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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From robyntalks on April 18, 2008
    Say it ain't so. Please tell me you did not turn this into a death fic.
    please tell me that Naruto is alive and well in Las Vegas waiting for Sasuke.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!
    Wahhhhhh if you killed him I'm never reading another thing by you again (well I've already read everything you posted already, I mean none of your new stuff).
    seriously I love this fic.
    Please I want some more.

    Love always Robyn
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  • From MichiyoInue on April 18, 2008
    Hes ALIE!!!!!!!!!! and in Vegas?????? hmmmm man I would have picked like Portland or Charleston..... Or nahh never mind Orlando is boring.... hehehehehehehe I AM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!
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  • From MidnightsKeeper on April 18, 2008
    so, my first thought was 'oh my fucking god you killed naruto!' then i remembered the suspicious postcard, because i didn't remember vegas ever being mentioned. then kakashi dropped major hints (sasuke is sooo out of it, understandably of course) and now my theory is that naruto is totally not dead, but they faked it to protect him, and he is hiding out in vegas. but i've been wrong before. ;)
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  • From ANON - ElfenDream on April 17, 2008
    OMG! It`s the postcard.. isn`t it?? READ THE POSTCARD SASUKE!! naruto can`t be dead... he just can`t. great chappie. ^_^
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  • From suzannecmc on April 17, 2008
    Ohhhh...
    Naruto's a BlackJack dealer in Vagas named Minato now!!!

    You are evil for this...even if we know there will be a happy ending
    ...maybe.

    I really enjoyed this.
    The nasty twist, Sasuke's pain. seamingly vague, but still clues.
    Excellant chapter:)!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 17, 2008
    Chapter 18: (*Whew*) She’s alive. Thank God.

    Hmm, this scene sure looks familiar. ^^ . . . . New character? If I were to guess she was from the manga, I’d say she’d be Anko. . . . The summary is worded really well. Normally I don’t like summaries, but this one’s okay. =) . . . . Ehh, not “fairing” -- “faring.” (*sweat*) . . . . “They were getting the hell out of this town.” I get the feeling that it’s going to be much harder than that. õ_o . . . . (*sigh*) Great. Homophobic coworkers. Wonderful. ¬_¬ . . . . I wonder if Ino needing treatment might make it harder for everyone to get out of town. I dunno how the politics work. . . . I like the detail about “the words scrolling across the bottom of the screen.” Very subtle. ;) . . . . (*after reading the “quieter environment” paragraph*) I heard that Canada has places like that. . . . Damn reporters. They’re so nosy and pushy that it wouldn’t be surprising if one of them was an assassin in disguise. ¬_¬ . . . . “Naruto’s body [. . .] ground.” Huh? What just happened?! õ_õ . . . . Oh, that’s what happened. õ_õ . . . . Ooh, good description! “The next thing Sasuke [. . .] more in his mind.” Love it! =D . . . . Love the description of Sasuke’s panic and his course of actions. Very convincing. =D . . . . Okay, I love the dialogue between Sasuke and Sakura, but, uh, little suggestion: “‘Thank you, Sakura,’ He said sincerely as he pulled out into traffic.” I think the “sincerely” might’ve been a little unnecessary; I could kind of tell he was totally sincere. No big deal, really. ^_^;
    (*snicker*) Very appropriate how the woman explained what “not available” meant. ^^ . . . . Ohhh! It’s Kurenai! =DD . . . . Love how helpless Sasuke feels. . . . Great portrayal of Kurenai as the FBI agent. I can totally see her at it. :heart: . . . . This urge for violence Sasuke’s getting -- I wonder if he ever felt this way before on the job. . . . Once again, awesome ending sentence! ^_^
    O.O Kakashi!! . . . . And -- he’s not wearing it? (*blink*blink*) Does not compute. o_o . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . What? . . . . How. . . ?
    . . . . . . . . . . I’m crying now. Seriously. . . . . . . . . . . . Why?
    Love Sasuke’s speech starting with “Don’t you think I know that?” I really love it. . . . I like how he focuses on the postcard of Vegas. Very realistic. I’ve done that too when I’m in a lot of grief; something just seems to stand out and you just keep staring at it.
    So how did Kakashi and Ebisu get so beat up? . . . . I like the way Ebisu stated the ground rules.
    So Sasuke’s becoming kind of an alcoholic. Interesting. . . . (*weak giggle*) I like how Kakashi announced his arrival and Sasuke’s actions. (Sorry, I’m still crying.) . . . . I guess Kakashi has seen a lot in his day for him to be acting like this.

    (*bursts into renewed sobs*) I’ve never been so unhappy at the end of a chapter. Not due to a lack of skill, it was really good. Too good. This story has really gotten to me. I know this sounds super childish, but please, please find some way for Sasuke to be happy. With Naruto. I know Naruto’s . . . but I can’t help it. This hurts so badly. I’m begging you, Zrina, please make this work out.
    Also, please don’t take too long to update this time. This chapter was really sad, and it’s not something I enjoy reading after such a long wait.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on April 17, 2008
    Naruto has to be alive!! I think the FBI have made it look like he's dead in order to keep Naruto safe from another attempt on his life. But why won't they let Sasuke know? Thanks for the new chapter! :)
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  • From Nikana on April 17, 2008
    He's not dead, isin't he? He's just in Las Vegas, right? It was all a set up, and thats not a question. Are you really that cruel or once again you are just proving that you are a proffesional in disguise and pulling our legs saying you are a fanfic writer?
    Now seriously...I got my pants in a twist and all thanks to this AWSOME and angsty chapter,Zrina you are a goddess but a wicked one, am dying here waiting for the next update, just hoping that Mr. Sunshine is still very much alive and laughing his arse off in wherever you may place him...Or not
    much love super-mega-maxi-girl
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  • From Jelp on April 17, 2008
    This is just a decoy...right? Naruto's not really dead, right? He'll be in Vegas or something...right? T-T He can't be dead. It is not acceptable. It's just not acceptable. And Sasuke really better not do something stupid. I'd be less surprised to see him get killed than Naruto...'cuz Naruto is still alive. ::holds firmly and desperately to hope::

    PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I NEED ANSWERS! I NEED TO KNOW! I N--::SMACK:: ...Okay...I'm okay. I'm settled down now.

    I love this story! :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From Kimra on April 17, 2008
    :D I like you. So I'm going on the premise that Naruto's not actually dead... because honestly if he was the story would kind of be over... I hope. :P Enjoyed reading it. Made me cry (you can be so evil), and can't wait to read more! :D

    Cheers!
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  • From ANON - OMGWTFAWFBKSDJB on April 17, 2008
    YOU KILLED NARUTO!?!?!?!??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    i cannot believe it. for real?? really??? or is it a faked death. then again sasuke freaking saw naruto in the casket.

    youre so cruel!!! ;_;
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 17, 2008
    Naruto's not dead. I refuse to believe it. He can't have gone through all that crap just to have died. You probably have him in Vegas or wherever, hiding so that someone doesn't actually kill him.
    I hope this story ends up happy.
    Great chapter.
    update
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on April 17, 2008
    No. Just no.

    He.Is.Not.Dead

    I think I've just had a heart attack. So bitterly sweet that cliffie was. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter.

    Please please update soon!
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  • From Nasa on April 17, 2008
    you know your fans are going to KILL you...
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  • From roro237 on April 17, 2008
    It's always nice to read a chapter of yours ^_^
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