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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From blueh on September 09, 2007
    Definite good! So hot!! Sex in the onsen! *droolz* I love the way Sasuke talks dirty. Hehe.. Keep updating.
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  • From roely on September 08, 2007
    i love your story! hope you update soon!
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on September 08, 2007
    aahhh have i told you that i love you???? if i haven't just know that i sooooo do! (creepy as you may find that lol)
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  • From leanne on September 06, 2007
    I really like it a great deal. But somehow the love scenes feel very luke warm and controlled, but then Sasuke and Naruto both seem to be virgins in their own seperate way and are both finding the path to passion. At lease Sasuke is starting to seem very passionate for his dobe even though I don't think he's realized what he feels is love for Naruto but then I think that's your plan to keep those secret words like love from their bonding until towards the end and when that happens it will totally be mind blowing for both of them I think. :)

    Next chapter please.
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 04, 2007
    That was so hot!!! I just love the lemons you write!!! :)
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on September 04, 2007
    Love it...
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  • From ANON - ebibi on September 04, 2007
    This whole fic is *awesome* seriously that Sasuke he's a sly one but from what you wrote it's obvious that they both care for each other. Naruto is so sweet he just loves it when Sasuke pleases him. He's very coy, he tells Sasuke to stop and "it hurts" but really he's egging Sasuke on and I bet sasuke knows this since he's a genious. Those lemon scenes are ¢¾¢¾¢¾ and having team Hebi to witness iy made me laugh I have a feeling Karin will adore Naruto now even dress him up to se another SasuNaru scene.
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  • From UzumakiLover on September 04, 2007
    Man...well Sasuke did the nasty...the reallllllllll nasty lol. Is it just me or is this whole bond thing Sasuke keeps squaking about a bit overrated. I mean it sounds more like fuck buddies to me...after all Sasuke said he still saw Naruto as a dear friend...and they fuck....every-night (hooraw on that part!) but i mean does he feel anything other than that? Does Naruto? If I didn't know any better I'd say Naruto was just doing because he promised he would...cause nine times out of ten he doesn't really wanna. Though...if my butt was getting rammed everything night i'd want a break too...poor lamb...any whore (heh) I enjoyed this chapter and look forward to what comes next..cookie for you!
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  • From Rosebud on September 04, 2007
    WOw! I loved it!
    lol the three of them were watching. That was awesome! ^^
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  • From ANON - Crimson Kitsune on September 04, 2007
    YAY AND UPDATE! No I don't mind if you hang onto those, by all means go ahead.
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  • From ANON - lilblacknitecat on September 04, 2007
    OMG! yeaaa! as excepted you once again have deliver a very hot smexy chapter of SasNaru goodness ^0^ I was thinking what kind of new position (pun intended) Naruto would force into but lol this time it's more like a place eh? ^.~ And Karin being a closeted yaoi fan just made me laughed LOL who wouldn't be after witnessing Naruto and Sasuke going at it like rabbits? *faints
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  • From ANON - lo on September 03, 2007
    I like the way you do your sex scenes, they are actually really sexy and I never get bored. I think that not only is the story well done and you really get a feel for the characters but I feel you are not using that same tired formula that sooooo many people use and not very well. Anyway nice job.
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  • From anapana83 on September 03, 2007
    Yay update! Anyway, yeah...its ironic. I took a cold shower before i logged on and caught this update....Now it looks like i might need to take another one lol. Anyway that update was HAWT as usual. I kinda felt bad for Sakura there, being worried for Naruto but it'll work out right? Team Hebi really must've enjoyed that show, hehe. I would've'! :) Update soon.
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  • From ForgottenPrincess on September 03, 2007
    cool i love things that expand my vocab. and you just did and what a nice sounding word. and what a hot sexy lemon...drool i feel envy i wish i was there to watch that happening. I usually read this on mm.org but i saw you had updated when i was here and could not resist. Can't wait for a new chapter as you can see i am greedy.
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  • From Chria on September 03, 2007
    Another awesome chapter. Much love~ That really seems like Sasuke to go on a total power trip while having sex with Naruto. Damn, Sasuke does shocking things in each chapter, and I'm eager for more of his perversion. LOL Naruto's reluctance is highly amusing. I would like you to dragging it out more before he gives in and when he does....I want him to be on top! HA, that'll teach Sasuke! I think it would be nice for Naruto to get 'some' of his pride back. I mean, he never really had a choice in this bond. I'm sure he loves it but it would piss me off that if was manipulated into it. Plus, revenge is sweet.
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