellkalia on September 17, 2007
    Love this story, such a good 'ending' too ^.^ If you do write a sequel, I can't wait to read it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 17, 2007
    whether a sequel or not keep writing...PLEASE!!! IT was awesome
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  • From promise2003 on September 17, 2007
    (after reading your author's notes) I completely agree with how you put Kakashi and Sakura together in this in the epilogue. Actually, I think that it was *because* of her relationship/fling/thingamabob with Itachi that she now fits so well with Kakashi. She was able to race past the years that in a sense separated them, and the experiences that he had over her that made the two of them just the slightest bit incompatible. Kakashi, in my mind, is a bit jaded; so now that Sakura has that same experience, they fit together better. I think that is why when the epilogue put them together it felt so right.

    I still stand by this being my favorite Naruto fic of all time. It was absolutely amazing.
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  • From roxnroll on September 17, 2007
    That was great. I would love to read a sequel. This is my favorite fic to date.
    Rox
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  • From gaara89 on September 17, 2007
    This is honestly the best Het story I've ever read in my life. I say Het, because I know of a Naru/Gaa/Naru story called "I knew you would find me", that is just as good. I will read the sequel when and if you write one. This was amazing. I've never read such a good ita/saku fanfiction.
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