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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From bluegenjutsu on October 02, 2007
    I'm so glad that Sasuke didn't die!!! Now I wonder how things will go for Naruto and Sasuke back in Konoha. Thanks for the new chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Kitsune13 on September 28, 2007
    that was such a great story!! i loved it please post the next chapter soon. :)
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  • From ANON - DARKON on September 28, 2007
    this is one of the better fics that I have read as of late. I like the way Sasuke and Naruto's relationship has
    matured since the beginning.


    The story is getting very interesting. I think Sasuke and Naruto belong together so I hope everything works out for them.

    PLEASE update soon.

    keep up the good work
    DARKON



    sasuke,
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on September 27, 2007
    Weeeeeeee, I'm so happy you updated, but now I'm sad because I have to wait again. No I did not get that email, my account seems to be acting weird. Try these two, hopfully one will work. kittycat55124@yahoo.com virgogirl_of_85@yahoo.com Oh, and I have a question, what do you think Sasuke would do, if Sakura, or Itachi suddenly became interested in Naruto in a romantic maner, think that possesiveness would kick in?
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  • From chilepie on September 26, 2007
    OMG I found you!! I couldn't find this story to save my life and was kicking my ass for not bookmarking it when I first found it. And look at all the lovely chapters I got to read. It's still a really good story, I'm glad you're not letting the action drop or anything like that.
    The character portrayal is wonderful. Sui is always a riot and Karin just needs to go somewhere and sit down. That little trick was evil. Sasuke and Naruto make me want to hug them both. I love how this story is playing out. But that cliffhanger makes me want to smack you.....but if I do that you won't write anymore lovely stuff for me. So you get to live. *hugs*
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  • From hisoka on September 26, 2007
    CANT NARUTO HEAL SASUKE?IF HE HAD BEEN FAR OFF OR PAYING ATTENTION NON OF THIS WOULD HAVE HAPPENED,BUT GUESS THIS MAKES IT MORE INTERESTING,KAKASHI AND PARTY AND PARTY 2 ARE SO CLOSE.HOPE YOU CAN UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - ibibi on September 25, 2007
    Thanks for the reply dear and the update alert,

    With that said OMG what a chapter. I loved the part when Pakkun gave a past account of Naruto's relentless search for Sasuke even though to humor Naruto a little (Naruto was so emo when he sat in the statue).


    Pakkun's words about the mixed scent and proof of Sasuke's and Naruto's *love juice* and Team Seven's reaction was hysterical, who knew Sai was a sarcastic comedian. Kakashi's insight is very clear and Sai's remark on Naruto's cuteness ha. I like how Sakura is no longer OBSESSED with Sasuke I guess she moved on unlike Naruto and where did that end him up with. A pervy Sasuke!

    I liked how you incorporated the manga's events with this story, Naruto was able to help team Hebi this time with his clones as well as imputing his dream of being Hokage. Jiraiya's comment on tea was funny reminded me of those ladies (and myself) who serve hot/iced tea to guests. Jiraiya's response to Kakashi is refreshing he accepts Naruto and cares for him no matter what. He admits that Naruto is like a grandson to him and that he hopes that Sasuke did not force Naruto.



    Hebi's interactions were interested each one has their own agenda known or unknown though I guess Karin changed hers (a SasuNaru member??). Suigetsu's sword trophies or collection. Ohh burn Kisame insulted Suigetsu (hope Suigetsu shows him that its not true).


    Like the Sasuke and Naruto team dynamics, I loved how Sasuke put his chakra into the clone to save Naruto from Itachi. Sasuke pulled another wave arc, it's de ja vue all over gain.



    This is a big cliffhanger....


    I'm shocked at Sasuke taking makes me think that he now truly loves Naruto or that it was his master plan...... Nevertheless I hope Sasuke lives and he and Naruto love each other in the end.


    Again it was a wonderful chapter and the cliffy of doom (just kidding) will make me wonder what will happen to the boys.
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  • From anapana83 on September 25, 2007
    Yee, yea, I'm a faithful reader and reviewer ^_^. And i'm so glad this chap came out so quickly!

    I'm so glad Jiraiya made his appearance. I'm glad Sasuke's protecting Naruto, but i hope everything won't go too badly, especially what with Naruto doing the defending now. About Sasuke though, his technique is Chidori, not Chodori, unless you are doing this purposely. Anyway, update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 25, 2007
    Itachi and Kisame are in trouble now. Kisame can't beat the other three members of Hebi and Naruto is going fox mode which Itachi has never faced yet, and let's not forget about Sasuke. Those two are so dead! I can't wait to see them get their asses kicked! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - ladywolfTerri on September 25, 2007
    WOOT! Go Naruto-kun!!!!
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  • From Rosebud on September 25, 2007
    Damn, this chapter was good! Keep it up! ^^
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  • From ANON - lo on September 25, 2007
    Nice chapter, full of action, I like!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on September 25, 2007
    Awww, that was sweet how Sasuke protected Naruto! I like how Naruto is going to protect Sasuke back but not try to kill Itachi. It doesn't look like Sasuke will be able to get his revenge this time though.
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  • From ANON - fangirl on September 25, 2007
    I'm glad Naruto seems to be coming into his own now. This is getting better and better, can't wait for more!
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  • From LadyRonin on September 25, 2007
    i really did like the fight scene, you do those pretty well. like the ones in quixotism ( i've reread that a couple of times). i also like your interpretation of jiraiya. many don't see as being the overprotective one seeing as they usually reserve that for the fifth or iruka. the way you add different elements to naruto but keep the core of him is really amazing. that and the fact that you always have a blazin sexy possessive jealous perverted truelly a seme sasuke. i can't wait to see the next chapter because i just know that something spectacular is coming up.
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