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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From Marlek on September 07, 2007
    Damn! That was awesome! I already want to translate this fic=)
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 05, 2007
    I loved the smut but I especially loved the tenderness that Sasuke showed to Naruto! I wonder if he'll be able to protect Naruto though, since Orochimaru is going to find out that Naruto is not doing what he wanted.
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  • From roro237 on September 03, 2007
    Nosebleed:) Sasuke staying with Naruto,holding the blanket up for him and whispering "I'll protect you" all of that was so romantic to me. I just love what you do with those two:)
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  • From kneazlegurl125 on September 03, 2007
    just wanted to add, cock and ball nuzzles = win + satisfied fangirl
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  • From kneazlegurl125 on September 03, 2007
    best smut EVER!!! it was so totally romantic and hot and heart-wrenching and and....just plain perfect! i think you really out did yourself this time. your other smut scenes in SoD and the ones before this chapter in BaB have all been extremely good with the right kind of balance in emotions and imagery, but this takes the cake. theres something about slow quiet sex that makes the smut so much more...can't find a word so i'll use "awesome" than sex scenes thas all hard and fast, though those are really hot too. ^^

    ooo, the suspense and cliffhanger at the end was perfect. makes you want to keep reading but not feel mad or insane at the end, some writers come up with totally mean cliffhangers. sakura, despite not liking her very much, is a very real character in my opinion. with all the outrageous, quirky, intriguing characters out there in fanfics i think this sakura portrayed in BaB presents the normal side of things. her comment about work with trying to work in a hospital made her real rather than person who might be called spineless, cuz i'm studying to be a nurse but i get a little sick at looking at gore too. her views on sex, tho kind of annoying is understandable cuz some ppl are just like that and have their limits and lines.

    can't wait for your next update. keep up the awesome work. look forward to the next chapter of SoD as well. ^^ viva la smut!!
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  • From Adi on September 03, 2007
    Ok I’m gonna try reviewing the Sasuke angsting part before I read the full smut because well my reviews are worth shit after I read smut XD Now your Sasuke, your Sasuke I love to pieces, you know why? because you manage to get him to angst but not so that its unrealistic, and over the top but enough that you can see he has issues but that he’ll deal with them in his own way. He wants everything, Sasuke is all about the power, the stupid bastard *points at Naruto* GO! LOOK INTO THE LIGHT! XD he can’t be with Sakura now that he’s felt the awesomeness that is being fucked by the ULTIMATE UZUMAKI NARUTO COCK. *snickers* what! that cock would make anyone fall in love with it! I’m really enjoying the fact that Sasuke has proper, real deep feelings for Naruto and he hasn’t fully realised it, it gives me a smug sense of superiority over the Uchiha :D

    AND NOW onto my fangirling about the smut, lol you saw my reaction to the blow job it was so hot, I love the detail you add to it. I’m completely mesmerised with the slow dark sex and the emotion you conveyed with it, Naruto laughing against Sasuke’s balls, just everything can be found in it ^________^ MY SMUT QUEEN. But there was more to it than smut, there was all the underlining emotion that had my heart pumping. Don’t uh get me started on Naruto nuzzling the cock, I’d be going on about it for hours :D and the smearing of the precum *drools*

    O_O “I want to keep you." just… O_O!!!!!!!! its so sweet and so Naruto O_O I little touch of angst in the smut was good too, I want to bang there heads together and make them say the “I love you”s

    O_O “I’ll protect you.” O_O gah, my god, O_O ok to me, that’s better than I love you. They went to sleep together; you’re pulling at my heart strings woman! My Naruto addiction is being made so much worse by you!

    DAMN YOU SAKURA. Ok it’s not her fault. But I’m still gonna growl at the ‘pink haired wench’ GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR.

    ALSO! Favourite chapter so far, "I want to keep you" and "I'll protect you" are like the perfect NaruSasu words. Even though they're together already, I want so much more for them, I want deep (manly) love for them *obsessed fangirl*
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  • From ANON - lividangel7 on September 03, 2007
    OK...I've never written on here before, your my first!
    But I had to write and let you know this is a wonderful story. And I do mean the "story", I love detective genres! You really made terrific choices and explanations for the characters for this AU. It suits them all very well.
    I read the whole story twice:) OK, I read the naughty bits two...three...seven times0_o
    But don't let anyone keep you from the plot!!! Let the plot bunnies run amuck! The story itself, I think,
    could stand alone:)
    Good luck and thanks for taking time to write!!!

    Suzanne (aka lividangel7)
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  • From nawatia on September 03, 2007
    Great chapters (7&8). Wow, there are so many places the story can go - What will happen when Sakura finds out, and how bad will it be now that the other police fellow knows that Sasuke and Naruto are working together...stuff will hit the fan! I'll be the one under the clear tarp watching it fly...
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  • From blueh on September 03, 2007
    Yoo hoo, hun! Your stalker's here! I'm currently reading chappie 6 but I can't resist the urge to drop a line here! Hehe. I'll review again once I'm finish with chappie 8! *glomps*
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  • From hisoka on September 02, 2007
    she asks too many questions, glad you updated hope you can do it again soon
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  • From Kimra on September 02, 2007
    Your a goddess (god? I just assume your a girl but don't think I've had any proof one way or another... bet I just insulted you :P ) ANYWAY, I will presume you are girl for a few more mintes:

    You are a goddess, an evil goddess but a goddess none the less. I love your writting, but low and behold the facts of hte universe like 'it actually takes time to write stuff' usually interfears with my 'I want it all now' mentality. So really it's nothing to do with you, just me being impatiant. :D

    Bet I made no sense. But anway I love your work. I continue to wait for updates as always. :D

    Kimra
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  • From ANON - riddle-me-yellow on September 02, 2007
    YOU ARE AMAZING!
    I LOVE THIS FIC!
    Everything about this story of yours is great, it has everything. You had me flippin out at the part where Sasuke told Naruto that he would protect him. GAH, I wanted to squeel like crazy but its 3 in the morning where I am XP. I LOVE THAT NARUTO TOLD SASUKE THAT HE WANTED TO KEEP HIM! Its the cutest thing ever. The way you phrased that is genious. Such a unique way of saying things... hehehe by the way, its awesome that you are mentioning condoms whenever they have sex, you NEVER see that in fanfics. GOOD JOB!

    Keep up the fantastic writting and update whenever you are able
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  • From kaesaku on September 02, 2007
    ooh, that was hot!
    ;p
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  • From Rosebud on September 02, 2007
    Wow! I loved this chapter! ^^
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  • From Menow on September 02, 2007
    He left early with his new partner? Uh Oh...Oh No!! Great smut, and great storyline. This story is getting better and better! Yah! Keep it up!
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