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By : hatochan
  • From ShagTag on August 03, 2007
    The Crimson Eagle again!

    n____________n I guess I don't have to tell you how awsome you are ne? I really loved the somewhat...cute isnt the right word, but Im gonna go with that anyway, cute feel of this chapter.

    -the Crimson Eagle
    --aka Orgy-of-Death
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  • From ShagTag on August 03, 2007
    Once again-oh my fucking god.

    *dies*

    the Crimson Eagle
    --aka Orgy-of-Death.
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  • From ShagTag on August 03, 2007
    Please excuse my language but, Holy dear FUCKING god.
    I amost died-that was so fucking sexy. Kya! It was so awsome-the first really good Hardcore yaoi I've read.
    I'll keep on reading, no doubt abou that-and I'll be sure to read your other stuff too.

    d[-.-]b

    the Crimson Eagle.
    --better known as Orgy-of-Death.
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  • From ANON - Anise on August 02, 2007
    I wonder how Genma and Raidou decided who got to play who on the tape, something to ponder later ;)
    I remember when I read the last chapter I thought, 'I don't want to be a fly on the wall I want to be a Genma in the tree' apparently I was right in assuming that there was no way Genma wouldn't want a look and I really can't believe Iruka actually thought that Genma would have the self control not to look, he must know his friend better than that!
    Why oh why can't Kishimoto-san make Naruto movies like that, I don't think I'm going to hold my breath for that to happen, but it was a fun end to the story, really I don't think Iruka had anything to worry about Kakashi got porn staring them-what could be better ^_^

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  • From KansouAme on August 02, 2007
    OMG... I want a copy of that!!! *sigh* oh well.. in since that is not happening.. thanks for the wonderful story. I hope you have it in your heart to somday do another Iruka and Kakashi tale. Kudos to you *hands you a dozen roses*
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  • From llyoung on August 02, 2007
    I wish I could get a copy of that tape too (yeah I know we all wish
    we had a copy). Thanks for writing.
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  • From HumanInfiltrator on August 02, 2007
    Loving the naughtiness!
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  • From Travellyr on July 31, 2007
    oh my GOD this is hot. Hot and funny and HOOOOT... Dominating Iruka just got me by the short hairs. o.o The whole thing, from striptease to end.... It's that time of the month and I don't need painkillers, you wonderful, wonderful lady. XD

    ...the testosterone-laden burping contest was so funny I had to share it with who I was talking to on IM.
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 30, 2007
    always happy to see that you've updated, especially when you come bearing smut hot enough to melt my brain! *pokes brain puddle with stick*
    -and the smut is awesome, so often it seems that sex follows a set formula in fiction, kissing, preparation, sex. now really with these two it's all good but it's nice to see something different and I like that you took your time building up to the sex, makes it even hotter (there's masturbation *fans self*)! i absolutely loved all the teasing and by far the best part was the dirty talk, it was very sexy without coming across as uncaring or demeaning, which i've seen happen.
    -Iruka's thoughts about not topping were sad and at the same time seemed almost ridiculous but completely understandable. Kakashi thinking about the baby was just so sweet and understanding, actually all his inner thoughts were wonderful through the whole story. although you get the feeling that if he was left to his own devices he would happily slip off into his own world filled with fantasies-has anyone ever been that happy about stripping!
    one day i will learn to curve my rambling and leave you with just a one sentence review, but for now let's just say the whole thing was just steamy enough that you needed a cold shower after reading it and i can't wait to read the next thing you post ;)
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  • From KansouAme on July 30, 2007
    oh. my. god. That was soooo good.. so good. wow... *speechless*
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  • From ANON - fyrbyrd on July 30, 2007
    Oh by the Gods, is that puddle on the floor me? Sweet dreams tonight, thank you!
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  • From ANON - luxeflex on July 30, 2007
    yay you updated! ^^ you made my day, your kakairu fics are seriously the best
    too bad there's only gonna be 1 chapter after this, I want more! ^^
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  • From ANON - Anise on July 12, 2007
    *sniffles* well I think that you've broken my heart, I knew he would lose her and it would be sad but I didn't think you would make him suffer so much, although like Kakashi's confession it was probably good that he finally talked and got it out :(
    -as Iruka was talking about Hayate it was nice to see Kakashi start to have little realizations about why Jomei didn't say anything about his health problems. and just how cute were Hayate and Iruka, what a sweet relationship they seemed to have had, giving Hayate up showed a real strength in Iruka to be able to do that (hope that makes sense)
    -I wish I could tell you that you surprised me with Genma being Iruka's first but in all honesty I've sort of thought that from the beginning it would just make sense, someone had to turn him into a sex god! ;) (spank me sensei just made me smile and giggle-other people in the room think I'm nuts!)
    -one last thing would have to be Raidou and Iruka I love this pairing but absolutely no one writes it (makes me wish I could write), it's too bad because I think it would be totally hot. Rai's dubbed voice in the english version is just too sexy, as soon as I heard it I knew he'd be a favourite plus his scars aren't bad either! :)
    it was another wonderful (if sad) chapter although now I think that I'm looking forward to the smex you promised at the end of the chapter it's summertime after all, perfect for frivolous and smexy!

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  • From llyoung on July 12, 2007
    Ok. That made me cry (which isn't a very easy thing to do). Poor Iruka but at least he has Kakashi now.
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  • From tasukigirl on July 12, 2007
    ROFL That was a great chapter. I actually started tearing up on the Jomei part. And yes... I would have been very disappointed if it ended with him dying like that.
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