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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From sonotgoingthere on May 02, 2008
    Yay! New chapter! I really looking forward to the conclusion... I have my suspicions, but I'll wait to see!

    Thanks for writing!
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  • From Picspixie on May 02, 2008
    well i'm relieved big time, after finishing chapter 18 and going on to chapter 19 i'm no longer about to cry
    i'm glad naruto is most likely alive and its cool that u've added shikamaru and choji
    though one thing is bothering me, what happened to itachi, u said that the bodies of sasuke's parents were found but only itachis bloody clothes were found somewhere else and he was missing, so i think he's gonna be coming around sometime
    just a thought , well please update as soon as u can, i spent the whole day reading this whole fanfiction but it was worth it
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  • From Jelp on May 02, 2008
    Sasuke, you brilliant genius you, look at the details to get the larger picture!! :-) I liked this chapter. Seeing Sasuke so vulnerable is very refreshing in that it's very in-character of his personality in the anime and manga. People tend to shy away from portraying Sasuke as someone who would let his life fall around him if things weren't going well.

    Excellent work! Looking forward to the next update. :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From Picspixie on May 02, 2008
    did u kill off naruto? cause if thats seriously what happened i don't see any point to continue reading this, seems the story ends
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on May 01, 2008
    dude, it says can i keep you?!!!!!!!!!!! that is so slick. i wanna read more *is already suffering from withdrawal* this fic is so fricking awesome!!!!! i'm calling my friend right now to discuss this or if she hasn't read it yet to make her do so. looking foward to the next update.

    ~a very excited Devious


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  • From Allys on May 01, 2008
    Sasuke is sooo SLOW!!! LOL, Doesn't he know he's in a fanfic that's gonna have a big hopefully happy final twist!??!! He needs to get the memo dammit! XD. *huggles u*. I feel really bad for him though. He's so down :(, *sighs*. I can see how that would impair his good judgment. Poor Kakashi is probably dying to just yell at him to stop fucking moping and get his ass on a plane to god damn Vegas!! LOL. I hear the desert's nice this time of year *nods*. You're unbelievably awesome!! Another update!! *dances tiredly but happily*. :). I'm so freaking thrilled that you're writing again, was going into Zrina withdrawal!! I can't wait till Sasuke figures it out XD, :* ♥
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 01, 2008
    Poor Sasuke is being stupid!! All this time he's wasted when Naruto is in Vegas, waiting for him!!! :D Thanks for the new chapter! :)
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  • From robyntalks on May 01, 2008
    Brilliant!! I took a look again at the postcard and it really does say CAN I KEEP YOU
    ha ha ha drop a letter ha ha ha
    LOVE YOU
    Updat soon please

    Love always Robyn
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  • From robyntalks on May 01, 2008
    well now we're getting somewhere, now we just sit back and wait for Sasuke to put all the pieces together.
    HELLO SASUKE *nocking on his head* IS ANY ONE IN THERE? ^_^
    Love the update. can't wait for the reunion.

    Love always Robyn
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  • From ANON - qwerty on May 01, 2008
    Theory: Naruto's not dead. His death was staged so that Orochimaru would stop trying to kill him. Naruto is sending the postcards, so clearly, he is in Vegas for his own protection. Kakashi knows this because he keep pestering Sasuke to look at the postcards.
    Good chapter. Keep it up!
    Update!
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  • From ANON - OMGWTFAWFBKSDJB on May 01, 2008
    awwwwwwwmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan.... oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man oh man ohmanohmanohmanohmanohmanohman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU. MUST. MUST. UPDATE. A.S.A.P. ahh poor sasuke!maaaaaan that HAS to be naruto in vegas... PLEASE LET IT BE HIM. HAS TO BE. HAAAaaaaaS TO BEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!


