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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From Adi on May 28, 2007
    *looks at Zrina squinty eyed* you're some sort of genius aren't you? You're like the genius of NaruSasu smut. *nods* I'm on to you!

    Ok I'm back, just like I promised XD I don't know how much of a review you'll get out of me because rereading that I'm still a puddle of fangirl goo, but never fear! I shall try!!

    I LOVE that Sasuke was a tall uke, I don't think I've ever read a fic with a taller uke :D You made Naruto so so so so SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO smexy. Sasuke was so IC as well, I loved your descriptions of everything, the bar, the chairs, the room, your attention to detail is amazing, you give just enough to let the reader see your world, but not too much that we all fall asleep XD

    And you used condoms! WAY TO PRACTISE SAFE SEX! :D

    I'm going to reiterate what all the other 30 something reviews above me have said, YOU MUST NOT LEAVE THIS AS A ONE SHOT.

    I haven't found any cop dramas that I like, and yours has plot written all over it! So you must continue, pretty please?

    I liked that Naruto doesn't feel too guilty because he figures Sasuke's just an ass cheating on his fiance, O_O SAKURA! If you do carry on I can't wait to see what you do with her! :D

    My absolute favourite part was when Sasuke left wanting Naruto to follow him. So typical of him XD

    *loves on you* you make me and so many others very happy fangirls, you're like the saint of the NaruSasu fandom XD
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  • From ANON - Avonne on May 28, 2007
    NANIIII, Naruto what???! You definitely can't leave it on its own now that you threw some plot in there at the end! That was really good and interesting. And of course the smut was hot too!

    Now to read chaps 54 & 55 of SoD! :D


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  • From ursweetheartless on May 27, 2007
    hmm... that was quite good, very enjoyable really, i prefer my naru/sasu with a little bit of "taking advantage", which that did wonderfully. i feel like i /could/ work on it's own, as a oneshot, but it could also go on, there are lots and lots of loose ends there, things to tie up, but none of them are /vital/

    i'd vote for more, it's a good story ^.^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on May 27, 2007
    I love this story!! I hope you continue it! The lemon was so hot!!!! :)
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  • From serenagold on May 27, 2007
    wow.. that was different. this is a very original AU story. I hope you take it further if you figure out where you'd want it to go. If not, then it was one hell of a oneshot! ^^
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  • From Finnel on May 27, 2007
    please don't leave this as a one shot!
    it's good so far and personally, i wanna see what sakura does when she finds out her precious sasuke-kun was out playing uke!!!
    ohhhh the reaction!!!! ~smiles in a happy-evil way~
    that and you've already got some back story at the end there so it would be a shame to not use it!
    but it is up to you!
    luck!
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  • From ANON - X on May 27, 2007
    oh hell no you better not leave this at a one shot...more more more
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  • From Calisto on May 27, 2007
    No you cant stop I want to know how they get out of this.
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  • From KyuubiKit on May 26, 2007
    Nice twist there at the end, I wasn't expecting that at all but it was good. Poor little Naruto though, having to do all those things for that snake bastard. Lol. Seriously though it's a nice piece and you should continue it, though i kinda sense Naruto will be getting hurt a lot, physically and emotionally, but we all love to torture our favorite characters don't we.
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  • From Bluesake on May 26, 2007
    Awesome...that's all I have to say. Very nice you should continue it!
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  • From DiRtYwRiTeR on May 26, 2007
    This was awesome!
    I'd love to read more!
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on May 26, 2007
    Wow! That was majorly hot! Thanks for the lemon, and btw SoD is an extremely amazing story one of my top favs. A sequel to this lemon would definitely be appreciated:)
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  • From OceanBlue on May 26, 2007
    Oh yeah. Waaaay too good of a story and plot for a one-shot. Update!
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  • From ANON - ~Life's Little Deceptions~ on May 26, 2007
    OMG! This is so great! -blink- I saw that you were writing another fic (I really love Sounds of Dreams) so I said, 'What the heck' and BAM! I'm addicted!

    -shudders- this is such a great plot! I really hope you don't make this a one shot =^^= Its really really really good!
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  • From YamiKaeko on May 26, 2007
    please continue with this story. I like it and I would like to see more of it. Je!
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