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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From Pho on June 24, 2007
    An update, yay! I liked the chapter. Sometimes plot is just as fun as sex, if it's good. And this is pretty good. And Buttercup does kick ass...but I don't watch the show either. So how's Naruto going to hit Sasuke close to home? Hmm...I bet it's something good. Can't wait to see where you take this. Good job.
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  • From Rosebud on June 23, 2007
    This story is so good! Please update soon! ^^
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  • From llyoung on June 23, 2007
    Glad you included Asuma. Very few fics do and I like him.
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  • From Bluesake on June 23, 2007
    >.< keep going!
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  • From Jelp on June 23, 2007
    Poor Naruto. I hope everything works out okay for him. Excellent chapter! ~ Jelp
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  • From BishounenKrazed on June 23, 2007
    my god, that was so good. naruto's got skills, that's for damn sure. and i liked how naruto didn't get all demanding and huffy with sasuke. i thought it was so naruto and so sweet that he hesitantly asked for help. and i wonder how he's going to 'hit him close to home.' maybe he could play the family card...

    i was wondering... naruto's note at the beginning said 'the toy chest' but the place sasuke went was 'the toy shop.' are they synonymous in the story's world, or was that a typo? (sometimes things happen that one thinks are a mistake when it's actually a point in the plot, so... i never take things like this for granted...)

    oh, i can't wait for the next chapter!! this is such an awesome story. good luck with this one and your others!
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  • From Allys on June 23, 2007
    O.O, Holy Crap Zrina XD. Didn't know you had it in you, LOL, but I'm not surprised. That shit was Scary!!!! Damn that was technical XD. I really don't like that Naruto has to do that job though :(. He could do a lot worse than Asuma, :sighs: This story is still the bomb. Loved the first scene with Naruto and Sasuke, wasn't nearly as eye-popping as that last bit XD, but it was still sexy. Sasuke seeing himself on tape was hot. I also love how the plot is advancing XD. It certainly seems like you're having a lot of fun writing this story XD. Almost as much fun as I'm having reading it ;D. That was amazingly awesome, and really kind of funny. I could totally see poor Asuma with a horse cock, LOL. And I love that you made the point that most normal people, would have been running for their lives XD. The fact that Sasuke thinks he meant nothing and was just used, wasn't even really wanted is sad though. I mean I don't have any delusions of love at first sight or anything, but he was most definitely wanted, and he's still wanted, so he shouldn't feel completely used. :sighs: It'll make for fun arguments and angry confessions though, and I love those :D, so it's all good. LOL, Ja love. Thank you so much for the update XD.
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  • From marquesgue1 on June 23, 2007
    Man the situation Naruto's in sucks :s but at least Sasuke heard him out - well sort of anyway. It looks like it's going to be a tough ride for our boys but I can't wait to see. Thanks for the update, it was great as usual ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on June 23, 2007
    Awesome as always. I totally love this story and the creativity behind it is sooo amazing. Please update because I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - armina on June 14, 2007
    *in faux english accent a la Oliver Twist* Please mum, I want some more!
    Really good, and I like the issues that you're bringing up here. I can't wait to see how this progresses. But be sure to take all the time you need to make sure it's as good as you can get it. Quality is worth the wait!
    A.S.
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  • From Greenstages on June 10, 2007
    Oh, I feel bad for Sasuke-kun. But I have never liked a dominant Naruto more! Please update soon!
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  • From LifeonHiatus on June 10, 2007
    exquitiste story. i love how this is going. i believe the most captivating aspect of the story are the characters and how *real* they feel. their personalities, and troubles are understandable and heartwrenching. i especially enjoyed the sasuke and sakura bit, haha, theyre just like an actual couple. im looking forward to your next update. :-)
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  • From hisoka on June 10, 2007
    thats funny, he thought of her as the guy (naruto) who screwed him and ended up calling her a slut witch wouldnt mean anything if it were that guy probably woulda made him hornyer.please continue i like this.
    updates?
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  • From ladygizarme on June 10, 2007
    kyaa yay i'm glad you're continuing it!! love your a/n of not condoning sasusaku lol. also loved how you did their sex scene, though, with sasuke thinking about and imagining naruto and getting so into it he forgot himself and who he was really with... omg, it was great, especially the comparisons of what he *should* be hearing to what his imagination made him hear. *sigh* oh sakura, you're such a sheltered lil girl when it comes to sex it seems... (not that sasu was acting that way cuz he loves YOU... cuz he's so not XD) oh well, it'll be your loss girly :p i wonder if she notices anything strange about sasu keeping his bite marks covered yet? (the bit about sasuke turning to pee when she brought him clothes, to further deter her from lingering, was greatness, btw) ..if she's staying at her parents' now she'll prob be gone long enough for them to heal now (if naru doesn't get his hands on sasuke again before then lol) omg, and before that, with sasuke jerking himself off in front of the mirror.. while fingering all the marks naruto left?!! SO FUCKING HOT *_* hot damn

    as for naruto's part, the setting descriptions, along with description of oro's place in the underworld, were lovely. and i simply loved the easy-yet-hostile banter between naruto and suigetsu! a bit of karin-bashing by way of suigetsu tickles me pink as well heheh. his hatred for her amuses me to no end. i wonder what naruto's got in mind now and what he'll do next concerning sasuke, the video, oro and ino... whoo i can't wait for your next update!! thanks again for continuing it!!!!!

    ~ lg
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  • From Sekre on June 10, 2007
    Lovin it :)
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