    i love you and this story. and you cause be to type like a madwoman. sigh.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 01, 2008
    Chapter 19: (*sigh*) Hopefully things’ll work out. T_T. . . . I hope I enjoy too. >.< . . .
    Sasuke’s probably trying to kill himself, drinking like that. ó_ò . . . . Love the line about his hair. It does get crazy when it gets long. . . . Jeezus, he’s got a gun? Õ_Õ What the hell? . . . . Man, that was intense, Kakashi’s entrance. o_o . . . . (*snort*) I can’t believe Kakashi said that. 9_9; . . . . “Sacred.” Consecration. =) . . . . Wow, he’s really distant. “ ‘Oh. Lost another partner,’ he answered absently.” Sounds like the walking dead. õ_o . . . . Kakashi, if Naruto is indeed alive (I don’t see how, but just supposing) and is currently in Las Vegas, you might want to drop some more hints for Sasuke, because he’s just not getting it. . . . Love Sasuke’s adamancy. That’s totally him. :heart: . . . . Watch it, Goddammit, Sasuke. (*hiss*) . . . . Love this line: “You’re obviously close to this case and it’s muddled your thinking.” :heart: . . . . And I love how Kakashi then says, “Shut up. I’m not done yet,” before Sasuke says anything. I can totally hear him saying that. =D . . . . Really good lecture on how it works to be a professional detective. =D . . . . Yeah, if anything, the booze might just make things harder for him to think straight. . . . Interesting line on how Sasuke feels about disappointing Kakashi. It’s kind of a funny thought, being lectured by a porn shop owner of all things. ^^ . . . . Excellent job, Kakashi. You opened his eyes, so he wasn’t running around blind. ^_^ . . . . Or maybe not. = . . . . (!) You smelled something, Sasuke. õ_õ . . . . Love these details. I’m not totally sure about what’s going on, but that’s okay, I like it. =D . . . . Sasuke, if you really want revenge, you’re going to have to face it. . . . Focus, Sasuke, focus. You’re a ninja in one world, a detective in this world, you can do this. . . . This detective-at-work scene is absolutely amazing. I’m impressed. =D . . . . Love his willpower against the drink. . . . Okay, that time I can understand it, Sasuke. You might need one for this. I just hope you can still think straight. . . . Is there a secret in the tattoo, I wonder? Sasuke, either way, you’re probably going to have to take a really close look at the more personal pictures. The ones that show Naruto’s face and tattoo and all that. Cuz that’s probably where you’ll find something weird (if something’s weird, and God, I hope it is). . . . Sasuke, you dumb shit, WAKE UP!! ò_ó
    Sasuke needing to shave. I’ve been reading another fanfic that mentioned that just the other day, and I still have to get used to the idea. It’s . . . kind of strange. = . . . . I like how you broke up the sentences in the postcard. I wonder if that’s because of the limited amount of space in a postcard, or is there some kind of hint. Either way, the placement of the breaks is awesome. =DD . . . . “Drop a letter” . . . a capital letter at the beginning? õ_o . . . . (*snicker*) I absolutely adore how you brought Shikamaru into this. ^^ (Though I have a tough time imagining him as a forensic expert. *sweat*) . . . . Ah, there’s that word “blackmail” again. . . . Eww, that’s gross. x_x . . . . Hang on . . . this is where Sasuke’s going to notice some odd stuff, isn’t he? . . . . Yup, he’s smelling something again. . . . SsssssHIT! Don’t do that, Sasuke! ò_ó . . . . I wonder who that girl at the casino was. A character from the manga, or just an OC?

    *SQUEEEEEEE!!!* XDDDDD
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  • From enchants on May 01, 2008
    No offense, but the fake death is overdone... it's a great story and all, but I was disappointed...
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  • From Nasa on May 01, 2008
    ksdf;aksdj;laksdghaf you and your @#($& cliffhangers! *throws peaches at*
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  • From ANON - Kel on May 01, 2008
    Oh1 Oh1 He's not really dead is he? The postcards are from Naruto! Right? Right?!?!
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