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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina

From Allys on November 06, 2007
Zrina ;_;... This is some scary shit, lady love!!! What the hell ;_;... But I have to thank you, this could have been a lot worse and I also have to thank you for not going into detail about what happened to Ino ;_;, and God Poor Naruto *HUGS* I'm way too distressed to leave a proper review, but your writing is still amazing and sucks me in, and drives me crazy. I actually thought the part with Asuma and Sasuke was kinda funny, but then I keep having to remember how big you said Asuma is and I'm a little about Sasuke's orifices, lol *HUGS* God I still need hugs. *sniff* After this I demand WAFF!! LOL, yeah don't mind me, I'll love whatever you write even if you decide to torture me with angst *Huggles and goes in search of something fluffy and meaningless* Oh and *snicker* At the beginning you had me screaming out "The proof is in the Damn Plushie!" before I realsied exactly how ridiculous that sounded and stopped *looks sheepish* *chuu*
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From ANON - Word_Slave on November 06, 2007
ahhhhh what a place to end!!!
Sigh... more soon please.
Slave
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From Jelp on November 06, 2007
Yeah. Easy choice Naruto. -_-" ANGST. Difficult chapter to read (torture wise), but still very well written. Update again soon please! ~ Jelp
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From bluegenjutsu on November 06, 2007
Oh no!!!! Naruto can't kill Sasuke!!! I sure hope he only makes it look like it because Sasuke loves him!!!!
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From Adi on November 06, 2007
Ok you know how I feel about the Naruto torture, so I�m gonna review the Sasuke part and attempt to keep myself from launching at you and demanding why you aren�t fixing things XD

I so so so so did not see the Asuma thing coming. Seriously. I should be able to tell something of what goes on in that head of yours by now right? right? WRONG! :( I feel so awful for Sasuke�s ass, ASUMA HAS A SCARY COCK! any sane person would run away! Far away! I like how you have Asuma though, despite the scary cock and all, I still like him, which is you know.. a strange feeling considering his SUPER SCARY COCK! *runs away from the cock* don�t even think of pointing that thing at me. I liked the build up to it too, it wasn�t just a conversation, everything Sasuke said had an action, like Super-cock man reaching for his desk drawer XD

Ok, you know what? I LIED! I AM GONNA REVIEW THE OTHER PART AND SCREAM AND BAWL INTO YOUR BOOBIES!

God. Kabuto. He�s worse than Oro, fucking creepy bastard. It just sends shivers down my spine. *sulks* did you have to do all of that? It hurts so much! Poor Naruto, and and and -______________- *sighs* for the sake of plot right? *will hold you to it*

Adi XX

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From MichiTheThird on November 04, 2007
Nuu! My world has CRUMBLED into DUST. I was so absorbed reading the story that I didn't realize I had arrived at the LAST CHAPTER! The cosmos have been so cruel to me these last couple of weeks. First it was the sinus pressure and congestion...then the motion sickness...yesterday and today, I've just been feverish and when I finally can sit up and not have my head nosedive to the floor...I eat this entire fic up. Why, cosmos, WHY?

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From Gwyllion on November 02, 2007
Damn...AFF ate my long ass review to you! D:
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From Gwyllion on November 02, 2007
Oh my lord OH MY LORD! What an intense and hot chappie! I enjoyed every friggin word of it!
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From Adi on October 24, 2007
OH MY FREAKING GOD I LOVE KAKASHI IN THIS HARDCORE.

Ok I do feel completely awful for Sakura, its not her fault because what Naruto and Sasuke have is a true love and its not her fault she had the misfortune to fall in love with Sasuke when hes quite clearly so damn wrong for her. But still... I know this makes me a bad person and all but I felt some glee when Sasuke said "him" even though he thought Naruto was dead, he still didn't want Sakura he still wanted Naruto and he wasn't going to pick Sakura because it was the easy choice, WAH, HE LOVES NARUTO. Only when he thinks hes dead does he realise this -_- he always had to be a diffult one.

LOVE LOVE LOVE KAKASHI. oops, sorry, did I mention that? XD

The Baki and Sasuke scene was intense and you had me going there for a little while with suicidal!Sasuke

ARGH. I LOVE KAKASHI.

