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Reviews for 'Plans Of Hebi'

By : littleolmee
  • From ANON - isai dice on June 01, 2007
    Oooh, this is juicy! That first chapter did it for me, so I was instantly hooked. I like knowing miss thinks she's so hot Karin got a little wakeup call this chapter! I was laughing my ass off when she realized what Sasuke used to interrogate Naruto. U rock!
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  • From Kimra on May 31, 2007
    Ah silly interaction. I was hoping for more sex but I'm too amused to be disapointed. :D Suigetsu and Karin are funny. :D
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  • From anapana83 on May 31, 2007
    LOL.


    That was so funny man. You know one thing i forgot to point out was how i loved your portrayal or Sui here. You've caught the humor perfectly and i can practically picture the smile on his face lol. Nice job! Update soon.
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  • From pdreamz on May 31, 2007
    Oh. I like this story. I'm looking forward to see what Naruto is going to do. I must be greedy, because that was just too short for me. I want more. Lots more! So stick with it and I'll keep my eye out for an update. Good job.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady sakura on May 31, 2007
    (Jumping around laughing) Hahahahaha! Lol. I so can't stand Karin, so this was a perfect story to read! Hilarious and worth the wait to read. Definitely love this fic.
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  • From hisoka on May 31, 2007
    so...does that karin chick like sasuke?
    updates?
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  • From on May 31, 2007
    Oh fantastic! I've been hoping more and more for someone to write Shippuden arc fanfics, especially with group Hebi! You've got everything in here that I was hoping for. Love the Sasuke/Naruto interaction so far and I'm very excited to see how their relationship plays out. I'll be watching for updates!!
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  • From llyoung on May 31, 2007
    Chapter 2 was so funny. Thank you.
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  • From akume on May 31, 2007
    Serves here right. Maa, she kinda reminds me of Sakura with here know it all persona. Anyway, thanks for the update. Ja ne.
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  • From Finnel on May 31, 2007
    ~squeeks with joy while bouncing around the room to rentrer en soi's jude~
    Yay!!! See! Its much too good to be left as a one-shot! and now it isn't!!! ~grin's manically~
    ~sniggers evily~ poor karin... ~sniggers some more~
    please keep the up-dates coming!
    i look forward to the next chapter!
    luck!
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  • From ladywolfTerri on May 31, 2007
    *LMFAO*.. oh YEAH!!!!... XD... I suddenly love that pointy-toothed guy even more!!.. XD

    now I can't wait to see Naru's POV.. I mean.. come on.. waking up from being drugged with Sasuke's cock in his ass.. (*fangirl drool and squeal*)... uhmmm.. yeah.. had to be something!.. XD
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  • From ANON - willa on May 28, 2007
    Damn, this story is freaking hot! I can't wait to read more, especially with Naruto under Sasuke's control.
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  • From ANON - onobaby on May 23, 2007
    That was gooood! So, I was confused about if this was a one-shot or just a starter chappy. Oh, the possibilities with this group! You could do so much with team "hebi"!
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  • From Finnel on May 22, 2007
    this is brilliant! you cannot leave this as a one-shot!!!!!!!! please no! have mercy, it'd be cruel to all of us!
    ~swoons~ evil sasuke! soooo good!
    i really hope you either continue on with this, or start something like it!
    luck!

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  • From ANON - animehead on May 21, 2007
    That was great! I look forward to more!!
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