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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From LadyRonin on September 03, 2007
    that was one great chapter. sasuke is so nasty i am apalled and i loved it. i can't wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 03, 2007
    Those two are going at it like rabbits! Why hasn't the effect of the stuff Karin gave Naruto warn off yet? And what about the Kyuubi? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From PieldeLava on September 03, 2007
    Wow, I really enjoy reading your fic. It hard to keep Naruto and Sasuke in character but you have done that. Can't wait to read what happens next. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From hisoka on September 03, 2007
    YOU CAN AND CANT CALL THEM EABITIONISTS,THEY DIDNT KNOW THEY HAS COMPANY BUT IT WAS A PUBLIC PLACE WASNT IT.KEEP IT UP IT ONLY GETS BETTER
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  • From gaara89 on September 03, 2007
    Don't worry! It was worth the wait! I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Crimson Kitsune on August 30, 2007
    Veeeeeery good, everything is going well, I like this fic alot. I also have some ideas for you if you don't mind? I think Sasuke should run up against some sort of delema later, like his brother manages to get Naruto from him, and removes Kyuubi from him, thus killing him. But he learns he has two ways to revive Naruto and save him, 1) Find the forbidden Jutsu, that was used to save Gaara, and I think Karin should have a stroke of compassion and take his place. or 2) Replace Kyuubui back in Naruto, but this will also have a risk, he will have a 50% of it being Kyuubi that will be the conscience personality.
    So use it, don't it's up to you, keep up the good work, I'm really enjoying this. AND UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - LilBlackCat on August 26, 2007
    I've always enjoyed your stories. I've reread a lot of them at times but this one is the best! I absolutely LOVE this story and I hope you would be able to update *hint hint* soon? ^^ sorry for being impatient but I really can't wait to see what will happen next! Much love to you for writing such a wonderful piece of writing!!
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  • From ANON - Cinderelly on August 26, 2007
    I love your writting. I cannot wait to see where you go with this story.
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  • From Chria on August 22, 2007
    OMG! I had to stop reading several times because I kept going 'Did Sasuke just say that?' 'Did that just happen!?' This is very original plot that you have here. SmartassNaruto is constantly making me die of laughter because he really would say everything so crude and blunt like 'I never said I wanted anything that involved your dick up my ass!' 'Oh man, I'm going to vomit. I'm not sticking my tongue up your ass so forget!' I DIED! LOL Then we have PervertSasuke and wow, the stuff he says makes me blush. He is straight up addicted to fucking Naruto. I love how his world is crashing down around him because of it. It's a sweet revenge! Can't wait to see more of Naruto's friends try to get him back and god, how embarrassing it would be when they find out. *falls out of chair* Ok....ok.....please continue because I love this!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on August 21, 2007
    naughty lil sas twisting naruto's wish to suit his own advantage lol Naruto was just so cute trying to convince sas not to sex him up while they traveling, sasuke is such a horny little thing in this "i dont see why not" lol, i love it!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on August 21, 2007
    I'm glad that Naruto has accepted his new bond with Sasuke and that the two of them are getting along better. The lemon was so hot!!! :)
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  • From UzumakiLover on August 21, 2007
    Oh wow...naruto and his promise. Though I thought it was funny, every time Sasuke had to remind Naruto of his promise. it was so cute, like he was begging for it or something. I guess Sasuke's just afarid that once his brother is dead Naruto will leave, its nice he wants something else to hang on to.
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  • From Rosebud on August 21, 2007
    I was soooooo happy when I seen that you updated this story. This has to be one of my favorites. ^^

    And as far as this chapter goes...I LOVED it! The interaction between everyone was really good and Naruto riding Sasuke is just HOT! Keep it up and PLEASE update soon! I can't wait to read more! XD
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  • From ANON - fangirl on August 21, 2007
    Very interesting...and deliciously smutty =) Looking forward to more. Naruto seems a bit too shy about talking about sex...I mean, this is the kid who at 12 was turning into naked women, so come on... I wonder when the most surprising ninja will decide to turn it around a little and start dominating Sasuke back. That'll be fun to watch. Update soon!
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  • From Finnel on August 21, 2007
    lol! I want one of those yukata's!!!!
    ((better yet i could make one!))
    Ah, the memorys of kid sitting... ~shudders~
    again a good chapter, i love the interaction between suigetsu and karin! more from the water-boy would be loved!!!
    Awww you just have to love how totally innocent naruto can be! ~glomps the blond~
    keep up the good work!
    ja ne!
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