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Reviews for Blackmail and Betrayal

By : Zrina
  • From ANON - Meg on February 06, 2008
    i just found this story and i really think you have talent. there are very few stories out there with a good plot and well written smex *grins*.. anyway, though i did want to mention something about your writing.
    you have amazing potential though i noticed that you seem to fall back on the dreaded 'adverb' a lot. i think that given you're such an amazing writer, you can definately steer clear of them in most situations. i mean ,you really dont need them! the 'said suspicous*ly*', dry*ly*, sarcastical*ly* etc etc.. they really take a lot out of your otherwise awesome story. espcially in this chapter. there were a little too many of them for me to ignore. anyway, i hope you dont hate me for this.. *hides in a corner*. im still one of your biggest fans. :D and ps i LOVED sound of dreams!! my fav story EVER!!! ( this comes a close second though)..hehe.
    update soon~
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  • From Blckthorn on February 06, 2008
    Oooo very nice, tying everything up nicely. Can't wait to read more!
    ~ Dani
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  • From Allys on February 05, 2008
    Damn sugar. This is getting seriously deep into the crime drama aspect today. And I Love it. You rock!! Is ther anything you can't write??? I mean you have drama, comedy, romance, suspense... That fucking awesomely odd chapter in SoD gives me a Thriller/Horror aspect. You cover all genres, and you do them all Damn well. Congratulations, you more than officially Rock. You have sanctioned the Rocking!! Oh amazingly awesome you, LOL.*glompg* Kakashi is such a bastard *snicker*. I loved the miniature orange dildo, I want a chibi orange dildo!!! I can't wait to see where you go from here XD, *huggles the crap out of the you* MUAH!!! Thanks for the update Love!! ♥
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  • From TheLightsShadow on February 05, 2008
    Heh, I saw Tommy Lee Jones the other day ^^

    It was so weird! I was at a red lights, wondering when the hell the light was going to change, when a weird Jeep-ish car turned my way. I could see him in the driver side, and I watched him drive away like a dumb ass with my mouth hanging open ^^

    At first I was like, "What a minute... was that-?" I looked back again even through I couldn't see his face, but it was still fresh in my memory. Then I was like, "OMFG, that was him! ^^....wow."

    Then the car honked behind me and I realize that the light had already turned green.

    ...ok. I'm done with that story. But I absolutely love yours! ^^ I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From MichiTheThird on February 05, 2008
    Aww, poor Naruto.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 05, 2008
    great chapter
    update
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  • From ANON - DarkSin on February 05, 2008
    man i love all your fics! I keep telling my friend at work about them, lol she loves yaoi but doesn't get on the net much. Can't wait to read more. I LOVE YOU XD!! lol

    P.S.
    When are you putting up Dreams of Fire? TSOD is my favorite fic!
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  • From lexjamandme on February 05, 2008
    Jealousy is such an ugly emotion... I know! But, I want to grow up and be you... is that bad?
    Awesome last few chapters. I don't know how I missed then, but I loved them! Your Kakashi is brilliant. Perfect in every way!
    My favorite line, maybe ever...

    "When you needed lube, I provided. When you needed privacy to molest your boyfriend, I was there to help."

    Priceless... I'm going to laugh all day.
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  • From Jelp on February 05, 2008
    As the plot thickens! Dun dun dun! ^_^ I'm excited to see Orochimaru behind bars for good, and a sort of, but not quite, happily ever after. I'm usually not a big fan of this pairing, but for some reason, I can see this fic having a side Sakura/Ino pairing. I guess it's just me feeling bad for Sakura since I know she gets jipped in a lot of fics, mine included.

    Great fic (as I think I've told you before), and as always I look forward to each update! ~ Jelp
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  • From suzannecmc on February 05, 2008
    You give great research!:)
    I'm married to a cop so I know when it rings true and when to laugh my ass off!
    Ahh the joy of gathering evidence.

    Kakashi and Ebisu are a hoot - Ilove them!

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  • From roro237 on February 05, 2008
    Z!! This detecive story is great. I'm glued to my seat reading and putting clues together on the case:) I couldn't remember what cases Sasuke was working on I'll be going back to refreashing my memior on the details:) This is what I love about your stories. Their put together like a novel. The story line is just as hot as the sex ^_^
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  • From ANON - Davey Lockhart on February 04, 2008
    Awesome story.
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  • From Raina on February 01, 2008
    Aw poor Naruto and Ino. He's all battered and bruised physically and she is battered and bruised mentally. :( It's so cute that Naruto is so protective and he disregards his own injuries to be at Ino's side. It sucks that he is unable to see Sasuke, but knowing them I am sure they will be able to work something out. I really hope that the FBI can keep everyone safe.

    Well there was no evil cliffy this time but now I am so... I can't think of the word. Now I have no idea where this is going, it's so hard for me to predict anything. I like that. :)

    I look forward to your next update.
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  • From Kimra on January 31, 2008
    :D
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  • From snnj11220 on January 30, 2008
    If it helps I think Ebisu is a fucking idiot as well as Kakashi and who knows who else. It is my instinct for Naruto not to trust the FBI because there could be spies there, but also because they are seeming to make light of the situation. Like Naruto is going to help them build the testimony up and the evidence then he testifies and everything will be everything, but hello even witnesses in the witness protection program can be gotten too and Orochimaru is powerful. And while Ino needs therapy she also needs Naruto he has been her pillar of strength throughout this ordeal.
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