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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - JONQUIL on April 17, 2008
    I know you didn't kill naruto. I don't believe it, I refuse to believe you killed him. I love your stories by the way.
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 17, 2008
    This chapter was a kick in the head. Naruto had better be in the Witness Protection Program and that body had better be a fake, otherwise . . . . . there's really no story if Naruto is really dead and gone. I hope those Vegas references were some hints, Sasuke's revenge isn't enough to carry the story the rest of the way. Anyway a good, if shocking chapter, I look forward to seeing what you come up with next.
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  • From ANON - K on April 17, 2008
    I love this story and it is remarkably well written but I must say, wtf??? I can't even put words to how terrible it was for you to kill off Naruto. I'm not sure I can even finish reading this.
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  • From ANON - FalseImage on April 11, 2008
    Ahhh!! I love your story!! I thought it was finally over, but wow, there's still more! Please update soon! Or maybe you shouldn't since it's taking me away from studying..
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  • From ValheruYaoi on March 22, 2008
    yay, great story so far. 2 chapters left? though looking at it i bet you end up adding another 1 or 2 to what you planned.


    Can;t wait till the end, though guess i have to, 2 reasons. guessing you'll put start the sequel to "The Sound of Dreams" and because this story is also a great story.

    keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - morixharuhi4eva on March 15, 2008
    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! i cant believe you did that...that was awesome!!! please just let this have a happy ending...
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  • From ANON - bluesake on March 12, 2008
    YES! An update! Awesome can't wait for the next one...god whats gonnna happen next
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  • From suzannecmc on March 12, 2008
    YOU KILLED IZUMO AND KOTETSU o-0
    hehehehehehe

    nice trial work.
    nice bathroom moment.
    I wanted them to talk too, but sex is just alright with me!
    I love this story.
    thank you:)

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  • From MyOuTeRiSaLiAr on March 12, 2008
    This was so good...I've missed you...^_^ (from a crazy about your fics lurker)
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  • From Kimra on March 11, 2008
    *cry* when when when will they get a break? Glad you updated I was just thinking this morning that I haven't seen an update from you in ages! :D Oh and the chapter is awesome. :D
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 11, 2008
    They should just let Sasuke and Naruto both have new identities and live together!!! I'm glad they got to have a little action before separation. :)
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  • From ANON - qwerty on March 11, 2008
    Good lord! Didn't see that one coming... well, Orochimaru would have had SOMETHING to get Naruto but damn...
    Good chapter
    update!
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  • From Jelp on March 11, 2008
    Wow! What a chapter! Action filled, plot filled, passion and sexy filled...wow! Well worth the wait. :-) Excited for the next update! ~ Jelp
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  • From marquesgue1 on March 11, 2008
    I know how much you struggled with the court scene but you nailed it on the head, seriously. It wasn't boring, it didn't drag on, it gave us the info we needed while still being a clear scene in our head, I could see everything perfectly so as usual your descriptions were spot on!!! I liked the way you weaved in the evidence and then the way they stood trials, having never been to a trial before lol, to me this is as realistic as it gets so it was done really well Z.

    I was like this '>.
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  • From Allys on March 11, 2008
    Holy Hell sweetheart I KNEW that damn car was gonna blow the fuck up.... DAMN IT!!!! Stupid fucking Oro-BASTARD!!! *breathes* I love this. you rock my world, I'm so cutting class to read this. I miss you guys! *dies*. I have so much shit to do it's unfucking believable. Anyway - The trial was cool, even in it's disjointedness it was absolutely fucking amazing how you got it to all fit in here and go so well. LOL, I can only imagine what kind of craziness this was to get out. But I'm so freaking proud of you and happy that you did XD. it's just another mark of your genius ;). Can't wait for the next one! Oh and Qwiky Lube too ♥, I hope writing the next few is easier on you honey! *MUAH* I'm running now, Ja na!!
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