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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From hisoka on January 30, 2008
    they really got nowere in thier investigation with naruto.but thats okay when will they let him see sasuke agian?or will he see sakura first?hope you can update soon
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  • From Blckthorn on January 30, 2008
    woot! update...nice, definitely moved the plot along. I do hope you're a happy-ending kind of person...But I'll definitely stick around to find out.
    ~ =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Halskr on January 30, 2008
    I really enjoy your style of writing. The story is very compelling. It is a nice twist. Thanks for the update.
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  • From Jelp on January 29, 2008
    I love the way you're making this realistic in that the cops and FBI are involved like they should be. Sure Sasuke did his bit where he ran off to save Naruto, but the feds. are involved like they would be normally unlike (as you put it) those TV shows and such. Kudos to you. Even if some mishap happens and they go fighting all on their own, I still love the way you portrayed everything so far. You've got a real knack for the realistic. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to your next update! ~ Jelp
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  • From roro237 on January 29, 2008
    Wonderful!!! ^_^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on January 29, 2008
    Poor Naruto and Sasuke are being separated forever?! I hope that doesn't happen!!! Thanks for the new chapter. :)
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  • From Allys on January 29, 2008
    Damn Zrina. This is so Law and Order right now I can hear the - dun dun sound XD. *Glomps* Phew!! Sasuke's Okay *Huggles u* And Naruto's okay and things are being set into motion :D. *Sighs* It sucks that they're being kept so far apart though ;_;. I'm a little worried about Naruto worrying about Sakura being with Sasuke. LOL, yeah , not so much worried about the two of them, they're friends, but I worried about what he thinks of the two of them. LOL, I'm dying to know where this is going. You been throwing twists every time I turn around XD. I Love that. Sorry XD, I can't help but be excited. *Chuu* Thanks for updating honey *Loves u*
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  • From suzannecmc on January 29, 2008
    Yes!

    moving along nicely.
    thanks for the Sasuke bone:)
    you have great dynamics with your characters, always ring true.

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  • From ANON - hina88 on January 23, 2008
    Z...>.< *takes deep breath*...*looses it* YOU ENDED IT THERE!!! ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME SOME KIND OF ATTACK!!!

    *clears throat*

    umm right, okay >.< let me think. So... Sasuke did show up to rescue Naruto but - man i didn't think this was how it was going to go, but the scene, i think you wrote it with real skill (as you do everything else heh) and I could see it all so clearly in my head, i mean there was no confusion as to who was where and doing what/ Think karin's a bitch wish she'd gotten shot, really hate Orochimaru in this, i'm usually not this bad with him but in this fic i completely hate him and want someone to cut his dick off the sick fuck. Well done INO!!! I was so proud, i mena she managed to shake herself out of that state and manage to move i mean, she deserves one hell of a medal and not to mention justice - and KABUTO WENT DOWN!!! WOOOOO!!! But... SASUKE GOT SHOT DAMN IT! NARUTO GOT STABBED!!! And now i'm so damn worried and >.< - okay - not gonna go there so onto something else.

    The Sakura Sasuke scene towards the end of the chapter. I really liked that, it was - IC and I think it had the right mood for what had happened between them, it kind of reminded me for some reason of that time during the chunin exam when Sasuke asked Sakura not to tell Naruto about the cursed seal, it was a time when he was beginning to let his worry for his team mates show and accepting them, it's rare seeing that side of Sasuke even though it's very much a part of him and completely IC and i think you brought it out so perfectly.

    And then... that bitch! who the hell is that nurse!!! show her to me and i'll kick her ass and shove her into her grave for them!!! and where's naruto and ino!!! >.< oh god Z this is a hell of a cliff hanger *sigh* but you don't need me to tell you it's good ne?

    can't wait for the next one heh

    hina xXxx


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  • From suzannecmc on January 21, 2008
    Honey, you can take as long as you want!

    It's quality, not quantity...and you have that in spades!

    o_0 ooooh was Karin out on bail or did they get some background chick to
    off Sasuke? Lots of action, I LIKE IT!!! Oh Queen Cliffhanger, most
    excellent:)
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  • From hisoka on January 20, 2008
    youd think sakura would have the sense to stop the nurse insted of letting her go along and inject him, or at least stop her.who was it anyway, karin?though i dought that.so were is naruto and ino anyway?im glad he saved them, they have the evidence to put orochimaru inder lock and key right they didnt destroy it for some idiotic reason(i dont think sasuke would or kakashi for that matter)was the nurse tayuya?im reallly curious ive been waiting for this for so long and i no its almost over but i still wanna read more,hope you can update soon
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on January 18, 2008
    You have awesome stories. I ike them all. I hope you update this one sooner than you did last time. I can't wait to read it.
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  • From ANON - person on January 18, 2008
    wow! this has got to be the best fan fiction I ever read. the plot is great!! please update soon! I love this story!
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  • From ANON - Alondra on January 18, 2008
    Awesome stuff!! Keep it up!!
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  • From serenagold on January 18, 2008
    Oh my gosh! Drama!!


    What with the last chapter, I was afraid Naruto was going to have to go against Sasuke, but the fact Sasuke arrived and helped save him, I was all sorts of relieved. But now they're trying to kill him?! Go Sakura! Too bad she didn't stop that "nurse" sooner. ^^


    Anyway, another great chapter! Keep up the great work!
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