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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From Jelp on August 20, 2007
    Excellent chapter, as always. Love the little bit about the silk boxers at the end. ^_^ Keep up the good work! ~ Jelp
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  • From marquesgue1 on August 19, 2007
    God I think I missed the review for the last chapter! Gomen - but this just keeps on getting better and better! In chp 7 i love the way they were slightly awkward when they got to sasuke's house, i found it realistic, i also liked the extra info we got on sasuke and the smut in the kitchen was like WHOA *wipes away drool* so yeah loool,I loved when Naruto was telling Sakura that Sasuke had worked up a real sweat loool but i wanted to cover him up when she started checking him out - like sasuke i suppose looool :D really glad you updated, this story is fantastic ^_6

    Hina xXxx
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  • From hisoka on August 19, 2007
    the benifit thats nice, sakura was eyeing him hard surprise sasuke didnt call attention to it.
    update when possible
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  • From Kimra on August 19, 2007
    :D
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  • From Bluesake on August 19, 2007
    Love the story it was so hot with them on the floor...this is getting so good please do continue it ^^x
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  • From ANON - animehead on August 18, 2007
    another wonderful chapter! please tell me that sakura's going to walk in on them going at it or that sasuke and sakura are going to end their relationship soon. it hurts so much to see them together. gah! i want to know what happens next! why do you torture me?! i luffs you!! i always get so excited when i read this fic. this is definitely the best cop fic ever.

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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on August 18, 2007
    Fantasticly SMEXY!! The grinding on the floor was hott....very very hott. You write limes very good, yes you do. This chapter was amazing as usual and your talented writing never ceases to astound me! I love it! The plot is developing so nicely. PLease, please update soon ! :)
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  • From ANON - bea-chan on August 18, 2007
    more jealous Sasuke, please~!

    NaruSasu ohoho I love Naruto in this. =D
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  • From BishounenKrazed on August 18, 2007
    man, i was ready for some clawing and eye gouging when sakura walked in. and i don't care how suave sasuke is, how the hell was he not panicking when he walked into the living room to see them together? i definitely would have. i would have been like, "omg, did that dobe say anything to give us away?" and whatnot.

    extremely awesome. the grinding was hot, and i really liked the extra touch you threw in there about it being for sasuke, so naruto would just attend to the uchiha's needs. it was all like, "aww."

    anyway, this was exactly what i needed after a long day of work. thank you so much for the update! i look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 18, 2007
    It's funny how Sasuke is possessive over Naruto already and doesn't like how Sakura looks at Naruto. XD Another great chapter!! :)
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  • From Allys on August 18, 2007
    O.o, *leers* Hehehehehe XD. This just keeps getting more and more sticky now doesn't it XD. LOL, Yummy ;). So Naruto's gonna sleep over huh, :D Well it is what I wanted if not how I wanted it XD. LOL, Sakura checking him out huh XD. Yes!!! LOL, Jealous Sasuke XD, my favourite kind. and Naruto sleeping on their couch in only black silk boxers O.O. You are just spoiling for controversy aren't you XD. I love that Naruto is actually infatuated and not at all jealous of Sakura, LOL, but really he has no reason so... I'm also of two minds about the whole relationship thing. I want them to screw like bunnies!! LOL, but I want them to develop a real relationship too!! O.o, ohhs the indecision!!! LOL, so glad that part is left up to you, you seem to have it firmly under control. Oh Zrina!! Save me from my deviant ways XD!! LOL, *Glomps you* (Big love for keeping it real) I'm glad we're making headway on the case, and now you have me nervous. O.o, commenting on jail time and the faults in the justice system. Hmmm, and I certainly hope that Sakura doesn't do any checking or casual mentioning on/of Sasuke's new 'partner' And Zomg!! Naruto!! “Oh, he’s in the shower. We had a hard day, a real grind, and he worked up a sweat,” he said with a teasing grin. O.o, LMAO!!!!! Thank you so much for the update, honey. *Loves on you and this fic*. Oh and Hooray for scanners ;).

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  • From DeviousLilDevil on August 18, 2007
    "We had a hard day, a real grind, and he worked up a sweat" LOL. couldn't have described that better myself. i just love reading your work. looking foward to the next update.
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  • From Rosebud on August 18, 2007
    OMG, this chapter was just Yummy! I enjoyed everything about it!!!
    Hehe, Sakura kept eyeing Naruto and Sasuke didn't like it... I loved that part! LOL!XD
    Awesome chapter, as always your writing skills leave me wanting more!

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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 07, 2007
    I really like your story! I feel like you capture Sasuke and Naryto perfectly!! Keep up the good work you have a true talent.
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  • From Adi on August 07, 2007
    Sometimes I forget to review! YOU NEED TO POKE ME AND REMIND ME!!! XD Don’t be sad about the lack of smut, it just means when smut does come it’s a nice happy surprise and keeps me on my toes :D:D Plus then I miss it and appreciate it so much more.

    I love the depth you’ve put into Naruto in this chapter, it shows that he has a mask on, and that he feels and that his job affects him more than it appears. That he doesn’t realise that he’s slowly starting to care for Sasuke. THEY LOVE EACH OTHER! THEY DO. Stupid boys, but sexual tension and repressed feelings make it exciting and frustrating and wanting more all at the same time. I want them to smex yes, but I want them to know they only want each other :D but that’s pushing it :(

    I love the banter, the slight insults and teasing, it makes their relationship something comfortable without them realising it.

    I’m not gonna scream about Kakashi, *resists urge* even though his lines were sheer brilliance, but because I know you have a few issues with him, I’m not gonna say how much I love you writing him, or uh demand you write more pornshopowner!Kakashi, nope, I have self control *nods* XD yup lots of self control *whistles*

    The scene with groping the woman, was funny, kinda sad underlining and more just yelling “hands off, bitch, property of Sasuke” Jealous!Sasuke is fun because he has so many issues with life, that adding another makes it that much more fun to watch.

    I WANTED NARUTO TO NIBBLE THAT EAR.

    *ahem*…yeah. :D

    The plot thickens! :D my favourite line is of course “You aren’t merchandise,” he hissed (quickly followed by Kakashi’s actions with the Sucking Susan :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D)

    A dinner date and Sasuke’s house, whatever will happen? :D
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