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By : hatochan
  • From HumanInfiltrator on June 22, 2007
    You are soooo good. This is so intense. Can't wait for the rest. It's interesting that youve made Iruke so experienced, normally he's portrayd as an innocent virgin. It ads a whole new dynamic.
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  • From Gcbella19 on June 21, 2007
    ohhhhhhh this getting good. even though it sounds like iruka is a little slutty, i think it was just his way of trying to find the right one!! man i love this fic and the pic goes so well with the story!!!!! uhhh man i wish i could be a s good as you. your awesome, please update soon!!!!
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  • From llyoung on June 21, 2007
    Loved everything but especially the conversation regarding Kiba and his clan's abilities.
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  • From cynaga on June 17, 2007
    I still love this one. Especially with the words from 'Closer' blended in.
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  • From emp78 on June 16, 2007
    Love it!! Iruka is sooooo sexy! I can't wait to see when Kakashi IS ready for it! LOL. More!!!
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  • From LindyStar on June 16, 2007
    So, I hate being an evil nazi editor, but prostrate means to be lying prone on some surface while prostate is the term for the accessory sex gland. Anywho, I love your writing so much I can't tell you! Tolerant is one of my favorite favorites, and that you continue to write in that arc pleases me to no end. Great job with everything!
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  • From on June 16, 2007
    I LOVE your story sooooooooo much! Its just too HOT!!!!!!!!! Iruka seems like a little naughty slut!
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  • From ANON - Anise on June 15, 2007
    Honestly who doesn't just love Genma, well okay maybe Kakashi isn't thrilled with him for yelling that out, but besides him :)
    And Iruka and Kiba, so hot (and a little disturbing) I wonder how many of the kids had crushes on their sensei, probably more than a couple-who could blame them!
    What a little slut you made Iruka out to be although in true Iruka style, all of them ending as friends. And Kakashi not having bottomed yet because he's not ready (according to Iruka), it makes sense though Kakashi would have to be willing to give up a little for that to happen, although this is Iruka how could he not want to change it up with him! I sense something happening at a later time, or maybe that's just me hoping ;)
    Just yesterday I went to your journal (your girl is beautiful) to see if you had put something there about how your writing was going and here we are today with a new chapter and a fun one at that, it was perfect timing!


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  • From llyoung on June 15, 2007
    "Because he isn't ready for it". I loved it. Great job. Looking forward to the next.
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  • From ANON - rosie on May 31, 2007
    love the plot. the song ive heard is a good choice.
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  • From cynaga on May 21, 2007
    HOT in a 'Queer as Folk' kind of way.
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  • From ANON - sylvir on May 21, 2007
    I loved "Tolerant Intolerance" and I love this one too. On a side note. 'Closer' gets used in a lot of PWP oneshots but this you are one of the only authors who got the name of the song correct.
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  • From manicandyshumway on May 21, 2007
    I think I creamed myself twice.
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  • From ANON - Gcbella on May 21, 2007
    OMG loved it!!!! man you are such a hella good writer. i really hope ther is some mizuki action in this fic, cause i love that shit. total awsome!!!! love Yeah
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