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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From Kimra on October 06, 2007
    Now I'll carefully state that I believe in you. And I believe that if you killed Naruto you'd do it more dramaticly. I also believe your not insane enough to go against your reviewers and upset us with the death of my beloved vulpine. Having said that... I hope my belief is not misplaced. (I'm really just hoping your nice and give me happy endings! I want happy endings!) :D
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  • From ANON - riddle-me-yellow on October 06, 2007
    NUUU! NARUTO, YOU CANT BE DEAD! Without you there would be no more story and no story would be very sad indeed. This chapter was neat, the Kakashi part was interesting. PLease continue as soon as you are able, I wanna know what happens to Naruto! I bet that stupid meanie head snake face kidnapped Naruto and went to some creepy place where he will take advantage of Naruto untill Sasuke comes to save the day XD hehehe yay!
    Well done and i cant wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Allys on October 06, 2007
    Okay so I read some of your reviews and am trying to calm down. I know I should be holding out hope but God!! I've been watching a lot of depressing yaoi anime lately (they're short 2 ep ovas) I think it's warping my brain!! It would be perfectly tragic and very realistic for him to really be dead, very japanese, but GOD PLEASE!!! Who wants realism, really!??!! This is why I read stories to avoid real life!! LOL, or at least pretty it up every now and again. I still love you whatever you have planned, but ;_; oh god... I was so freaking happy and excited when Kakashi turned out to be FBI, I was all YEAH!! Storm the building, grab my baby!! And Sasuke, he was so good in this chapter, so desperate and dedicated and loving, this is gonna hit him so freaking HARD!! And he can't even acknowledge it really. He's going to have to sit back and pretend ;_;. God lady love you really are a masterful story teller, even when you break my heart I have to appreciate the beauty of the story line. Crosses fingers and hopes that Naruto was smuggled away in one of those trucks that left and that Ino isn't one of the bodies that they dug up, anad that Oro-bastard doesn't turn Naruto into a fuck toy for this, and that Sasuke finds him sooner rather than later before they both go mad. Holding out hope is harder than it seems, I know they aren't gonna get off scott free something has to give I just hope that the fallout is manageable. I should be up and running again really soon XD, so expect some more art. LOL, I can't wait to see Adi's pic, I don't even wanna know what my inbox on Y! looks like 0.o, but LOL, I'm sure I'll have great fun wading through it. *Huggles u* Miss you muchly, are you still updating this biweekly or have you moved it up to once a week? You updated last week didn't you? LOL, the days have been blurring together. I'm so not good for anything right now, can't even leave you a decent review, I'm seriously heart broken here ♥
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  • From ANON - Nami on October 06, 2007
    *face palms* ...okay. That was. Right now, I'm torn between yelling in denile... and laughing till my stomach explodes because my music list has a sense of humor and it was playing Ironside from Kill Bill juuuust at the end. The image of Sasuke in yellow spandex was soon to follow (wedding scene, ah ha... ahahaha... Sasuke would make a beautiful bride *is shot*). ..jeez *coughs and looks at mp3 player*. Anyways, I hope Naruto isn't dead. I panicked a little and thought oh, crap did Oro plant the tag on some other blond male in the group and then like... smuggle Naruto away (which would be bad badbadbadbad. Cause then it'd be Naruto on drugs... or something...std, anyway *panics*)? Then I remembered he wasn't seen leaving. So maybe he fought... his way... out... and ran out the other side? Or he's one of the other bodies? But he can't be... dead. He's too cool to be dead! And where's Ino o___o! Iajajaja... T_T
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  • From bluegenjutsu on October 06, 2007
    I sure hope Naruto is really still alive!!! But I wonder why Orochimaru would make it look like he killed him? I love that Sasuke wants to avenge Naruto's "death" though!
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  • From Allys on October 06, 2007
    Zrina?? ;_; Don't you fucking love me anymore *sniff* You can't be that mean right? Right?!?!? ;_;, I need a minute... or a year ;_;.
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  • From Bluesake on October 06, 2007
    ......I...what???? NOOO WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHOT>????!?! Wheres the rest??! urgh i have to know whats going on. Such a mean cliffy! Keep it coming
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  • From ANON - hina88 on October 06, 2007
    >.< Naruto's not dead, he's not dead, he's not dead. he's not dead. not dead, not dead, definitely not dead... right? Because just the thought of him being dead is harmful to my health. Sasuke!!! YES - crush that sob of a snake!!! feed him to the damn snakes he likes so much, chop him into little bits and throw them at them *snarls* bastard! and SAKURA!!! *glares* why couldn't you just not answer the phone? see what happened>? do you see what happened do you do you do you DAMN IT!!!

