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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From kaesaku on August 07, 2007
    yay, new chappie!
    ooh, naruto's going to sasuke's place?
    nice!
    'hope sakura's not there..
    hehehe.. ;p
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  • From hisoka on August 05, 2007
    hope they get somewere,not that i care but is sakura still angry?is she still like gone or something?if you dont answer these questions i wont care cuz i really dont care about her and ill probly forget i asked these questions by the time i read the next chapter
    keep it up
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on August 05, 2007
    NICEE! I can't even tell you how much I love this story! It is progressing very nicely. The writing is just getting better and better and the plot is becoming more complicated with the obvious smexiness :P I can't get enough of detective stories and their just aren't manhy of those around. This one hit the mark! It is defnitely one of my faves. You have some amazing talent. PLease, please update soon :)
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  • From onobaby on August 05, 2007
    “Obviously not gods of agriculture or hunting.”

    Shit...I nearly pissed my pants when I read that. Fucking funny...

    SO, Sasuke is going to take Naruto to his house *grins*...Is Sakurabitch gonna be there or is she still at her mommies house crying because she never knew Sasuke liked to fuck dir-tay?

    I can't wait for the next chapter. Chinese food and sexual tension oozing from their very pores...

    I meant the sexual tenison oozing...not the chinese food.

    Sorry...It's late *sigh*

    Looking forward to your next one. It's always a pleasure reading your stories.

    --onobaby--
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  • From TFizzle on August 05, 2007
    You just had to ignite my curiousity and then end the story line,huh?
    Well,I am not disillusioned yet....I will still be sticking around for
    the next chapter,so there!!!!!!BUT,don't make me wait too long....
    I can't make any promises...^O^...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!
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  • From Jelp on August 05, 2007
    Hmm...Naruto meeting Sakura perhaps? I still think it would be hilarious if Naruto knew Sakura or if Sakura and Ino were once friends or something. Excellent, excellent chapter! ~ Jelp
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  • From Kimra on August 04, 2007
    :D I love this story. Your an awesome writer and I just have to keep telling you that in the hopes that it has an influence. :D
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 04, 2007
    I love how they are spending more time together! It's good that they are getting the opportunity to learn more about each other. :)
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  • From Rosebud on August 04, 2007
    OMG, I REALLY love this story... Way too much for it to be legal! I don't know why, but every time I read the parts that have Kakashi in them, I think of that one show...Home Improvement? I think it was, where the neighbor's face is always being blocked by something and it just cracks me up.
    Hehe LOTS of Naruto and Sasuke spending time with each other in here, YAY. It's ok that they weren't making out or doing something naughty in this chapter...cause I'm sure that the case would NEVER get solved if they kept molesting each other LOL. Ah... but now Naruto's going over to Sasuke's... I'll be interesting to see what happens. Is Naruto going to meet Sakura, I wonder????
    AHHHHH! Please up date soon, I can't wait to find out!
    ~Lots of love, Crimson2006
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  • From crazychemgeek on August 04, 2007
    Ooooh - what a great chapter. I really liked how Sasuke was protective of Naruto (even if it was to Naruto himself) and how he's starting to think more and more about poor Naruto. You were right about the chapter needing no smut, but I can't wait to see those two together again, especially after re-reading the vibrator chapter :)
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  • From Allys on August 04, 2007
    Awwwww... :HUGGLeS U: LOL, It's okay baby XD. LOL. That a/n was WAY Cute! You made a good run of it XD, and there was Definitely enough sexual tension in this chapter to make up for it. Not to mention it was an Entire chapter of NaruSasu interaction and the promise of interaction in the next one, so LOL. There is NOTHING to Forgive!! This was Excellent! :Loves on U: and they're actually getting to know each other, that's the way it's supposed to be XD. The smut is fucking AWESOMELY Hawt!! LOL, but it won't make the story go round, unless the chapters are hella Long, LOL, so I understand that. You're such an excellent author, and smarter than that to let things like smut in every chappie hamper your vision XD. I love that Sasuke's getting jealous already, you know how I love that. And he's got poor sweet (leers) little Naruto nervous and Horny XD :waggles eyebrows: Fantastic. And LMAO!! Let the Karin bashing begin XD. Well the bitch deserves it, she really did prove that she was a psycho stalker of mega proportions in this last manga chapter. Don't we ALL wish she had never run into Sasuke. And 50 points Sasuke-kun - “You aren’t merchandise,” :MUAH!!: LOL and another 20 points - “Obviously not of gods of agriculture or hunting,” LMAO!! XD. And LOL, Kakashi as Wilson, I really Love that XD. But question. Why is Sasuke guilty about inviting Naruto over to his house? Is it cause he feels bad that Naruto isn't really in a position to get invited to people's houses. Or (and this is probably more likely) is it that it's his and Sakura's house?? Hmmmn, I guess he's sweet either way :D. Thank you SOO Much for the update love XD. I count the days between fortnights trust me, LOL.
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  • From Bluesake on August 04, 2007
    >.< urgh so good. I cant wait for another update
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  • From BishounenKrazed on August 04, 2007
    they are just so cute together, no matter that they're both in serious danger and one is forced to be a slut by an evil mob-like person. and what in the world could possibly happen back at sasuke's place, where there's undoubtedly alcohol and most definitely a bed? *hint, hint*

    i love how serious and real naruto is in this story, that he's not the happy-go-lucky idiot others portray him as. and i like how sasuke is willing to admit that he wants some kind of relationship with naruto, be it as lovers or friends. it makes me happy that he's not trying to deny it, that he at least wants some kind of comfort and happiness in his life.

    man, this story is awesome! i look forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Dragon7 on August 04, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON
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  • From jelliott on August 04, 2007
    Ah, I finally get a chance to review this thing! First off, Zrina, I love you. If I need a smut fix I know just where to come (ha, no pun intended--much). As for the story premise, I really like it. (I'm a total "Law and Order" junkie, so a detective fic is right up my alley.) I'm actually interested in where you found your inspiration (if you haven't mention so already).

    So far, my favorite scene would have to be when Sasuke and Sakura are having sex and Sasu has his little slip. Priceless.

    I'm looking forward to reading more. Take care.

    ~Jae (Dirtyangel)
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