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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - Tepee712 on May 21, 2007
    This is the third story of yours i'm reading. I cant seem to get enough of your writing style. Looking forward to the next chap. Good work :) !
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  • From anapana83 on May 21, 2007
    littleolmee.........i think I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I've been waiting for a story with Team Hebi in it ever since they appeared! *Sigh* You have just made me day! And what a way to start it off *blushes*. I'm glad you also put that Naruto nearly had 'em. Pls update this soon!
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on May 21, 2007
    Damn, Sasuke is a evil bastard and I love him. I only wish the manga would pair these two up...without the rape, of course. I so love this pairing and can't wait to read more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on May 21, 2007
    oooohhhh mmmmmyyyy gggooooodddd (god)

    Great job, I love it. Mwahahahaha please keep going, you are doing a great job, and I can't wait for the next one :D
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  • From yaoilover07 on May 21, 2007
    I like this I would like to read more about what happens to Sasuke and Naruto after Naruto awakes again.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2007
    Interesting story. Please continue!!
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  • From ANON - Sama on May 21, 2007
    Damn, this was a one-shot? I was gonna say please continue!! OMG I LOVE THIS! That was just a totally awesome, yummy one-shot! I give it two thumbs up and more! Keep up the great!! Can't wait until I see your next update! Ttus! Bye byes!
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  • From Picspixie on May 21, 2007
    wow i really liked that story, seems alittle like something that sasuke might actaully do lol doubt the writers would add that though :P, but the characters seem in character very well, if u do continue this i'll definatley read but even if not it was a very good oneshot :P
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  • From ladywolfTerri on May 21, 2007
    smexy!!... will there be a sequel??.. maybe from Naruto's pov???
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  • From serenagold on May 21, 2007
    Wow. THis is the first Hebi story I think posted on here! :)

    This was pretty good. You got a great handle on the characters. Sasuke sure is an evil fuck. Obtaining Naruto through his emotional weaknesses would gain him not only a strong ali, but the perfect bait to draw out his brother. Too bad its probably not going to work. Mwhahahhaaaaa.

    Great story.
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  • From ANON - ObsidianLace on May 21, 2007
    I shall sum up my enjoyment of this story in one word omgthatwaswonderfulIthinkIloveyou! *cough*

    Seriously though, this was a great story. Something I can see happening.(I know it'll never happen but I can wish) You got the charactors down perfect. If you decide to write other stories along this theme I will no doubt shower them with praise as well.

    (P.S. I feel bad for Karin but I'd have done the same thing to her too.)
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