    *deep breaths*

    *slumps*

    that was just... he's okay, he'll be okay.

    It was a good chapter, surprisingly I didn't notice the shortness, I was too busy paying attention to every detail I could to tell myself Naruto was alive. This chapter kept me in a constant feeling of dread you know, I was practically eating up the page (despite distractions in the background >.>) and then when Sasuke saw Naruto's id and there was the body was all burnt I felt the same as I did when watching VotE and staring mouthing 'no' at the screen. Kakashi - I wasn't surprised bu it being revealed that he used Naruto as an informant, and I'm guessing he and Ebisu left the scene so they wouldn't spotted there and possibly be connected to it by possibly corrupted (or even the ones that weren't)which could screw up their own investigation but I'm hoping maybe Naruto stumbled out or something and they took him with them. But that's probably not what happened.

    It was a great chapter, thanks so much for the update, I really love this fic.

    Hina xXxx
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  • From roro237 on October 06, 2007
    Your crime novel just keeps getting better! I'm loving it:) The pics from Sound of Dreams were H O T, very nice!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 05, 2007
    "Good Morning, Naruto." Orochimaru said.

    I believe this is where we all say "oh shit!"
    A.S.
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  • From Raina on September 26, 2007
    Noes, Naruto! Gah! Curse you Sakura and your big ass (though innocent) mouth. Sasuke, save him! Which will be difficult seeing as his boss is dirty so he can;t really request back up... or can he?

    Can't wait for the next installment,
    Rai
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  • From ANON - Andreea on September 24, 2007
    I LIKE YOUR STORY, BUT IN THE END WHO IS SEME AND WHO IS UKE?.? IT'S REALLY CONFUSING BECAUSE BOTH ARE MASTURBATING AND ARE BEING F*CKED UP THE ASS BUT STILL.I WOULD REALLY APRECIATE IF YOU COULD ANSWER THIS LITTLE QUESTION OF MINE.
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  • From nawatia on September 23, 2007
    Dayum! good cliffie!!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter - Poor Naruto!
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  • From hisoka on September 22, 2007
    CRAP AND I THOUGHT HE WAS SUPPOSE TO BE GOOD AT WHAT HE DOES AND SNEAKING BUT HE MISSED THAT ONE THING, I REALLY HOPE HE DOESNT GET RAPED OR USED IN ANY WAY BY OROCHIMARU OR ANY OF HIS SUBORDANANTS...AGAIN.HOPE SASUKE CAN GET TO HIM AND HELP BEFORE ITS TOO LATE,AND THEY STILL HAVE INO TO WORRY ABOUT PLUS SAKURA A LITTLE.HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON SO WE CAN FIND OUT WHAT BECOMED OF NARUTO AND SASUKE AND THEIR TO BE RELATIONSHIP.AND THEY WERE GETTING ALONG SO WELL TOO
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  • From ANON - riddle-me-yellow on September 22, 2007
    Crap! That was wonderfull, you are soo talented! My head is about to explode from antisipation! NUUU! Naruto! Dont die please, that would be really bad! XD lol

    You write the cutest most emotional little phrases that are only so meaningful the way you add them in. Awesome work, please continue as soon as you are able, I NEED to know what happens to Naruto!
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