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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From Halskr on May 08, 2008
    Well considering how the manga is turning out there should be new fodder for your story in regards to Itachi and Sasuke. I really enjoyed the previously written version becuase it was well hot. So, I will wait till see where you go with this one. Thanks for not abandoning it. That would have been sad.
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  • From Mistressswitch on May 08, 2008
    I always liked this story. honestly I say good job in going back and reworking it. If thats what needs to be done then do it. I tend to rework mine many different times before I ever can achieve what I want from them... I still haven't posted any of them for exactly that reason but thats another matter entirely. All I have to say is do what needs to be done not what they want you to do. your entirely right that people don't appreciate the fact that these are free stories written on YOUR personal time and that the author is NOT there to be at their beck and call just cause they're bored. years ago someone special once told me when I was feeling bogged down for just this reason "They're your words so you call the shots. Write for you because it makes you happy and stop trying to cater to everyone else."

    you gave a sound reason for your choice to do this. even if you hadn't its still YOUR choice cause its YOUR story. I think if thats not good enough for some people then that is their problem not yours.

    Thank you for writing this and add to it when you feel its time. I think that those who truly think its good enough will be waiting for it anyways despite all their bitching.
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  • From KyuubiKit on May 08, 2008
    Best of luck...looking forward to the revamp
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  • From Shadowfox3163 on May 08, 2008
    This is so much better written I love it! the smut was way hotter and I like the new depth to the story! Kepp up the good Work!!!!!!!
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  • From Picspixie on May 08, 2008
    ugh does anyone really want this all edited again? i doubt it
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  • From hisoka on April 24, 2008
    so...does he live and whats konoha think about there great uchiha coming back but already being taken?hope you can update soon
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  • From Picspixie on April 23, 2008
    why rewrite existing chapters which are fine, y not just reread ur whole story then work on the new chapter, thats what ppl are waiting for, and i think everyone wouldn't mind a couple grammar mistakes, we just miss this story
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  • From LadyRonin on April 23, 2008
    begging for the unbeta'd chapters. the sad part is now that i know this isn't an update i think i will go read quixotism for comfort. good luck
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  • From ANON - Yaoi-gi-oh on April 23, 2008
    well I love your stories up to now....however why should you redone them? I would write the new chapters and deta-ed after your friend feels better. Re-beta all chapters when the story finishes :)
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  • From ANON - Dhee on March 15, 2008
    when you will update this story, i'm dying here waiting for this story update
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  • From on February 04, 2008
    OMG, this story is AWESOME! It kept me hooked the whole time! Your writing is excellent and the plot addicting! Can't wait to read more! Do you by chance email your readers when you update if they ask? It's ok if you don't, I will just bookmark it and check in from time to time and see if you updated, but if you do that would be great. My email is shadowphoenix143@comcast.net
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  • From Mitamay on January 01, 2008
    I had to read it all before I reviewed, and I love it! I think it was sweet that Sasuke still had feelings for Naurto, even if he did have a rather round-about way of doing it...I offer my condolences, and hope things will look up soon. ^_^ EM
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  • From roro237 on December 27, 2007
    Very sorry for your lost:(
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  • From anapana83 on December 27, 2007
    Sorry to hear whats happened. I hope everything will be alright and that you feel better soon. ^_^
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  • From kati on December 23, 2007
    im so sorry that you have been ill. I hope that you feel better, so take it easy okay? I read chapters 3-8 all in one go... O_O wow my eyes have gone all wierd lol this is really entrancing, i like how IC you made everybody. I wonder what will happen with Itachi and Sasuke back in Konoha? x
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