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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From MidnightsKeeper on November 29, 2007
    that was a very evil cliffhanger. please don't make us wait too long for another chapter. i really love this story!
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  • From Blckthorn on November 28, 2007
    I'm going to die...what a horrible cliffy....but oh my god you have the most amazing emotional development. You kept them beautifully in character, and your lemons were so hot they reheated my coffee. damn. wow anyway I enjoy your writing style very much, it's smooth and dramatic without being over the top. I'm hanging off the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on November 28, 2007
    So, Naruto is going to get to be the one to kill Orochimaru? That would be great!! I wonder though what is going to happen between Sasuke and Naruto when Sasuke finds out that Naruto had said he would kill Sasuke to save Ino.
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  • From Allys on November 28, 2007
    *sighs* Okay so I went and walked around, drank some water, calmed down a bit, read a few of your reviews, well, I read Hina's. *sighs* Dammit I was so sure he connected. Now I have to wait, and LOL, I guess I'm way more violent but I really don't want that hand to connect with his face, I want it around his neck and I want him to squeeze till he hears a crunch... Okay, LOL was supposed to be calming down *breathes* there were a lot of other great moments in this chapter and I have to not fixate *breathes* LOL. Okay, you already I know I love the turn Sasuke took in Asuma's ass *snicker* or well in other essential body parts XD. But LOL, What I did not expect was him being turned on by the thought of Naruto sucking Asuma off XD. Oh, Sasuke, you perv after my own heart ♥. Speaking of pervy men who've stolen my heart - Kakashi!! LMAO!!! XD XD XD XD XD XD XD. Well LOL XD. That was the most freaking ingenious way to find the flashdrive. That bastard was finger fucking Kyuu-chan *snicker*. And oh Gosh man Naruto XD. The whole you put in the plushie just had to be up his ass ne? Oy, *shakes head* XD. I loved it. And I have to say you write Naruto beautifully. He would angst about that, he's such a dear heart. And I have to grudgingly admit, that I agree with Oro-bastard. Naruto is beautiful when he's enraged. (it's only grudging agreement cause it's Orochimaru). And I'm sort of in two minds about whether or not I want that to be Sasuke. I mean I do, I really do, but I don't want him to be hurt or appalled and I really didn't want him to witness that. But meh, sometimes shit happens. I'm dying to see how this plays out. And I'm scared to ask but this sort of seems like it's winding down! Is it almost over?? ;_; I don't want it to be over. Even though this is the most emotional a story's gotten me since I read Arora's stuff. She was a sadist, you'd probably love her stuff it's on AFF. And I have to tell you, I would not have gotten through those stories if they hadn't been finished before I started them. The wait would have killed me. *loves on you* Thank you so much for the update honey. Sorry I took so long to get to it. Life has been hectic and somewhat entertaining here. But it should mellow out soon. ♥
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  • From Allys on November 28, 2007
    WHAT THE FUCK!!!! ZRINA!!!! I'm going to fucking Scream!!! Strangle the bitch Naruto!! OMFG!! Sick Psycho bastard - Hate him HATE him!!!!! Holy shit! And Sasuke is there. Oh God!! This is... NOT GOOD!!! I'm just GAH!!!! AHHHH!!!!! Only you, you know. Only you can drive me to absolute raging distraction, and the urge to commit physical violence. I hope he rips him apart with his bare fucking hands, and you want to play with fire? Well BURN Bastard!! I'm so mad. And you cut it! Okay so I go on and on about evil cliffhangers, but I have to say... I think this is it. This is the evilest fucking cliffhanger ever. Not because I'm worried about what's going to happen but because you cut off the satisfaction of it!! He got his hand around his neck, that's it. Even if he dies Oro-bastard is a goner. I'm just hoping that Sasuke won't be upset. He was already upset earlier, and god... I need to step back and breathe. I have thrown books across rooms for less. Dammit can't pitch the computer, that would be baaaad. Brb.
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  • From Gwyllion on November 28, 2007
    Waah! A cliffie! What a hot and horribly disturbing chappie. I enjoyed it immensely! (Call me sicko perv....) Can't wait to read more....poor Ino and Naruto.
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  • From DragonsDancers on November 28, 2007
    yay more please
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  • From MichiTheThird on November 28, 2007
    Holy fuck! Wait, that didn't come out right. Let me rephrase that. Fucking hell! >< MORE suspense! Can't take much more...*twitching on floor*
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  • From ANON - Totaltruth on November 27, 2007
    Sasuke to the rescue!(?)

    lolerskatez(this chapeter was so not funny, but I can't help but smile thinking its him).

    until next time!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 27, 2007
    aaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrgggggggggggghhhhhhhh sooooooo cruel. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, WHAT HAPPENS NEXXT!!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!
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  • From ANON - Anissa34 on November 27, 2007
    God I love this fic! It's so rividing!!!
    Plot: one of the best I've every read!
    Grammar: great.
    flow of script: flawless.
    Character personalities: nailed perfectly.

    I love SoD too, and Going down. Keep it up!! PLEASE.... >.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on November 27, 2007
    Ohhh, that is a horrible place to leave it!!! Okay, I'm impressed (reluctantly) with your ability to leave the reader hanging and pleading for more. More please.
    Slave
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  • From ANON - hina88 on November 27, 2007
    omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

    >.< this is getting better and better i mean wow i just - you just ended it in a plce that practically killed to end it at!!! Orochimaru is such a perv but my favourite scene in this one was definitely the asuma sasuke scene XD heh Asuma poor man *pats* he was fearing for his balls there and with good reason.

    Another thing that reminded me of why i'm obsessed with this fic is the complexity of emotions that you're portraying in such an extreme situation. The way Sasuke reacted when he realised that Naruto migth actually get along with some of the people that he was made to service hadn't even occurred to him and maybe i'm biased because i'm on the oustide but i can see how naruto would do that. he's alone and even though he's being forced into that situation he's trying to make the best of it - and if there are people who are actually decent to him despite what he has to do for them then he'd most likely learn how to make the best of something like that that's his character.

    Then of course there was Naruto and his guilt over having agreed to orochimaru's request even if he didn't mean ti i can see how it would hurt him to do it, even if it's just verbally, to betray the one person other than probably his cousin, who had told him he wasn't a whore or who hadn't thought of him as just someone with no worth. The fact that sasuke truly cared for him is what's tearing into him and it makes me feel guilty with him and hurt for them both.

    ON another note I'm glad Ino's alive. I'm sad that Kabuto is alive, i have a profoud hate for him *shrugs* always been that way (although i like it when he's getting pummeled by orochimaru XD) *clears throat* anyway. orochimaru's a sick bastard, you have his character down perfectly and Karin *snicker* well, maybe Orochimaru should let Kabuto indulge when it comes to her too ^_^. Is it wrong that I found the way and the reason for Orochimaru getting turned on just made him a hotter baddie? >.< Gah, i really do think he's hot >.
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  • From Jelp on November 27, 2007
    O.O Yikes. I mean...yikes!! Update again soon! ~ Jelp
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  • From roro237 on November 27, 2007
    Oh! Z! That was over the top good! This is to dated one of your best chapter! The intensity of Naruto feeling I could feel it. That was a mind game from Hell! Not forgetting Sasukes little jealous momet:) You know I lol at Kakashi and his ~finger~:) Z! I'm still breathing hard after reading that chapter. Plus the cliffhanger you left us with OMG! You have proved once again why I say Zrina #1! I can't hardly wait to read what will happen next in this Detective Novel:) My Zrinaday has been wonderful! Thanks:)
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