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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - Damp on September 19, 2007
    "Where you stand? From what I've noticed you don't do much standing blondie."

    I just about DIED laughing right then and there. That was so funny, my nephew is still looking at me funny. . . .

    -Damp *I applaud you for your funniness.*
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  • From LadyRonin on September 19, 2007
    i now think that there is a freaky thing going on. i just reread trial (i'm dana by the way) and clicked on plans of hebi and boom ther was an update. i had totally forgotten about this blazin story and for that i have to apoligize. i love the sasuke in this story he has all the jealous,possesive, murderous intent of a serial killer. i also loved how you had them having sex to burn off the medicine and help bring back kyuubi's chakra. i'm surprised that you didn't make him more of a pervert but it is possible that it could happen later (one could hope). not that i'm not loving the story the way it is but are you going to mpreg this like trial. are any of the other members going to pair up with any of the konoha ninjas. i can't wait til you update and see how everything is going to turn out especially the confrontation between itachi and sasuke (two smexy bad ass brothers but not together). i don't like uchihacest.
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  • From leanne on September 19, 2007
    hot, warm and sexy and just so darling! and funny a very likable chapter.
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  • From hisoka on September 19, 2007
    SO ITACHI FOUND THEM BEFORE KAKASHI,SAKURA,AND SAI COULD(AND KIBA SHINO AND...WHO ELSE?)I WANNA SEE SAKURAS REACTION TO NARUTO AND SASUKE BEING LOVERS THATLL BE FUN,WHATS JUUGO SUIGETSU AND KARIN GONNA DO AFTER ITACHI
    AND KISAME ARE DEAD?HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS AND WHO IT IS COMING FOR THEM
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  • From ANON - ibibi on September 19, 2007

    This chapter is love. Its amazing characters development,insights as well as confessions and revelations.
    The character interactions are amazing.

    Naruto & Suigetsu : They act like siblings. Naruto mentions that Sasuke is like a brother to him but to me it's love. When Naruto and Suigetsu talked it felt like brothers discussing ones love life and Naruto paying said advice with a favor.


    The people in Konoha must be shocked. I laughed when I read Sakura's thoughts. She's a little closet perv.
    Tsunade was funny on hoe serious she was when she mentioned the report that the only thing in danger is Naruto's butt from the Uchiha .

    Karin was clever as well when instead of speaking outside she bursts in to tell them about Itachi and then leaving with a huge grin on her face. It's funny but when reading your story i imagine Karin and Sakura as being siblings , both closet pervs, annoyed by the guys and serious in their work.

    Naruto's talk with Kyuubi was interesting to say the least. I see foreshadowing.

    Once again Naruto is so sweet in a harsh boyish way. He is insecure about his relationship with Sasuke.
    Sasuke is SO JEALOUS to the point of being sweet.

    I LOVED it when they discuss their feelings for each other and how Sasuke will NEVER betray him awww love. And Naruto is so mischievous wanting Sasuke to tell him that he is irresistible. I feel that their relationship was strength in this chapter.

    I loved this quote "Well he'll be happy to know the only thing I'm going to inject into you from now on his my semen." Sasuke is hilarious what a major perv!!!!!!!!!! I hope they stay together through out the chapters and if Naruto doubts their love Sasuke will show him how wrong he is physically and multiple times ^_^

    Again I loved the ending when Naruto and Sasuke fell down and Sasuke had leaves on his mouth aww thats love.

    i hope these boys become less emotionally challenged.

    Can't wait for the next chapter and I will definitely check out your new story.



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  • From anapana83 on September 19, 2007
    That chap was quite funny, and heart warming all at once. I don't have alot of time to elaborate since i'm at work, but great job! Can't wait for the next chap. :)
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  • From ANON - lilblacknitecat on September 19, 2007
    WAHHH!! Another smexy piece once again! *faint from nose bleed* I love how you are making sure there is action with a bit of other...."action" lol ohhh I can't wait for ch 7 to come out! omg! What will happen next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2007
    I hope Sasuke and Naruto kick Itachi's ass big time. Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From mscs3 on September 18, 2007
    oh I loved this chapter. your sense of humor is as wonderful as always. Looking forward to more. Me
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on September 18, 2007
    P.S. could you give me the address of all the sites you have that original story on? slytherin_whitch@yahoo.com
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 18, 2007
    Awww, Sasuke admitted his feelings for Naruto! That was so sweet! So they will be fighting Itachi before the Leaf ninja find them? Yay! Some action! :)
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on September 18, 2007
    YAAAAAAAAAAY! AN UPDATE! *does happy dance*
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  • From sethian on September 18, 2007
    Absolutely fantastic Slash scene!
    Wow! I loved it, it was really hot! seriouly :D
    I'm looking forward to read to next chapters! Your fic is candy to my imagination!!
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  • From gaara89 on September 18, 2007
    I hope you update soon! I've been waiting for this, it was great!
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  • From Rosebud on September 18, 2007
    Again, you've turned out another brilliant chapter my dear. This story never fails to amaze me. And this chapter...just wow... I loved everything about it. I'm glad that things are better Sasuke and Naruto now and that friendship moment between Naruto and Suigetsu was awesome! (sorry rabid Sui/Naru fan... even if it's only friendship ^^;) But any way, this chapter rocked my socks and I CAN'T wait till the next one. Oh and that end part with Karin and the cursed seal line cracked me up!

    Awesome writing, I can't wait to read more! ^^
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