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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina

From Kimra on November 27, 2007
I hope we get happy non-rape chapters later. I'd really like happy non-rape chapters to read. *nod*
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From ANON - purplelev on November 27, 2007
This story is so good I can't wait for more.
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From 1yaoiluver on November 13, 2007
OMG this is a really good story, even if it is almost over (from what you said in one of your A/N's)
Sorry I don't have like anything to say but I want to see what happens next even though I can't stand this type of story XDDDD
It's just too good not to past up!!! (Did I say that right?!!!)
You write great stories with hot-steamy-smex -drools-
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From hisoka on November 10, 2007
he needs a kill list,rochimaru,kabuto,sakon,karin,suigetsu...and maybe everyone else.he should bring him a chared bodie with sasukes id,bastard,i hope naruto,ino and sasuke can get throught this.though ino is useless and has only make narutos life harder,see caring is a bad thing unless you have connections that work fast.hope you update soon and this all leaves hell soon too
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From despairs on November 09, 2007
I'm VERY happy Naruto is still alive....but,but,but Sasuke :( *sobs* he's gonna have to screw Asuma to find Naruto isnt he. Damnit! I hope i'm wrong. Theres NO TIME for that old pervert to make Sasuke have sex with him....Naruto is being TORTURED for crying out loud. Grrrr damn Asuma.

Ya know what? Sasuke should get pissed and say heres MY deal for YOU....either you tell me where Naruto is or i kick ur ass and break ur legs. Hows that lol :D *bites fingernails*

Sorry i had trouble reviewing for some reason. And i hope none of my previous comments came across as bitchy :( i just hate it that Sasuke is in a hurry and some old perv wants a lay so hes blackmailing him. Blah, cant he get a piece of ass somewhere else.

Anyways....wonderful story you have here. I cant wait to see how it ends.
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From Kerrisa on November 07, 2007
Damn aff keeps cutting up my reviews >=O!! I want you to read it all! Not parts of it dammit! *throws a fit*

Zrina-sama.. >_< Kabuto that sadistic prick >__> Orochimaru is a bastard if ever i'd seen one. Of course he'd not only let them beat Naruto unconcious, but he subjects Ino to rape as well! I hope he gets it really bad in the end! He can't die quickly or go to jail! He needs to suffer *goes on a rampage* Gyah i'm fearful for Sasuke =( He's gonna have to submit to Asuma unless he can talk his way out of it, which i doubt he'd try to do anyway since he's so hard pressed to find Naruto.
Since i can't remember what else i had written i guess i'll end here.. I await, albeit apprehensively, the next chapter C_C this is such a ridiculously well written piece of fiction! Gettin me all homicidal over loveable ninjas thrown into a alternate universe xD Keep up the beyond awesome work!! *glomps*
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From ladywolfTerri on November 07, 2007
oh man... poor Naruto and Ino... almost better to let her die after what she had been through.. talk about the mental scaring!!!

hmm.. proof.. well.. the FBI can fake Sasuke's death.. give Naruto the proof he needs...then Naruto can give them the drive in the fox so they have the proof they need and wham! slam the door on that slimy sob!!

looking forward to the next chapter!!!...^^..
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From ANON - hina88 on November 07, 2007
O_O

I'm... speechless? I mean - that was just... god I'm not sure. It's like - yeah... whoa.

*tries to get past shock*

I think I need a moment to myself or something, that's how much that affected me, I mean I had some idea of what was coming but now - now you took that and made it so much worse and then threw that at us at the end? That was just - not - very nice :s but *takes deep breath* I'll give a proper review.

