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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - kms on June 27, 2008
    Great chapter! I love this story. The beginning of this new bond is so sweet. I can't wait for it to grow and grow.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 26, 2008
    Another great chapter! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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  • From Shosuro on June 26, 2008
    love it!!!!
    cant wait for the next chapter1!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on June 24, 2008
    I adore the new rewrites. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - basilika on June 04, 2008
    hmm... More? Hehe.

    Altought this is a SasuNaru fic, you did a great job at picturing other members of team Hebi, I'd even say that you described them better than Sasuke and Naruto , heh. It actually gives an impression the we see SasuNaru relationship, interaction, through the eyes of his comrades - and that's great. You're language is good and easy to follow, so - thumbs up. Good job! ^^
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  • From ANON - ibibi on May 31, 2008
    Had a chance to re-read these two chapters and its refreshing because I had forgotten some of the events. However, aside from that Suigetsu is one of my favorite characters in this story. I thought it was well done that you have written him as an observant person who annoys others to see their true actions. He understood why Sasuke would do that with Naruto but he noticed that Sasuke’s perception had changed by the act rather then when Sasuke was explaining his idea.

    As for Sasuke, he truly understands Naruto's desire for human contact. He does love Naruto. He accepts his personality to the point that he was upset that he had no reaction from Naruto at first but glad later on. He just has a twisted way of showing it that is not straightforward. Naruto his reaction is a psychological one. When he learned of the Kyuubi, he became stronger to prove himself and he was not at the mercy o anyone. He knew what Sasuke was doing to him was wrong, but he was glad in his own way that Sasuke was paying attention to him

    As for Karin, she is hilarious in her love for Sasuke. I remember that later on she is an avid supporter. Too bad, she missed this event.

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  • From ANON - Anon on May 30, 2008
    Sorry you had to start over again, but I like the additions you added to the chapters!! Please continue!!
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  • From alleycat88 on May 30, 2008
    Hahahahaha! Little skank thought she was gonna get some! WRONG!Thanks for updating! I was wondering whether or not you would!
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  • From ANON - Ren421 on May 18, 2008
    This is a really fantastic story, and I've been following it since the beginning. I can't remember if I've ever reviewed before, and if I haven't forgive me. One of my favorites. However, what happened to the other seven chapters? I am looking forward to reading more, hopefully.
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  • From DragonsDancers on May 09, 2008
    i cant wait to see what you do with the rest of the ch
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  • From LadyRonin on May 09, 2008
    sometimes a rewrite in needed in order to make the story flow better. and as horribly as i have reread this story in it's incomplete form i just know that it is going to get even better. the first time you wrote this chapter you didn't have as much of sasuke's thoughts as you do now and i like it. the thought of ssuke having dirty dreams about naruto tripped me out. i look forward to the rewrites and the how they inspire you to finish the story especially since the last time he was dying after having fought itachi and on his way to the village. can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Picspixie on May 08, 2008
    i appologize if i seemed snippy or anything i had a very bad day and seeing this story yet again edited but not updated was the straw that broke my back lol
    the new chapter was written ok , though with any story redone u have that feeling in the back of ur mind that u've read it before and it sounds wrong cause u remember it a different way so it is frustrating plus i kinda wish u could have left the previous chapters up cause it was fun to reread those, they were fine in my opinion
    meh
    good luck with getting through these hopefully quickly and gaining new inspiration to finish this story
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  • From ANON - Sean Wright on May 08, 2008
    Damn it! I hate author's notes, I hate them so much.
    Please excuse my rant, but this is one of my favorite stories and I am fan of your writings on both AFF and FF.Net, so please don't take this as an attack on you, it is more of bane spitting at the cry-babies that your felt you had to placate.

    I understand why you felt that you had go back to rewriting your story and I don't care. My whole problem is the author's note. I mean posting that was like giving your readers false hope about a new chapter being up and that is all your loyal fans want. Forget about the idiots who are ticked because you took your story down, heck you lost your way in the story and needed to find your back so you finish it, anyone who does not understand that has never written anything in their lives beyond what was required of them in life.
    So please, remove the evil AN and forget the whiners. Like anyone who has the same problems with their own stories, I am patiently awaiting your next chapter.

    DEATH TO THE AUTHOR'S NOTE!!! DEATH!

    Wow, this is my first review on AFF. Feel special.

    Later

    Sean
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  • From hisoka on May 08, 2008
    i support you no matter my feelings but i just want to know, will it be a mirror image of the way it was before like the same events happening?
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  • From ANON - DARKON on May 08, 2008
    Thank you for not abanding this fic. I was enjoying this fic the first time around, but it seems that by
    adding more depth you have improved it. Keep up the good work. Ilook forward to future chapters.


    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
    DARKON
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