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Reviews for A Veil of Starlight

By : chaoticglory
  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 30, 2008
    P.S. It's SO hard To Find Such A Canon pairing!I Loved It And I,Preferably,Love Any Guy With Her...But Kiba And Naruto And Shino And Neji And Shikamaru *Anyone left* Are My Faves,In That Order. =D
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  • From JadedGothButterfly on July 30, 2008
    I Was Astounded To Read A Non-Yaoi/Non- Yuri Fic But...Well,I Guess My Luck Didn't Last.I Might Not Be A Yaoi/Yuri Fan But Your Fic Was Delicious.

    The Intro's First Three paras Were Amazing...So...Evocatively Put.

    ...And Naruto Was Such A Sweetheart In This!

    Keep 'em Coming!Esp. The Hinata Ones...I'll Be Looking Forward For Some HinaxShika Fics,If It Possible.I Love Your Style.
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  • From ANON - Ero-Bontenmaru on April 23, 2008
    You wrote a very, very great piece. I loved how you combined smut and feelings. And also you kept the OOCness to an accepteble level.
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  • From ANON - Cyraxr on July 04, 2007
    Normally I don't like the two guys and a girl stories but this one was done well and was a fun read. I like how you use the Sexy Jutsu to make Kiba more at ease with the outcome. Signed a fan of Hinata, Kurenai, Temari.
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  • From ANON - Julian on May 30, 2007
    Email: SpankMonkey1_69@hotmail.com

    THis was definitely one of the best Kiba/Hinata/Naruto(Naruko?) stories on this site. FOr sure. I always have such a hard time finding a story about the three of them, but this gem makes it all worth while, I gotta tell ya. I just wish the show's Hinata could be as forward as your story's counterpart of her is. Who knows? Maybe someday the canon Hinata could be? (drools at the thought of canon Kiba/Hinata/Naruto).

    So yes. I thouroughly enjoyed this fic, and the pairing even more so. And the ending? Killed me. Naruko was definitely a great idea. I don't think it was from the show was it? I'm leaning more towards your ingenious mind created the name so I'll just stick with that. Hope to read some more of your stories soon, maybe even a sequel if you get good inspiration for it. And congrats on pretty much no mistakes with the grammer and spelling and all that jazz. Very professional.

    Take care and good night (although for me at 2:03 a.m, its good morning). Bye.
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  • From ANON - noneee on May 14, 2007
    Story? No, not really.
    Some good smut? Definitely XD

    I didn't like how it almost felt like rape at times though :S
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