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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - ibibi on December 07, 2007
    I'm glad to hear that you are getting better. also it's fine take your time, ones health is more important. Seriously I know how you feel, I get severe migranes almost everyday and its awful. Take care and I know this is a short reply but I'm sick too(we're sicky's).
    Take care and I hope you feel better.
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  • From jbjewel on December 06, 2007
    that kind of sick sucks!! worse comes to worse, try my great-grandma cure. hot chamomile tea with lemon and honey followed by a chaser of brandy. it may not cure you but you don't really care as much. glad you're feeling better and can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From spoon10488 on December 06, 2007
    hope you feel better.
    =)
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  • From Picspixie on December 01, 2007
    hey where'd u go???? u didn't give up on this fic did u? *quivering bottom lip* please don't, i really really like it and want to read more please update
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  • From ANON - Jess on November 24, 2007
    please update soon. i love this story.
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  • From ANON - Damp on October 03, 2007
    Man! I was kinda hoping Naruto and Sasuke and their little outlaw gang would stay out of Konoha for a bit longer. I guess we can't get it all, now can we?

    -Damp *I hope they still get to go at it like bunnies!*
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  • From ANON - ibibi on October 03, 2007
    I'm so glad that there will be a happy ending I was going to keep the Kleenix at hand.

    Aww Jiraiya is becoming a big softy as he ages and Sai as funny as ever with his sarcasm these lines cracked me up:

    "For an old guy he can move." Sai remarked coming up on the Sannin. Smirking back at the youngster Jiraiya pushed himself more. "Less talking and more running boy."

    &

    "This is the most boring fight I've ever seen. At least when Naruto-kun fights there is lots of action." Their artistic ninja teammate voiced. "All their doing is sweating."


    Hmm maybe Sai's pretending to be cold and lacking emotion when in truth he's a funny and amusing person. If he lived in present times he could have a career as a commentator or a shock jock. He reminds me of Suigetsu both annoyingly funny. Seems like the people that Sasuke chose have the same personalities and are the counterparts of Team Kakashi.


    Poor Naruto going through the Mangekyou Sharingan and I was so glad that Sasuke awoke to put that
    shuriken in Itachi's back to help his Naruto . The conversation with the two brothers was a BIG REVELATION. Dundunddun Itachi had a seal!!! Nice way of integrating this into the story it's a perfect explanation as to why Itachi would murder his clan. Sasuke's words of Naruto being his main priority and protecting him unlike his failure with the clan is love. I wonder what will happen to Itachi in Konaha and team Hebi.

    I liked how you implemented a Kishimoto technique when the villain's background is either explained or said to the other party and everyone pause to listen.

    I'm glad that Sakura is no longer a Sasuke stalker ( Naruto took over her occupation) or mean to Naruto. She focuses on her career and do I detect romance between Sai and Sakura (interesting)...

    This line is like Sasuke's confession on his undying love for Naruto:

    "That's why even if I can understand what you went through I can't take the chance of you hurting him. You were even weaker than I was brother, I was under the same influences and I didn't kill anyone to gain my power."

    (ooh burn) seriously Itachi's desire for power and his actions to completely depend on himself let him to his downfall.

    I liked Naruto's reaction of not listening or caring when the others found him, and only focusing on Sasuke. This confirms that Naruto truly loves his Sasuke, hes happy to see the others and all, yet what really matters is that one person that acknowledged him in return when he was young and lonely , everyone else came later.

    I'm so glad Sasuke survived and is this a pervy line? (If it is good!) "Always so demanding aren't you Naruto."

    "I said I wouldn't fight and I'd return with you hand in hand to live out the rest of my time with you . . . ."
    (What a declaration and proposal!!!


    I wonder if Sasuke will heal faster if Naruto promises to be ravished by a healed Sasuke or maybe not. Sasuke will probably get beaten up.

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  • From hisoka on October 02, 2007
    for a sec i thought sasuke was dead,wonder whats gonna happen once he and itachi wake up. also were do karin and suigetsu go?and whatll happen to them and juugo?hope you can update as fast as you did this time if not soon as possible always counts as something ne
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  • From Spindy on October 02, 2007
    gREAT FIC! kEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! UPDATE SOON!!!! SASUxNARU 4EVER!
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  • From LadyRonin on October 02, 2007
    super blazin bombin chapter. if itachi lives are you going to hook him up with someone if so i choose diedara. it would be so slick if he came to the vilage to get his man back. it was also the shit how you made the background and itachi recieve ochimaru's curse seal. since i get the feeling that sakura and ino don't mind naruto and sasuke being together i am wondering if you will have hinata cause a little confusion. not all the time is chosen to be the bad guy (or hating on the smexy man love bitch). i also found it interesting that you chose juugo to return with sasuke instead of sui (so can't spell his name). karen as we both know was never an option and i thank you for that. i also just have to share this one thought that flashed through my mind juugoxitachi (that's all i'm going to say). can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on October 02, 2007
    Very good chapter :star: I hope to read more soon :)
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  • From gaara89 on October 02, 2007
    Very nicely done. I hope you update soon!
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  • From anapana83 on October 02, 2007
    No prob, i'm glad to help! Great job on this chap. The dialogue Sasuke gave before he blacked out was well done and it's nice to see Juugo's going with them. Though he doesn't say much, i find him to be interesting for some reason. I'm eager to see what happens next. Good job. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 02, 2007
    I'm glad that everyone is okay, although I wish that Suigetsu and yes, even Karin, could have came along with every once else. And why the hell did they save Itachi? Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Saiou-chan on October 02, 2007
    IS THAT IT!? WHEN'S THE REST COMING OUT!? Well this was a good read, I needed something like this, I have a cold today, and my head keeps spining. >
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