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By : DaLuvInMii
  • From Picspixie on May 20, 2007
    hmm sounds like a good story so far, can't wait to read more, hope you update soon, and for the thing naruto has to do thats disobediant i'm thinking he disrespects sasuke in public by maybe mouthing off to him at school in front of his friends or something, but can't wait to see what u'll write
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  • From Stacy on May 20, 2007
    I just love a forceful Sasuke! He can boss me around anytime!!
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  • From noezel7 on May 20, 2007
    I'm a little confused. Is Naruto a sex slave or just a regular slave that Sasuke wants to have sex with? Also, be a little more descriptive, let the reader know what the characters are feeling and what the setting is like. You also might want a beta, they help a lot. Nice concept but you need to take your time.
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  • From Madamdragon on May 20, 2007
    That was kewl. I like how it start's out...I just hope Naruto gives him a scare you know, so Sasuke knows how much he likes him. But update soon please! *eats cookie*
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  • From ANON - Ms. Yaoi 2007 on May 20, 2007
    HHMM, I like it so far. A mistake here and there, but nothing real bad. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter :).
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  • From ANON - Damp on May 20, 2007
    You call that a date?? I demand to see the flowers! XD!! THat's was okay, you just have a few little errors that need to be fixed up a bit. Such as 'ceiling' that's how it's spelled... and you don't capitolize the 'r' in 'stared'. Can't wait for the next bit!!

    -Damp
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  • From ANON - pinkmooncrystal on May 20, 2007
    Cool!! I like this story please update soon
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  • From ANON - Neth on May 20, 2007
    Good beginning but I hope it's just a teaser, because it is really short.
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