SASUKE LOOK HARDER AT THE PLUSHIE

stupid Sasuke

but I love him in this

Fantastic chapter as always ^_^ LOVE YOU!

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From Raina on October 23, 2007
O.O *Gasp* Naruto is alive? (well I was hoping for that anyway)

First thing's first I have to talk about my favorite part: When Sakura asks him to chose and he choses Naruto straight away, eventhough he thinks he is dead and he will never be with him again. That's just... it's so... *heart clenches* I love it! It's heartbreakingly beautiful, it really is.

I felt bad for him, his life was like a country western song: no love, no job, no fiance... nothing but the gaping hole in his heart. Gosh and to be taken down in such a way thats so... so... knife twisty (yeah I think I need a thesaurus for Christmas) with his relationship with Naruto. The same thing that helped him to find himself, his spark, is the exact same thing that took everything away from him. And you conveyed his desperate emptiness undulating with his absolute feral need for vengeance so well. This made him so in character in that his need for revenge was all he lived for.

And Sakura poor thing, but she will find some one else... I assume. At least she can take solace in the fact that they were not married.

Ooo, and I really wanted to jump through the monitor and strangle Baki or bash his head into his desk (why so violent, Raina?)!!! Calling Naruto a whore?! He's the whore, selling himself for money or whatever he gets from Orochimaru.

You are such a good writer, I wish you could help me out. I enjoy this story so much and I can't wait for your next update.
(Sorry my review is so awful, it's just that I am in awe right now)

- Rai
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From ANON - sigart on October 23, 2007
THis is... so... great.

...I swear I wanted to say something more and maybe slightly more intelligent but alas... those four words sums it up pretty well.
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From suzannecmc on October 22, 2007
Gosh damn I love this story!

A great original story, good work:)
looking forward to more...

Suzanne.
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From marquesgue1 on October 22, 2007
Okay - lol this chapter made me feel a lot better although after talking to you - ahh well. I'm not reviewing to talk about somethin that has't happened yet lol so I'll try to stay on track. God, just thinking that Naruto was dead *gulps* and the way Sasuke was acting was already making me ache *sigh* I'm such a softy - and then his boss got the pictures and implied about naruto being a whore and i got just as pissed as naruto - i wanted to knock the bastard down a peg or two and was cheering for sasuke when he went to punch him, sadly that didn't land.

Then Sakura. *sigh* It saddened me a little that even after finding out he was cheating on her, she didn't even shout, she just reined it all in and said she wouldn't sink to his level. I mean I know everyone deals with things differently but - I think think this showed the extent of her repression of herself, almost like a different stage of her insisting on the vanilla sex, it's so passionless it's a little sad. Maybe I'm just seeing things where there's nothing. But still... and then she gave him the ultimatum, and i felt so rpoud of sasuke when he didn't even think about the answer but just said 'him' straight away. I was relieved too about this being out of the way - one less thing for Sasuke and Naruto to have in his head you know?

Then there was Kakashi!!! *glomps Kaka-sensei* awww he's just aww I just love Kakashi!!! And then I loved how you described Sasuke's reaction to Kakashi saying he would've thought that Sasuke would want to know about Naruto's whereabout's more thann Orochimaru's. It was like it took a moment for the words to sink in, I could just really picture his face. And then suddenly, there was hope thrown back into the fic, Naruto might still be alive and now there's this tension all over again. Orochimaru worries me - especially with this 'unhealthy interest' Kakashi mentioned he has in Naruto.

Anyway, to wrap up lol, loved the update (when do i not?)and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chp. this fic is just - just - just >.< I just really love it! Thanks for the update and sorry for the late review!

hina xXxx
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From hisoka on October 21, 2007
I NEW HE COULDNT BE DEAD,IF HE HAD BEEN I WOULDNT BE SURPRISED IF SASUKE KILLED OROCHIMARU THEN HIMSELF A YEAR OR SO LATER THE SAME DAY NARUTO DIED.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON WANNA KNOW IF IT IS HIS BODY THEN BE DEPRESSED IF IT IS FOR A WEEK OR SO
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From ANON - Word_Slave on October 21, 2007
oh man... what a place to stop. Please update soon!
Slave
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