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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From yaoilover07 on May 26, 2007
    How are you going to have SAsuke find out about the blackmail? Will he and Naruto fall for each other?
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  • From ANON - Sama on May 26, 2007
    O.o Omg Zrina...How do you do it? Your so damn talented and you make the stories characters come to life so...so..Wow damn I can't even put it into words!!! But I must beg, beg you to pleaaaaaaasssseeee!! Consider continuing this story!!! I love it so far! The first chapter...damn I think I'm going to be blushing for awhile and thats in a good way!! LOL. I hope you understand what I'm trying to say and don't think me weird or anything. I love your stories!! YOU FRIGGING ROCK!! You must, must continue this cause I can see so many ways you can take this!! If you do update this story...I'll...I'll...grrr I don't know! I'll bow to your greatness or I'll be you dom or sub for all eternity!! PLEASEEEEEEEEE UPDATE!! GAH! I can't wait! LOVE YA! Ttul!
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  • From ANON - invain13 on May 26, 2007
    OMG!! Don't leave it like this! :O We want more!!! this was freaking good xD
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  • From akume on May 26, 2007
    You know this story would make an awesome one-shot, but then I think I'd might regret it later on. So, please make this a multi-chapter.
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  • From Adi on May 26, 2007
    LEAVE IT AS A ONE SHOT?!?!!?!?!?!?!? You're asking to get shot! XD

    Aw Zrina, babe, you have to continue *thrusts sasuke plush doll at you* You my dear are worth my most precious item! XD Take it! Use it to inspire yourself :D

    The plot would be good, I can just see it, oh the angst, the drama, the SMUT! *goes off into lalala smut land*

    huh what were we talking about?

    XD

    I'm gonna go reread that, and I'll leave you a proper review in the morning ;D

    Adi XX
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  • From marquesgue1 on May 26, 2007
    Oh dear, Sasuke's betraying his fiance is he? *sigh* yare yare - but hey :d smex was HOT!!! (as if you didn't know already) but yeah, it was interesting I think and you're unsure whether to continue it or not? well heh if you do XD I'd really really want to read it but hey no pressure here :) but you just left it in a situation where I want to know what the hell is going to happen after this, especially with the mixed feelings Sasuke left wth anyway, it was good ^_6

    Hina xXxx

    p.s. you make Naruto so damn hot I drool lol
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  • From ladygizarme on May 26, 2007
    omg, zrina, you CAN'T leave it as a oneshot!! it was SO hot and such a great and perfect setup for MUCH MORE, you just can't leave it here!! gahh, i wonder what oro would be blackmailing sasuke for in payment, and why--just cuz he can, or is there something more going on? does sakura have any clue, and what about all the biting sasu let naru do? is he all marked up now? oooh when sasuke finds out it was all just to blackmail him, if he's got marks to physically remind him it could compound his regrets and confusion... you just have so much potential for drama and more future smut here, you can't leave us hanging!!! ppplllleeeeaaassseeee *pooly eyes*
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  • From PieldeLava on May 26, 2007
    I hope you continue. Great job, I love your orginial idea. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From ANON - Epi on May 26, 2007
    I love it :D I'd gladly read more of this story if it's not too much for you to write SoD and this one at the same time. It seems everything you write is made of greatness.
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  • From Allys on May 26, 2007
    Wow, love. It's really good so far, really sad though. The smut as usual was excellent and the hinted at story line has a lot of possibilities. I can't tell you what to do with it, but I can tell you that if you do decide to continue, I'll be here all the way. I've been dying for a Good cop drama. I've seen a lot of attempts but haven't found one I really liked. Thanks for writing, I always adore your stories XD.
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  • From Jelp on May 26, 2007
    Wow. I think you should continue it. Make it five to ten chapters. Nothing too elaborate, but enough so that Sasuke and Naruto can get together. :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From ANON - Gatty on May 26, 2007
    asjskdj YES PLEASE TO BE CONTINUING. That was hot. Your fic is wonderful, always is. I live for Sound of Dreams updates, honestly. I would love to see you continuing with this AU, there's so much just bubbling under the surface there!
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  • From ANON - Igno on May 26, 2007
    Please continue! :D
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  • From BishounenKrazed on May 26, 2007
    omg! it's great as a oneshot... but... please continue it if you can. of course, i wouldn't want it to be all angsty and whatnot. maybe as naruto's editing the tape, he thinks that maybe he can get sasuke to help him save ino instead of ruining the uchiha. ah! i'm angsting about it already, and you don't even know what you're going to do with the story!

    but it was very, very good! thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - animehead on May 26, 2007
    You know damn well you can't leave this as a one shot! I won't have it!

    That was wonderful and so vivid and realistic. I swear. OMG that was good. Just picturing Naruto dressed like that...GOD. I actually kind of thought about the Yondy dressed like that as well (don't know why hahaha) Poor Sasuke though. Engagaed to pinky and she won't even give him a blowjob. Stupid girl. Continue? I'll love you even more than what I do now!
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