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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From Raina on September 01, 2007
    O.O

    Ok..., so Zrina + smut monster = Drooling, nose bleeding (a la Ebisu when he saw the Harem no Jutsu) Aikage. Yup, thats new math.

    Darn you, big mouth Sakura!! I know she doesn't know better, but damn! Baki is not the one *sigh*... Oh man are they screwed.

    -Rai
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  • From Allys on September 01, 2007
    Fuuuuuck!!!! OH God! Fuck! Noooo! Sakura you Idiot! Oh fuck! ... ... ... ... ZRINA!!! What are you trying to do to me!??? First you Absolutely kill me with sweetness. That was AMAZING! Oh my god that was just... Heart Melting!! ♥ And then... Ugghhh!!! They're going to kill him. They're going to kill my blond baby, and Sasuke, and it'll be all over! Nooo! You big Meanie *loves you* When Naruto said he wanted to keep him *died a little*, and when Sasuke got on the couch and pulled up the covers *heart palpitations brought me back to life* and then, "I'll protect you." *died all over again*. LOL, That was soo Gorgeous! You deserve some kind of prize, and omg the slowness. It was so intense and perfect. You are Amazing, this is Incredible and you're freaking me out with that ending, Oh God!!!! *holds head* Lovely lady, you crush me! LOL, and God does this chapter remind me of that song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aiEQysBSnuM

    You've Officially Pwn'd. Thank you ♥

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  • From ANON - mallrats2007 on September 01, 2007
    please dont tell me that is it will u put an update for this on livejournal
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  • From Chria on September 01, 2007
    It was oblivious that they were going to get caught because they are both under supervision from their bosses but the way it happened shocked me. I screamed 'Sasuka! That BITCH!' God, they're fucked now. Unless Baki really is a good guy buttt I doubt that. Btw, your smex is the best. Much love~
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on September 01, 2007
    OH NO! STUPID SAKURA! Wow, you had my heart pounding by the end of this chapter. Not only because of the fantastically written smut( VERY VERY HOTT BTW ), but because of one of the worst cliffhangers in history. By worst I mean one of the most thrilling :P Gods, you had me worked up. The story is definitely getting more interesting. Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is developing perfectly. I absolutely adore your writing style in not only this story but in your other ones as well. Please keep up the great work and update soon! I'm dying here!
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  • From marquesgue1 on September 01, 2007
    'I want to keep you'

    oh my god my chest clenched so hard with that one it was just like - omg omg omg >.< I really really loved that!!! God Naruto is just so - there are no words - I loved the smut LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!! It was smut but it was so intense, it was like they were testing to see how they felt about each other through the touches and kisses and omg that one kiss at the beginning it was just - I just thought it was really well written. And I'm proud of Sasuke too - for contemplating his future, it meant that despite his anger at Naruto for his words before, they did seem to reach and he himself knows that Sakura doesn't hold the kind of life he wants. It was amazing it really was amazing, your writing is amazing - i saw everything so clearly -

    okay okay - i'm just ranting but it was really one of my favourite scenes ever in fanfiction it really was. but at the end there - *sigh* Haruno Sakura - well done - well done for probably screwing things up... but I since she's clueess about the whole situation I'll try to not hold a grudge against her... but if this causes trouble for our boys I might just have to - especially after what Naruto and Ino went through they shouldn't have to go through anymore...

    It's okay though it's okay cause Sasuke said he'd protect him aww Sasuke *melts*

    I really loved this chapter, really really loved it. Okay I'll shut up now >.
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  • From Kerrisa on September 01, 2007
    That was a beautiful scene *happy tears*
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  • From BishounenKrazed on September 01, 2007
    dammit, sakura!! she just totally went and got their asses in so much trouble!!!! she is so fucking troublesome! DX

    anyway, about this chapter... do you know what moved me the most? that during the sex scene, there was hardly any dialogue, just emotions and feelings and thoughts. it was so well done, and so damn hot. and the soft utterances - "i want you", "i want to keep you", "i'll protect you" - those seriously melted my heart. it was so poignant and moving... gah, i am such a romantic!

    absolutely fabulous chapter, hon. i am looking so forward to the next chapter, even though i know something's going to go down because sakura doesn't know how to let well enough alone. i mean, who answers the phone so early in the morning? honestly. (yes, ten is early for me XD)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2007
    oooh the plot thickens! i love it! i almost cried when naruto said he wanted to keeep him
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  • From Jelp on September 01, 2007
    Uh-oh! Sakura's gonna get Sasuke and Naruto in trouble - though Sasuke IS sneaking off doing things he's not supposed...to in order to fix things that aren't supposed to be going on. o.O Such twists! Love it! Keep up the amazing work. :-) ~ Jelp
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  • From Bluesake on September 01, 2007
    ....Awesome chapter! AH~ It's getting so good. So hot. Keep it coming! : D
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on September 01, 2007
    nooooo! damn it! naru gonna be in deep shit now! nice to hear that you have quite few fics line up for our reading enjoyment after you finish this and SoD. it would've be a shame to hear that these were going to be your final works. looking foward to your next update(s)!

    ~Devious
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  • From Henki8 on August 21, 2007
    Nice chapter, thanks for the update!
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on August 21, 2007
    it's *hot*hot*hot*! it's getting *hot*hot*hot*! sorry, that song popped into my head for some reason, and some slight modifications made it perfect for the story. oh well, anyone who's read this fic knows it, i'm just saying it. can't wait to see the rest, i bet it's sexy as hell with an awesome showdown, too. i'm trembling with anticipation *teehee*.
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  • From Marlek on August 20, 2007
    It's wonderful chap. Senks so much!
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