As usual it was really well written, I mean the tension just flowed right through it and I could never quite get rid of the sense of foreboding I got as soon as I saw the warnings, I was afraid to read what would happen next but I've known this fic was dark from the start so I just prepared myself for it but for some reason as soon as it hit the ending point of sasuke's conversation with Asuma - I started to feel a little... not sick, that's not the right word but I was swallowing a lot and just, generally feeling this weird thing at the pit of my stomach and then - it got worse >.< and I wanted to MURDER Orochimaru like - just stuff him in a torture chamber and damn it pull his heart out with a spoon - just spoon it out while he was still conscious that F****** B******!!! Now that I'm getting over it I'm just so damn angry about the situation Naruto's in!!! That twisted fuck!!! Gahh and those stupid brothers and KARIN gaah words can't describe what I want to do to them honestly -I just want them all to die in the most painful way EVER!

But then all I have to do is remember the end and what Orochimaru asked Naruto to do and the implications of what could happen whatever choice Naruto makes were hitting me so damn fast it just made that sick feeling in my stomach even worse. >.< this is so horrible this is just - so damn fucked up god i want that stupid snake asshole dead - and Kabuto - sick bastard.

That was just - I don't know - I mean I guess cause you got this reaction it means you wrote it damn well - and now - it's just you know, wow. I just wasn't expecting it to be this - I don't know because you didn't make it graphic but everything got across so vividly with little tiny touches on details, I mean you did a really amazing job of writing this - so congrats lol

Still the most amazing ficI've ever read, if nothing else, this chapter just made that even more true because I read it and I'm just anxious to read more - although seriously, I think I'll be thinking about this for the rest of the night which is not cool! cause it's got really bad events that I'd rather not think about but then now I'm thinking fuck what's Naruto going to do! He wants to save his cousin more than anything! But then if he does that and - damn it Sasuke - he cares for Sasuke, maybe not to the extent he cares about Ino but Sasuke means a lot to him as things stand and - this is just awful :(

... so there you have it - my review...
i think i need some water cause there's something weird on the back of my throat

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From ANON - CaptorSakura on November 07, 2007
Aa, are you kidding! Sasuke might just be about to have sex with some random dude to find Naruto and Naruto has to go and kill Sasuke after all that?!

But nice chapter xD
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From MichiTheThird on November 06, 2007
DAMN it. I KNEW that's what they were after the minute they used Ino as leverage. The suspense is KILLING me.
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From Bluesake on November 06, 2007
So I figured it out your evil! Why must he kill sasuke??? why?!!? ;_;
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From ANON - qwerty on November 06, 2007
*jaw drops* Oh my god!!! That chapter was so intense! Damn! Good writing.
update!
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From ANON - Nami on November 06, 2007
Ino.... geez, poor freaking Ino!! And Naruto, and Sasuke (because he's faced with Asuma XD oh hohohoho). Don't kill Sasuke, Naruto! .....but but... also save Ino. Save her and then all three off you can run off, give Ino two years of happy family life with newlyweds Naruto and Sasuke (Naruto could go to school... or they can both be cops/bounty hunters)! Then she can go off and get married to like... Chouji ;_;. Then she can have kids and go for visits to Naruto and Sasuke's home. Geez. NaruSasu fluff time >_
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From Kimra on November 06, 2007
I do love your writing, and I it's out of pure resepect for your abilities that I can not read rape scenes written by you. You write everything so well that I know I'm going to be metally scarred if I read them. *sigh* But for the benefit of your awesome story I skimmed through it. I know that's not complementry, but such is life. I do love your story so much, and you must realise how dedicated I am to even bother skimming... or at least I hope you realise.

Anyway. I wanted to review, just so you know that I'm (in other word another faceless stranger) am reading this. :D

Cheers.
Kimra
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From roro237 on November 06, 2007
Zrina,that was amazing! The way Orochimaru was squeezing Naruto it was hurting me and I don't have marbles:) You had me going I thought Ino was going to die. Well maybe just alittle I even hoped she would so Naruto could be free. I was even thinking Orchimaru was going to leave Naruto near dead even more so than what he has already. I was on the edge of my chair.(mouth open leaning into the screen) Then the perfect cliffy:) Love it!!! And the picture of Sasuke(SoD)was beautiful espeically the eyes. I couldn't get the poledancer room?:(
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