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By : DaLuvInMii
  • From amazingZ on May 21, 2008
    dont edit yourself and get a beta. seems promising but you have past/ present grammatical issues. it'd be great if you had a beta to edit your stuffs.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on May 21, 2008
    I like it so far! I'm sure you'll come up with some awesome rules ^_^ Perhaps one should be don't touch anyone except me, since he is a possessive bastard and all ;-) Anyways update soon.
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on May 20, 2008
    Oooooooh this is interesting although I am still a bit unsure of which Uchiha is Naruto's master and I find Kyuubi interesting and funny already
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  • From ANON - Kathryn Reel on May 20, 2008
    its spelled kyuubi. but you were close.^_^
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  • From Sabriel20 on May 19, 2008
    seems intriguing so far. i can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - riniuchiha on February 18, 2008
    good!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on February 17, 2008
    Good story so far.
    update
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  • From Sabriel20 on February 16, 2008
    Poor Naru, Sasuke's such a meaning. Your character portrayal is really good, though. I can't wait for the next one. I also thought that your descriptions were very expressive in this chapter. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Jien on February 16, 2008
    So cool!! Update soon!!
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  • From LadyWolf on February 16, 2008
    I am very interested in this fic... I can't wait to read more!!!!
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  • From spoon10488 on February 16, 2008
    That was interesting but well... short.
    I can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on February 16, 2008
    Please change the ratings on the story to Non-consent and a few of the other tags. this is much more violent than the tags suggest.
    Thanks
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2008
    Interesting.
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  • From Sabriel20 on February 15, 2008
    I really like this, its very interesting, and there personalities are really realistic. I know others have probably said this, and I know you said you don't write details, but it would really improve your story. I do like the way you write, but the language is so straightforward. The voice you use is interesting and unique. I envy you for that, but I would like to see more details. I hope that I haven't offended. It's my honest opinion though, but considering this is your first yaoi, its very thought out and interesting. That impresses me because I can tell you my first yaoi didn't turn out as well. I look forward to reading more. Oh, I love how you ended the last chapter. Its very suspenseful. I can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ursweetheartless on August 12, 2007
    im intrigued by this, and i like the dynamic you've put naruto and sasuke into. i feel like they're reasonably in character for an AU, which isn't easy.

    i hope we see more soon ^.^
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