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By : havenoclue
  • From on January 20, 2008
    sounds like someone is beating them self up and convincing themselves that they don't deserve happiness. I wonder if Sasuke realizes that he's hurting Naruto more by not doing all these little things that end up meaning so much.
    Your writing was great, It was easy to get caught up in all the conflicting emotions.
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  • From ANON - anon on January 05, 2008
    this is one great fic. i love the drama and plot, poor sasuke he can't accept his love for naruto and it was making me so impatient for the eventual break down and fuck lol. plz sasunaru!!! naruto as uke is what i crave lol! you are a great author! update soon plz?
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  • From RiddleMeYellow on January 03, 2008
    Wowzerz! That was one heck of a chapter, very well done. The plot is so cute and angsty, everything I look for in a fic.
    Awe, poor Naruto waking up to the butt head Sasuke XD How confusing would that be?! So much drama...anyways, please keep up the wonderful work and amazingly short update periods
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  • From nekochannya on January 01, 2008
    chapter is intense and beautifully done... sexy, hot and rewarding...
    my problem with it are the shifting verb tenses... sometimes I had to reread a paragraph to understand who was doing what or to whom because the verb tense was pointing somewhere else than the rest of the action... that was it. The action? beautiful... I liked it a lot. If you are able to smooth out the verb-tense problem it will be just perfect! ^.^
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  • From bluegenjutsu on January 01, 2008
    Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm glad that Naruto was persistent and didn't let Sasuke drive him away. Naruto's stubbornness will come in handy to break down Sasuke's defenses. Love how you are writing this! :)
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  • From Jien on January 01, 2008
    Update soon, the story's getting heated!!
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  • From kati on December 23, 2007
    PEPPERONI AND GREEN PEPPERS, OLIVES, CHIVES.

    XD

    Sasuke is such an arse. He needs THERAPY. So, he thinks that Naruto is sleeping around with other dudes... Or perhaps he thinks that Naruto is not nearly as affected by their "break-up" as he is, and he himself is hurt. That makes sense cause Sasuke (being emotionally stunted and all) always lashed out rather than dealing with his problems in a more...human...way (y'know, rather than the typical physcotic and unnecessarily violent way. ^^ ). Anyway, I am very impressed with your fast updates. Please keep up the excellent work! Chuu
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  • From minaaaaaaaa on December 22, 2007
    as the disaster continues. sasuke's an asshole. nuff said.
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  • From Jelp on December 22, 2007
    Awwww. I like how Sakura came to Naruto's defense. I hope Sasuke finally gets some sense knocked in to him, and stops acting like such a jerk. lol Update again soon please. ~ Jelp
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  • From ringpop on December 22, 2007
    Oh! So good! You gotta write the next chapter & post it hun!
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  • From KinOfDragons on December 21, 2007
    GAH! Stupid Sasuke's being an emo-tard! >=( He just needs to stfu and LOVE ON THE FREAKIN' BLONDE! Fo' sho.
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  • From inumoon3 on December 21, 2007
    Go Sakura-chan! Someone needs to kick Sasuke's ass!!! Well can't wait til the update! Hope Naru-chan and Sasuke make up soon!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on December 21, 2007
    Yay, Sakura came to Naruto's defense!! Sasuke sure is stupid!! He needs to figure out what he really wants. Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From sethian on December 21, 2007
    I'm proud of Sakura for standing up to him like that ! :o)
    I like your fic! I hope you're intended to put more chapters to it!
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  • From kati on December 17, 2007
    XD I thought that they were serious! lol I'm so gullible. Sasuke always has to make things ten times harder than they have to be, doesn't he? Such an emo-lid, he is. (>< Like my Yoda-speak, do you?) Hmmm... I think that Naruto would be better off with Gaara, whaddaya say, Sasuke-plushie? (Sasuke plushie spontaeneously combusts). O_O ....Maybe not.
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